A quick one I did in response to a specific request. In this one, Barbara is desperate for a baby. When the [somewhat unorthodox!] methods in a clinic fail, Barbara's nurse offers an alternative.
OK, there's a clichΓ©d racial stereotype involved, but I did manage to convince the person who requested the piece that we could steer away from any wimpy, cuckold husband/boyfriend β hence Barbara is single.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy the piece. I'm going to submit it via Fetish as opposed to Loving Wives (eek!) or Interracial; I think the main theme of 'breeding' might be more appropriate, and better received, that way. As ever, there will very probably be errors and typos in the piece β I can never seem to iron all the glitches out since I self-edit and am invariably 'blind' to my own fuck-ups. If you do spot any glitches please let me know so I can amend the original.
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I hope you enjoy the piece.
GA β Langkawi, Malaysia β 22nd of December 2012.
Barbara Sadler knew immediately that the planting had been a waste of time. The donor had barely even looked at her. Not that she expected murmurs of endearment or an intense, smouldering gaze professing eternal love, but since he'd put his dick inside her and ejaculated he could have at least smiled.
The mechanics may have been performed correctly but Barbara knew even as the man withdrew his oozing penis that nothing would come of it.
The nurse, pretty, flame-haired Genevieve, present throughout the ordeal, cast a look of empathy towards Barbara after the donor had silently dressed and, still avoiding eye contact, left the room. "What a wanker," she said, rolling her eyes.
That remark cleared the leaden atmosphere like a thunderstorm during a heavy summer heat wave and Barbara snorted a laugh. "Literally, Geni," she replied. "I thought he'd never stop pulling himself. It was like he didn't want to put it in."
"It sure took him a long time to ... get there," Geni replied. She shrugged. "I've never seen him before. Maybe he's new and a bit nervous."
"He seemed OK at the counselling session during the selection interview. But of course I'm not allowed to ask about his personal life, I don't even know his name, as you know the interview is meant to break the ice so-to-speak, before the actual appointment. But don't the donors all get mentored?" Barbara asked. "To prepare them for what they're expected to do? For when they perform?"
Geni shrugged again and handed Barbara her clothes. "There's only so far mentoring can go," she responded, automatically defending the clinic's reputation. "It's up to the donors themselves on the day." Tilting her head to one side, Geni paused in the task of stripping down the bed. "And the process β the planting β is so intimate, I suppose some blokes don't handle it too well. I reckon it must be difficult," she added, "to just walk into a cubicle, get hard and excited enough to ejaculate and then at the final second stick your penis into a virtual stranger's body. Cold and impersonal. Give me raw passion any day." Then, Geni, realising her remark could be misconstrued and that Barbara might find it a criticism of her choice to conceive by the clinic's methods, she added, "I'm sorry, Barbara, that sounded a bit flip."
"No, I understand what you mean, Geni. And I suppose you're right." Barbara sighed as she slid her underwear up her legs. "But from where I'm standing it looks to me as though he's got the easy part. All he's got to do is come inside me. For God's sake, I'm the one who has to carry all the emotional baggage. I just want a baby. If this doesn't work I don't know what I'll do. It might be time to accept that it probably won't ever happen for me."
While Barbara finished dressing, Geni considered the woman's plight. She liked Barbara, liked her a lot. And the woman had been through it, all the stages: the counselling and all the probing questions, the failed attempts at insemination using the good old 'turkey baster' method. Then, when that hadn't been successful after half-a-dozen tries Barbara had finally opted for the planting, a highly invasive, extremely personal process that involved the donor manually manipulating his penis β masturbating basically β until ejaculation was imminent. When the donor was close to the point of no return, with the recipient wide-legged and accommodating, the donor penetrated her in the natural fashion and let loose inside her. A tricky process since any movement after penetration was frowned upon. It couldn't be allowed for the donor to engender any friction during the brief, impersonal coupling lest it be seen as an attempt at intercourse proper. It was one of Geni's responsibilities to ensure that the recipient was happy with the process and that the donor hadn't been too enthusiastic.
"Hey," Geni said kindly as she rubbed a hand along Barbara's arm. "It'll happen for you."
Tears glistened in Barbara's eyes. She shook her head, sniffing and then cuffing a sleeve across her face. "I don't think it's worked this time," she mumbled. "It just didn't feel right. Oh, Geni, it's all getting too much. I'm thirty-eight now, how much time do I have? And the cost ... I can't afford this anymore."
"If it hasn't worked," Geni said, quickly reaching a decision. She grabbed Barbara's upper arm. "I want you to ring me. I'll give you my mobile number."
"Why?" Barbara asked. "I don't understand."
"I ... I know someone," the girl replied. "And I want to help you, Barbara. But you've got to understand that I could lose my job over this. If anyone found out ..."
Barbara wiped her eyes again. She looked at Geni for a long, drawn out moment. "Who?" she asked, voice quavering, "who is it?"
"His name's Samson," Geni replied. She shook her head. "But I don't want to go into all that right now. Let's just say that he's never missed yet. I don't offer him up to just anyone, Barbara, and like I said I could get the sack for doing it, but Samson has done this seven times so far and never missed. He's one hundred percent."
Who?" Barbara asked, Biblical images of long-haired strong men and toppling pillars springing to mind. "Samson?"
"Samson," Geni replied. "He's ..." A sly expression flickered across Geni's pretty face. "... No, we can't talk about it now. There's another appointment due in a minute and I've got to work. But if today's planting fails, phone me." Geni scribbled a number into Barbara's address book.
"Samson," Barbara murmured to herself. Her stomach flipped with the possibility that if this planting didn't take, then she had another chance.
Geni nodded with and oddly lascivious grin and a wink. "And he never misses."
***
Barbara saw Geni sitting at a table tucked away in a corner of the long bar of the Three Feathers pub. She waved to the nurse and then, when she looked directly at the man sitting opposite the pretty redhead, Barbara felt a visceral pull between her legs. The man was absolutely gorgeous: high, chiselled cheekbones, twinkling eyes full of charm and mischief, long dreadlocks swinging when he laughed at something Geni had said.
Oh God ... Was that ...? Could it be ...? Was the beautiful black man Samson?
Barbara's insides clenched with yearning again.
"Hello," Geni mouthed, waving and smiling across the room.