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Our Night at the beach.
We have had a fantastic and fun night and day. We walked around town, checking out shops and art galleries. Then we had a beautiful, romantic dinner by candlelight.
We decide as it's a clear warm night we may walk back part of the way to our motel.
Strolling along, chatting, joking, laughing we are arm in arm, enjoying the stars and the full moon. We find ourselves at the beach, walking along the edge of the water we run and dance, escaping the incoming waves for fun.
The beach is secluded, not a soul except for you, my darling and I. "Do you want to swim?" I enquire.
"No we can't, we don't have swimmers." is your reply.
"Ppffftt swimmers. I'm going in nude." I say as I start to take off my shirt. "Come on babe, it will be fun".
I can see you are considering, I continue to strip down taking off my pants and boxer shorts. You giggle seeing my willy flapping around and my white bum in the moonlight.
"Come on, hurry." I say.
I help unzip your dress and take it down your back, unclipping your bra as I do so. You quickly step out of your underwear and holding my hand we run together to the water.
It is warm and inviting, the waves lapping at our bodies, the moonlight dancing on the surface all around us. It feels so nice; I pull you against me kissing you gently, your soft lips taste of salt.
We embrace for what seems an eternity, kissing deeply, our tongues engaged in a game licking, probing, tasting each other's mouth. I lift your body to me; your legs wrapping around my hips as we sway in the rolling waves, this is so good.
I am kissing your neck, working my way to your