Sadly I do not have an editor for my stories and I am dyslexic, but I do go over them numerous times to make them as tight as they can be. Writing frequently has helped me a lot, but at times I do feel gimped with my lack of formal education.
Karesansui
None of his escort had directly spoken to him. Aran had begun to find this unnerving. Heavily chained he had been escorted to this surprising courtyard garden by four men. Arms both fastened tightly behind his back in the traditional method, encircled in hemp as he was becoming very accustomed.
They did not wait for their charge to comply nor did they give him clear instruction. He was simply struck hard behind the knees until he knelt on the pavement. He was much bigger than the men who harried him, however he was in no position to retaliate effectively, and only sought to comply.
They shackled him by his collar to a ring set in the pavement, and retreated. The chain being too short to allow him to rise. He had little recourse but to kneel and wait.
Aran gazed about. The day was as always cold, the clouds overhead seemed darker and more oppressive than usual, almost as though they promised snow or rain. Aran looked up and studied the somber skies. He wished they would promise something, rather than nothing at all.
A quick glance about him told him there was much beauty here. Though traces of ugliness remained, the occasional bullet hole pitted into concrete evidence of past violence, the sinuous curve of razor wire on high.
This romantic garden had been once no more than a prison exercise yard. Deep within Mobilong prison, a place for desperadoes and human trash. Now it stood transformed, manicured, bright river stones neatly arranged in beds. Conifers that still survived in the unseasonable cold manicured and shaped for beauty. There was a pond, and in lieu of koi fish Aran detected the presence of large European carp, silver and muddy dark, some with flashing mirror scales that swam sluggishly below.
Aran was studying the fish intently as Dahlia entered. He had been told they could be good to eat only if one knew how to prepare them. That carp were one of the only fish that had to be hung and bled to attain any decent edibility.
She had at last completed the winter fox kimono Aran immediately noticed, and wore it today with numerous other layers to keep out the cold. Traditional wooden sandals clunking on the concrete to signal her approach.