This is my first work of erotic fiction. I would love feedback, criticisms, and ideas for part II. Also, this is fiction, Jack and Kat live in a world without STDs and other diseases, you don't, be clean and be safe.
It was Friday evening and as per my weekly ritual, I put on a clean pair of jeans and a button down shirt and made my way over to Abel's, the neighborhood dive bar. As I entered I glanced around the room, waved to the usuals and took a seat at the bar next to a girl I've never seen before. I sat down and ordered a Labatt. As the bar tender grabbed a glass and began to fill it, I turned to the new girl and said "I'm Jack and I don't reckon we've met". She turned and looked me directly in the eyes smiling. She had big beautiful blue eyes and a bright smile, her face showed confidence and determination. She was a bit on the heavier side, with big boobs poking out from under her low cut shirt; I consider myself more of an ass man, but I couldn't help staring at her chest, the perfect amount of cleavage showing, enough to completely engross my attention but at the same time not overly revealing.
She reached out her hand lightly grasping mine and shaking it as she responded, "It's my first time here, and I'm Kat". Her voice was high pitch and mild, she sounded like a 7 year old, but from the looks of her she was probably late 20's. She was wearing a short skirt with horizontal stripes and no underwear, but I certainly didn't know that then. Her feet were clad in brown leather boots that came up to her calves with long purple socks on underneath.
"So what brings you to the area?" I asked as I took the first sips of my beer.
"Fun, adventure, a good time" she coyly responded. Her answer surprised me, Binghamton is not the sort of place someone goes for fun and adventure, it's a small mundane city in the Southern Tier of NY, and not the sort of place one goes looking for excitement.
We continued chatting, mostly small talk, nothing too exciting. We both finished our drinks at the same time so I asked, "What are you thirsty for? This one's on me." She leaned in to me, pressing her firm breasts against my chest and her right cheek brushed up against mine "your cum" she said, without the slightest hesitation or sign of nervousness as if she had done this a thousand times before. I was surprised and taken off guard, "ummm" I stuttered, my tongue twisted into a knot, what was I suppose to say. Her right hand reached out and gently rubbed my hardening cock through my jeans as she responded "Let's go, I want my drink". She grabbed my hand and pulled as I hopped to my feet. I pushed our way through the crowd and out the door "My place is just around the corner". "Great" she responded, "Let's go".
We wasted no time, hurrying back to my apartment as soon as the door closed she grabbed my chest pushing me back into the door and then ripping my shirt open spraying buttons everywhere. She kissed my hairy chests as she rubbed her hands over my muscular shoulders. I couldn't believe it, I'd always been such a dominant guy, but here I was being pushed around and controlled by a girl half my size with the voice of a kindergartener. She was so hot, confident and aggressive, I couldn't wait to see and especially feel what she'd do next. Her hands continued down to my chest, with one hand she pinched my left nipple as she sucked my right nipple into her mouth. She bit down causing me to squeal with pleasure and pain, just like I had done to so many girls before. She switched sides, swirling her tongue around my right nipple as she pinched my left nipple.
I leaned back into the door and closed my eyes; I was powerless before her. She had taken complete control of me, I would have done anything she wanted and she hadn't even touched my cock yet. She licked her way down my chest, across my abs lowering herself until she was kneeling before me. Here she was this sexual goddess on her knees before me, for a moment, I thought that the ball had shifted back to my court, I thought I was in control. I had made so many girls kneel before me and suck my cock, I finally knew what was going on, I thought. She looked up at me smiling with those big blue eyes shining at me. "Let's see what you've got. Pull down your pants." I immediately complied, I don't know why I had thought I was in control, I might have been towering over her, but Kat was giving the orders. "Mmmm, nice" she moaned while smiling up at me. "Stroke it, for me slut" she ordered me again. I reached down and grasped my cock with my left hand, gently stroking it. I don't have the biggest dick, but at 6.5 inches hard, I'm quite content with my endowment. My dick has a slight curve to the left, maybe from jerking off too much with my left hand in my youth. My pubes and balls are neatly trimmed but still form a thick bush; masculine but clean.
She leaned in between my legs and began kissing my inner thighs. I didn't care who was in control, I knew what was coming and I wanted it so bad, I was like a zebra begging the lioness to consume me. Kat kissed her way up my legs to my scrotum. She gently nibbled on my ball sack as her hand grabbed my cock by the head. It was the first time I felt her warm touch on my cock and I was in heaven. She slid her hand up and down my hard shaft. It was more of a teasing motion then jerking me off and I wanted more. She opened her mouth wide and sucked my balls into her mouth. Her tongue worked magic on my balls as I moaned in pleasure. She released my balls from her mouth and kissed the tip of my cock, the whole time seductively sliding her hand up and down my shaft.