Palau Palsu: Love For Sale
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Author's Note: This story started out with a fairly simple premise -- my version of something like eroticstoryspinner's "Penal Slaves" stories, which appear to be set in an alternate-history version of the modern US, one where it's accepted and normal that criminal sentences entail not just imprisonment but sexual slavery.
A big part of the appeal of these stories, for me, is the fun house mirror aspect -- it
is
accepted and normal to everyone involved, from the judicial system and police to the prisoners themselves and society at large, and that matter-of-fact acceptance is a constant low-key reminder that Things Are Different Here. At the same time, everything else in that setting is
so
similar to our own that it's hard to see how and why things are so different -- no real explanation is given, it just
is
. How did we get there?
I wanted to explore that aspect, in a setting outside the US. So: 'Palau Palsu'. And had a very simple idea for the first story set there: how would man raised in (more or less) our current society handle it if his foreign-born fiance returns to her home country and commits a crime there?
Along the way, the idea mutated and grew, and I realized the story I wanted to tell was considerably different than the original, rather straightforward premise, and bigger. And considerably kinkier (well, this
is
Literotica, after all). Not to mention exceedingly hard to classify into a single neat category.
Me? I think of it as an
extremely
oddball love story, but it could plausibly go into half the categories that Literotica offers -- though many are relatively minor components, it's got elements of: Anal, First Time, NonConsent/Reluctance, Exhibitionist & Voyeur, Interracial Love, Loving Wives, Romance, BDSM, Erotic Couplings, Fetish, Group Sex, Lesbian Sex, and Mature. I don't
think
I missed anything. Probably. Fortunately, there was an easy out: even after ruthless pruning of scenes and side plots, at over 77,000 words the story fit neatly into Novels and Novellas.
Welcome to Palau Palsu. I enjoyed creating it. I hope you enjoy it, too.
Javahead
Palau Palsu: Love for Sale
Chapter 1
"Your prison system sounds like a throwback to the past. Forced labor. Almost slavery."
"Oh? And the US system is so much better? We have a lower percentage of our people in prison, a lower recidivism rate, and a much lower cost per prisoner. What's wrong with making prisoners work to support themselves? Even if they have to work harder than they like, why should they live without working? The people outside prison paying taxes certainly don't -- some of the poorest even sign an indenture for a few years to build a nest egg. We just make prisoners do the same."
Lena got impassioned sometimes when she was talking about her country. I think part of it was defensive; she's very proud of Palau Palsu and was offended to learn that most people she encountered -- those that had heard of it at all -- thought of it as a primitive backwater.
That's how we'd met. Even if we were on the same campus, in the normal run of things we'd never have had reason to know each other -- it's not as if Engineering graduate students and Poly Sci undergrads share a lot of classes. I was a good six years older, to boot -- I'd done an enlisted tour in the Army to help finance college.
But I'd been short-cutting across campus and overheard an attractive woman telling -- lecturing, really -- a handful of people about her country. It sounded interesting. That, and I was intrigued by the intensity of the woman telling the story. So I joined the group listening -- it was obvious that she was very proud of her country and rather appalled at how little most Americans seemed to know about it.
When she challenged us to tell what we knew, I'd done better than most: I'd remembered that Palau Palsu was an island, but had thought it was part of Malaysia. She'd reluctantly admitted that was a "reasonable guess" -- it had once been a British protectorate, after all, a semi-independent part of the British Straits Settlements-- but like Brunei and Singapore, it had gone its own way rather than becoming part of Malaysia.
I'll admit that asking her to tell me more over coffee was because I was intrigued by her looks and accent rather than a desire to learn more about her country. OK, mostly her looks; she seemed too coolly self-assured to be called "cute", but she had a nice figure and her elegantly sculpted Asian features were coolly lovely. I couldn't place her accent at all; it was closest to what I've heard called "mid-Atlantic", but there were hints of something else.
If the price of learning more about Lena Tan was encouraging her to teach me about her country, I was quite willing to pay it. I think she knew what I was doing, but she seemed willing to go along with my ploy. Maybe because despite any ulterior motives I really was interested in what she had to say, and asked questions that showed I'd actually been listening.