Authors Note:
I wrote this for the Valentine's Day 2019 competition. Maybe I'll try and create an alternate or companion version for Halloween.
Constructive criticism welcome.
All characters in the story are over 18 years old.
Thanks.
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My phone vibrating shook me out of my open-eyed doze. I was in the weekly torture session called a staff meeting where my boss rambled on in monotone while brown nosers spoke up about nothing anyone cared about and tried to glean some attention from the boss. Why didn't they just creep into his office and blow him, maybe they'd get the promotion they wanted. I had joined the company out of college two years ago and had tried to climb the ladder too, but I wouldn't stoop to politics and doing it with just hard work was tough. Anyways I was hoping for better things.
Glancing at the phone I saw it was my realtor, Trish. I let it go to voicemail. The meeting went on for another friggin hour. Being as I was only 26 and retirement age was 67 that would mean I'd have to put up with another 40 years of this shit. The thought was too depressing to think about. I really hoped the venture I'd started with my brother would pan out.
My older brother Chris had not gone the college route, instead joining a construction company right out of high school. Evidently he'd done a great job and worked his way up to foreman a few years ago. Now he wanted to try his luck at flipping houses, and he wanted to bring me along for the ride. I had done my share of construction work mainly to earn money for college, but I knew what I was doing and Chris seemed to be happy enough with me to offer me a partnership.
For our first venture he wanted me to find a place in need of repair, dire repair actually given our budget. He had the connections to do the renovation work and I theoretically had the marketing background to move the properties. The idea was to buy it cheap, fix it up with low cost help, and then sell it at a huge profit. That was the idea at least. I'd been looking for an appropriate property in our small city for a couple months with no luck.
Eventually I would get my realtor's license and cut out the middle man, but for now I had teamed up with Trish to help out and we'd gotten to be friends. Trish was in her mid 30's, divorced, with a couple kids. If she had the time to date I thought she wouldn't have too much of a problem finding someone. For her age she kept herself in shape, had a fun personality, and a classy demeanor. I really enjoyed her company. She had shoulder length dark brown hair, warm brown eyes, olive skin, and a pretty face. Her body was toned and she had curves in all the right places. To be honest I wasn't appraising her very much as I had plenty of women my own age to deal with and I'd broken up with my latest girlfriend a few months ago.
When we first met she was surprised by my age. She said she didn't know of too many single 26 year olds looking to buy a house. She eyed me over. I'm not a model but I think I look pretty decent. I'm 6'2" and about 210 pounds, brown hair and eyes, and I love to swim which helps me keep in shape.
After the staff meeting ended I returned her call.
"Hi Trish, it's Dan, I saw you called earlier."
"Oh. Hi Dan. I know we haven't found anything for your price range in the city so I expanded the search into the township and may have something for you."
"Okay, sounds good. What is it?"
"Well, too be honest it sounds a little crazy, maybe too much of a fixer upper, but I thought I'd run it by you anyways. There is this old house, a mansion really, built in the late 1800s. It needs a lot of work, and I mean a lot. It has some fire damage, no working plumbing or electricity, basically a mess. The reason I bring it up is that it sits on ten acres of land and listen to this, the asking price is in your range."
I was mulling this over as she spoke. Our budget was not very much.
"Ten acres of land? For that price it would be worth it to just knock the place down and build new."
"Well there's a catch. The property is still with the original family's trust and there's a stipulation that any buyer must fix up the existing home. So it can't just be torn down."
"But why so cheap?"
"I don't know all the details, but it's been on the market for five years or so with no takers. So I guess they just want to get rid of it. So any interest?"
"Yeah sure. When can I see it?"
"How about this afternoon?" She asked.
"Well, I'm tied up at work until at least 4:00. And it's Valentine's Day, don't you have a hot date or something."
"No not me. Just a romantic comedy and some popcorn maybe." She chuckled, "How about you?"
"Nothing for me either. I tell you what, how about we run out and take a look if it's not too much trouble and I'll buy you dinner. It would be nice to have a friend to talk to on Valentine's Day."
"You've got a date. Give me a call this afternoon and we can go from there."
The day ran a little longer than I had hoped and I wasn't ready to go until almost 5pm. I gave Trish a call.
