Thank you for the feedback and votes, especially an anonymous commenter who bought the novel previously before I took it off 'for sale' sites.
My last chapter got 1-bombed twice! How great is that? It must be good stuff for the trolls to give it such a thrashing. :)
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The clean spring sunlight fell through the branches and budding young green leaves. Round yellow and green splashes of light lay like translucent sweets on the mulched old leaves, nearly become earth, through which the insistent straight saplings pushed up to the bright sunshine.
Mail clinked and chinked, horses whinnied, men grunted as they swung through the trees. The lines of cavalry rode by, the infantry walked quickly among them to the beat of the troops' drums. The round splashes of light danced on helmets and on lances, on spears and on the hilts of the officers' broadswords. A leathery scarred face showed in a pool of
light where there was a gap between two trees, then a bandaged young head with frightened eyes, then a bearded face with only one eye.
The earth was moist and fresh beneath their feet. It was good ground for marching and the day was not hot nor too cold. The officers rode back and forth between the files of men, cursing someone who was chattering and tripped on a treeroot or another who had not checked his boots before they started and had only now discovered one sock was wet from a hole in them.
Threading her way among them all went Commander-Lord el Maien. Her thin tanned face with a recently healed cut across it was set hard under her gleaming helmet, her rose-petal mouth was in a line but her slanted blue eyes looked softly at them and they reached for her hand as her horse passed them by, pressing her thin ringed fingers to their foreheads.
She would wheel her horse to the front of them again where the other Commanders deferentially questioned her on the route ahead. She would answer in clear certain tones, a small look of impatience in her eyes as if to say:
but of course it is so
. She would glance about her and bark out an instruction, there would be a sudden cry of command and the lines of men would alter direction, change speed.
It was a shock to them all, all the hundreds of men in the five troops, when they broke suddenly out of the woodland onto the level plain where Arventa stood.
The rich green land rolled gently down to the great wide curves of the Arven River in its slow flow to the Maier Pass, Port Paviat and the sea. Glittering in the distance, set apart from the sprawling mass of the town, was Palladia Arventa: an architectural miracle of glass, held together by the most delicate web of structures.
Between the town, the palace, the river and themselves an untidy rush of men was coming to meet them. Without the time to form a considered plan of action, without the walls of a castle or fort to shelter in, van Sietter's troops had been thrown forward in the desperate bid for defence.
"To me!" Tashka's tall figure on Challenger was suddenly in front of them all, her arm flung up their signal, her banner flying proud by her side in the spring breezes. The cavalry of five troops jumped to follow her, a ragged roar rose from the troopers' throats and they flung themselves into the charge!
Running, riding, over the green plain at the untidy wave of men rising up to meet them. Tashka on her great grey warhorse was like a star flashing several lengths in front of them, thundering down on the red and gold ranks, even her banner-bearer had been left behind her. They were desperate to catch up with her, not to let that fine creature, their life and days and fight, be overwhelmed and cut down by the Sietter troops.
She pulled Challenger up in a flurry of turves as she neared the Sietter lines, her sword was raised, her wide blue eyes in her thin pale face stared.
A young Captain riding at the front of his cavalry had been making for her but he looked in her eyes, as he must do to engage her in combat, and his face turned, he hesitated.
"Rania Stariel!" Tashka shouted.
The Captain was holding his horse in the midst of a sea of cavalrymen who all looked to him for leadership. He flicked his eyes from side to side and saw no engagement yet, he had come forward too fast. He and Tashka were way ahead of their armies but his Commander was catching up.
"Rania Stariel!" Tashka shouted again. "Come to me!"
There was his brother Loisir, the Commander of a troop as he was the Captain of a Quarter: Clair el Maien's junior, Lord Tashka's brother Lieutenant from Fourth, thundering up the field of battle to meet him with his familiar eyes set in an unfamiliar glazed glare of war.
Rania's nerve had gone. He knew if he fought now he would be killed because he had lost the stupid unreasoning rage of war. He had looked in the eyes of his brother officers, whom he deeply admired in his heart. He knew in that moment that the Generals had been right to argue that he ought to be hung in his brother's place. His Commander had been wrong to swear his own life as forfeit that Rania would not break his vow. Yet he had sworn his vow with his whole heart in it and his Commander was beside him now.
"Caja Nain!" Tashka's voice was like the thin sweet cry of a bird calling across to them. "Caja! Come to join Dar and Loisir and me! Will you deny the Captain, now Commander-Lord el Jien? Will you go by his fingers?"
"I have sworn to my men, victory will be ours!" Commander Nain was screaming at her, grabbing Rania Stariel's bridle and pulling him to one side.
"Will you truly fight us: Dar and Loisir, el Jien and the Commander, and I? Oh Caja, my dear! Will you fight us?"
"I will!" He was shaking and Rania saw the terror in his handsome face. "I will, I will!"
"Then why is it you are going backwards?"
Caja Nain, who had raided jam out of the provisions tents of all the Quarters in turn in Fourth Sietter with her until they were caught and he was punished and she got off free because she wept when Rania and Loisir's father, their old Commander, tried to discipline her, let go Rania's reins and stared at her from a pinched petrified face. Her face was motionless. He saw a recently healed wound ran across the bridge of her nose. He saw her slanted dark blue eyes staring intently into his. He could not bear those eyes that loved him, and she had been a baby Lieutenant by his side, to look at him so.
He gave a yell and kicked his horse forward, his sword was raised to meet hers.
Her sword flashed up in her hand, her other arm came up, she was holding Challenger only with her knees. Her sword met his with a crash. She stabbed shallowly into his shoulder with her dagger and caught him in her strong embrace as he slid in his saddle. He dropped his sword as he clutched at his shoulder, staring into her slanted blue eyes, his face twisted between agony and sorrow.
"Lie still there," she said to him softly, "Angel of Honour. I know you have been in Hell. Victory will be ours the day and you will be for me through the rest of your life. We will come for you when the battle is done," and she let him slide gently to the ground.
Rania had flung his sword down and dismounted. He was huddled into the flank of his horse, quivering with fear and waiting to be struck down. His cavalrymen were in turmoil behind him, his Lieutenants crying:
Sir, sir, what are your orders? My Captain! Sir!
He turned savagely on them and said: "Get back! Call on the Angel of Mercy! I am for Lord Tashka and Lord Clair. My heart was always with them and yet I was true to my Commander and his vow but now I cannot." He stepped up to where Commander Nain lay weeping on the battlefield and stood over him with his hand gripped at his horse's head to hold it still.
They stared at him. Half of them dismounted to stand by him and their Commander, half of them rode wildly forwards into the H'las ranks, leaderless and hopeless. He watched them go to their deaths and bit his lip so hard that it bled.
Tashka trotted her horse to him and laid her scarred right hand on his helmeted head then she was past him and into the battle.
There were other places where men were facing those who had been comrades. Fourth and Tenth Sietter in the red uniform with a black sash across it were slow to engage. The troopers battling with them sometimes fell back saying:
I cannot!
Sometimes a Fourth or Tenth Sietter man failed to guard himself in his confusion at confronting a friend and was wounded or killed.
The Sietter enemy were ill-prepared and desperate. They knew that behind them was no strong united force of strategic staff and sworn Lord to the region. There had been plots against van Sietter. Some of their officers had been arrested, some hung, others obviously had little heart for the war they had been thrown into.
Tashka struggled through a mass of faces whom she tried desperately not to recognise and then she looked up and saw one she was glad to see and made straight for him.