Okay, finally getting around to rewriting my first attempt at writing a story. In the defense of my first attempt, it was my very FIRST attempt so of course it sucks compared to others on this site. That having been said, any and all comments are still wanted, though the more constructive the more wanted and welcome.
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Brian sat watching his bobber as, yet another hour passed, not that the fish were biting this close to the bank but now that IT had shown up WEEELLL.... IT wouldn't have bothered him except that IT had shut the crickets up, IT had quieted the coyotes in the area for a while, but they had soon enough gone back to their yipping. IT hadn't dimmed the full moon, IT didn't made the stars easier to see with the moon shining so brightly. IT didn't cause any of the noise to drowned out from the near orgy that was taking place farther up the shoreline and up on a bluff. What IT DID do, was shut the crickets up and that simply pissed him the fuck off!!
He liked the sound of the crickets it was soothing, it was peaceful, it took his mind off that it was a Saturday night and here he was FISHING and not getting fucking laid!! It wasn't that he wasn't personable, he was. He just had a habit of treating women with respect and honor. Not like the other high schoolers up in the tents that viewed women as conquests to be shown off to their buddies "Lookie at what I've been screwing" and when they grew tired they threw them away like over used erasers. Actually erasers were treated better when it all came down to it. The girls around in that area were so used to it they might as well been considered "damaged goods". Yeah yeah, they were all perky and all that shit but getting all but passed around when the latest boyfriend got tired of them, had (if you were capable of seeing it) left visible traces on their personalities.
His watch bleeped the passing of another hour. He glanced down at it one Am, time to head on home. He spent a good thirty minutes collecting all his stuff from the three Styrofoam worm containers, to the scraps of line that he had trimmed when tying on snap swivels. His can of bug spray, too his two single gallon water cans and his days catch, two flats and a walleye 'Walleye in Kansas, now if that wasn't something to be termed as TWISTED' he thought with a smirk. As he was loading it all into his Jeep he paused for a moment, looked around, glanced at IT hovering over his jeep and made a quick decision. He flicked the key just enough to get the electric windows to close and grabbed one of the empty worm tubs. As nonchalantly as he could he filled it at the waters edge and strolled back to his Jeep and as quickly and as fluidly as he could, threw the Styrofoam container of lake water at the cloaked ship that had been hovering over his Jeep for the last two and a half fucking HOURS.
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A dull aching in his head seemed to pulse with the beat of his heart, not to mention the all the hollering and screaming that was NOT helping. Brian managed to pry his eyes open and immediately wished he hadn't. The lights though dim, were far more than enough to cut into his pained mind. After a few attempts he managed to get his eyes used to the light and looked around, he noted the tables around him also had people on them that were very much awake and coherent. "AHH, you have regained consciousness." A voice said, a voice that had a feminine tone to it but there was a bit of a 'unusual' accent to it that for some reason got his guts tied up in knots in fear. Brian was amused everyone around him was butt naked on cold metal tables, most of them were in hysterics and he was the only one that mattered. OOH, THIS was getting..... INTERESTING!!!!!
"So are you, whoever you are, the one that sent the cloaked craft that shut the crickets up?" Brian snarled as the cold from the table started seeping into his joints.
"Yes" Said the voice as nonchalantly as any he had ever heard.
"I hope that damn lake water corrodes your fucking HULL, not to mention that when I get off here you are going to so wish that I had NOT been brought up here." Brian had long known that he could absorb small amounts of electricity, heat and energy from those around him (and to transfer pain and his feelings to others in VERY specific situations) while he couldn't draw enough to deactivate the field that held him and the others to the tables, maybe just MAYBE if any of whoever it was that was holding them there came into view and came within arms reach it would be enough to allow him to get at them.
"Redirecting power to restraint fields,." Said the voice with a note of worried anxiety. "Adjusting gravity to three gravities, activating battle drones." Brian strained against the increased gravity enough to see two terminator style looking droids take positions at the head of his 'bed.' "That is a most unusual ability."
"Yeah well, when you can hear electronics power up from hearing/feeling the static build up on glassish surfaces, when you can hear the phone next door ring, MOST people would get curious and try to figure out what else you can do."
"Intriguing." The voice said this time with amused curiosity.
"Hey dumb-ass, all this is your fault? When I get off this table you are so dead!!" Brian looked over to his right and up, one of the others was at least listening and not trying to be heard by shouting and screaming at the top of their lungs.
"Specifically he is the one that was to have been brought here." Said the voice in a haughty tone. "The reason the rest of you are here is that you attempted to interfere which could not be allowed."
"So according to Henry over here it's my fault that Henry Tiller the "perfect little angel" of the county sheriff is here." Brian said with a smirk. "The perfect little angel that has a great liking for underage girls?"
"Hey, I do NOT!! Even if I did it, could never be proven." Henry started spitting and sputtering and bemoaning about how the world had started looking down on him ever since a family friend's kid had died under 'mysterious' circumstances.
"Yeah well it's rather interesting about the other eighteen or so that were left in your care for some reason ain't it?" Brian asked as snottily as he could. "Hey whoever or whatever you are, when you brought us all up here, were there any younger humans?" Brian asked as several started hollering and the shouting jumping to Henry's defense, so he decided to egg them all on and see if he could get them so infuriated that they wouldn't be able to even spit straight.
"Hey isn't Gary Tervin right above me? The same Gary that was responsible for a female rookie cops' death? Of course it was from the car wreck caused by her hotdawging in a branded new patrol car and not the broom handle that was shoved up her ass so far that it cracked her skull, should have accepted your advances huh? And isn't that over to my right good ol' Samuel Holman? The same Sammy that's the kid of the biggest drug dealer in the South East corner of Kansas? The same Sammy that's made his nest egg from spiking the drinks at church get-to-gethers and then supplying the hooked little old ladies with their pot? God DAMN it man, a lot of them were over sixty eight years old. No wonder some people look on Okkies from Muskogee with higher regard than us Kansans."
"ENOUGH!!!" Boomed the voice loud enough to startle everyone silent. "You were NOT brought here to torment these.... INSECTS."
"Then for WHAT purpose WAS I brought here?" Brian asked amused that someone else shared the same opinion of Henry and his friends.
"YOU were brought here because you were the closest to the shuttle landing site of those observed and seemed to fit the search criteria and then you appeared to attack the shuttle with no provocation. These others were brought here as that when the cloak failed and you were struck by the discharge, some appeared to come to your aid, some attacked my drones that were loading you and your land craft into the shuttle the rest for attempting to contact your version of governance." The voice said in 'DUH' tone of voice.