"Hi Trish. Hey sorry it's later than I thought. Do you want to just do this tomorrow?"
"I already got my sister to keep the kids tonight in case we run late. Instead of me picking you up how about we just meet there, I can give you directions. Plus I found out some more about the house that might either scare you or excite you."
"Like what?" I wondered.
"It's a surprise, hopefully an interesting one. Anyways we should be able to get at least a half hour in before it gets dark, and I'll bring a flashlight just in case."
I remembered I still had my camping gear in my truck from a trip I'd taken with the guys the past weekend. "Actually I've got a flashlight and even a lantern too. Okay I'll see you there soon."
She texted me directions. I dropped by a convenience store and picked up a 12-pack of beer and some snacks in case dinner turned out to be late, then I followed her instructions.
The place was way out in the country. As I got closer I realized I was losing my phone signal. Fortunately I was able to follow the directions and ended up on a dirt road leading toward a large building in the distance which must be it.
I saw Trish's Mercedes already parked by the house when I pulled up. She saw me and got out of her car.
"Hi Dan. I was trying to call you but I don't have any bars."
"Me either. This place is way out."
"Yeah. And pretty creepy too."
I looked over the house which did indeed look like something out of a scary movie. It was built from stone and looked pretty solid, but there were vines all over it, the shutters hung loosely, and just general disrepair.
"Okay, let me tell you what I found out. You may want to leave after you hear this." She said with an excited voice. "The place is supposed to be haunted."
"Uhhh okay. By who?"
"Here's the story. The house was built in 1871 by William Stuart for his wife and two children. HIs wife died in childbirth with what would have been their third child and William was left to raise his two children James and Catherine by himself. For some reason he never remarried. Anyways when Catherine was eighteen she fell in love with one of the stable hands, a Benjamin Mercer. Her brother found out and didn't take kindly to the idea. It was rumored that he had more than just brotherly feelings for Catherine. On Valentine's Night 1886 James caught the two of them in her room and went crazy. He ran them through with a civil war saber just like Phinehas in the Bible. Then went to his own room and hung himself. Their father died of grief soon after. The house was passed to one of William's brothers but he started seeing and hearing things and had to move out. The house stayed in the family and was occupied a few times, but always the people were driven out by the ghosts. In 1952 one crazed descendant lit a fire in James' old room trying to destroy his ghost. Fortunately she didn't burn the house down. It's been sitting here idle ever since, the most recent owner never lived in the house at all and died 5 years ago. Since then the trust has been trying to sell it. So what do you think?"
"I think some people have active imaginations. I don't believe in ghosts. What about you?"
She thought for a second, "Not really, but this place does throw off a weird vibe. Can you feel it?"
I tried to open myself up to feel what she meant. There was something in the air, almost like a static electricity.
"Maybe. Anyways the sun is going down while we're out here jabbering. Can we go in?"
Inside the place was was dusty and old, but not really that bad. I could see that the hardwood floors might be restored, the walls patched, the chandelier shined. The last owner had left many items with the house. There were tables, chairs, a sofa, paintings, etc.
It was hard to see in the dim, failing light so we went out to our cars and grabbed flashlights. I also grabbed a six pack of beer and offered Trish one which she accepted.
Walking through the house I could see myself restoring it. The bones were just fine and there was a lot that could be salvaged. In the living room we came across some portraits. An older couple that must be William and his wife, neither smiling. Then some smaller ones of a young man and woman. These must be James and Catherine. Catherine was a good looking woman with long black hair, large green eyes, a round face, full lips and a generous mouth. James looked similar but his face looked more stern and his eyes were small, dark, and cold. A shiver passed through me thinking of him killing his sister and her lover.
As the last of the sunlight faded the house felt heavy around us.
"Maybe we should go." Trish said.
"Yeah, I think I've seen enough for now."
Walking toward the door the air suddenly felt electrified and I heard a thunder clap which must have been right above the house.
"We'd better hurry, it sounds like it might storm." I said.
We went out to our cars and agreed to call each other once we got closer to town so we could meet for dinner. But when I tried the ignition in my truck it wouldn't turn over. I tried several times. Getting out I went over to Trish's car which she was trying to start with the same result. I knocked on her window.
"My truck won't start. Yours too?"
She nodded.