This is my first submission. I would really like some honest feedback if you enjoyed it or not...
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It was Friday night. This morning, your parents picked up the kids for the weekend so we could have some time to ourselves for a change. We had made reservations at the new Italian restaurant in town, and planned on going out dancing afterwards.
As I had the day off from work, I was cleaning up the house when you called just after noon. A girl at work had just been fired because she couldn't keep up with her work. The boss had given you the task of catching back up. You were disappointed because you would be stuck at work late and we wouldn't be able to make our reservation. I told you not to worry about it, that we could go tomorrow night instead. I offered to bring you some dinner, but you said you just wanted to crank out the work so you could be home as soon as possible.
Before you got home, I had lit some candles in our living room. I wanted you to relax after your long day at work. When you came in the door at 9pm, you just threw your bags on the floor, and slouched into the living room. You sat down beside me and I kissed your forehead as you leaned back against me. I started rubbing your shoulders and could feel how tense you were. I offered to give you a back massage, and you gladly accepted.
I started to unbutton your blouse, removed your bra and had you lay down on the couch. I grabbed the baby oil and started rubbing your shoulders. I worked over to your neck and continued down your spine. I could hear you moaning as I continued massaging your lower back and back up. After about 20 minutes of this massage, I asked if you wanted me to continue and give you a full body massage. There was no response, so I asked again. When you still didn't respond, I bent down to look at you, and you were sound asleep. I kissed your forehead once again, and picked you up and carried you to our bedroom. I undressed you completely, got undressed myself and pulled the silk sheets up and over us. You curled up into me and were out like a light.
I wake up in the morning with the sun shining. I look over at you still sleeping. I just lay there for awhile looking at you. I have always found your beauty breathtaking, and as you lie there sleeping, I can't help but smile at you. I roll out of bed and head to the bathroom to take a shower.