Hello, everyone. Here is the ending of a story I wrote last year. I never posted it because, I felt it wasn't good enough, but it is a story I really liked. So I decided to submit it anyway. If you like it, fine. If not, well that's OK too.
I certainly hope you read it. It's a long read, but I think it will be worth it in the end. If you are going to search for errors and mistakes, I'm sure you will find plenty, as this is self-edited, but please don't let human error distract you from the story.
Chapter 4
Ross
I plan to marry this girl. She will be my wife one day. That's one of the reasons I stopped.
I took a moment to admire her beauty. She is beautiful with deep brown skin, gorgeous brown eyes, bountiful breast and a tapered waist with a sexy long legs and a dynamic body.
I entered her home and drew her into an intimate kiss. She wrapped her legs around my waist and I felt the evidence of her arousal pressed against me. She was so wet and I was as hard as steel. She rubbed her body against mine and I wanted to explode.
This was wrong. As much as I wanted to continue, I knew we needed to stop.
"No, not like this."
"Don't stop, Ross. Please." she pleaded as she sought comfort in my arms once more. I removed myself from her tight embrace and lowered her to the floor.
To distract us both from what we truly wanted, I changed the topic and talked about our outing.
"Anna, I am looking forward to seeing the city with you tomorrow. I know how to find some places but there are many places I haven't been.
Anna sighed and chuckled. "I think Mr. Smith is trying to play match maker. He knows my knowledge of this city is limited. He should be showing you around."
"Hmmm, that might be true. But he is not as pretty as you are and I would rather see your pretty face than his." I retorted holding her close.
She wrapped her arms around me tightly and laid her head on my shoulder. She inhaled my scent than licked my neck sucking on the skin gently. Her hot tongue touching my skin and the gentle suction of her mouth fired every inch of my being.
"Anna, I'd better leave now." I whispered, then I kissed her once more and held her close for a moment. When we were breathing normally again, I left.
I was at her apartment a little early Saturday morning. I just wanted to spend the day with her. I didn't care if we toured the city or not.
I rang her doorbell around 7:30. "Who is it? Her sweet voice called.
"It's me." I answered as I waited anxiously for her to open the door.
I was excited when I heard the locks turn. The door opened and there she stood before me wearing her robe.
The sight of her in her night wear sent shock waves through my body. Instantly, I hardened.
It didn't help that I could only imagine what was under that robe.
"Good morning Ross. Please have a seat. I'll be dressed in a minute." She offered me a seat in her small kitchen.
I sat at her dining room table and she went to her bedroom to dress. Knowing the only thing separating me from her naked form was a thin door, drove me crazy.
Fifteen minutes later, Anna came out of her room. She was wearing a pair of blue jeans with a red and white wifebeater tee set, covered with an open half shirt. She had pulled her hair back into a ponytail.
I stood and walked to her. Very gently, I released her hair. Her long gorgeous locks flowed freely around her shoulders.
"Anna," I whispered. "You truly are lovely", I whispered as I stared into her eyes.
Anna
I had just gotten out of the shower and was about to dress when the doorbell rang.
Ross was early. I let him in and he looked amazing. He wore a simple black t-shirt with black jeans that accentuated his form. I asked him to sit at my dining room table and left to dress.
I was embarrassed that he saw me in my robe, so I dressed as quickly as I could. Fifteen minutes later, I was ready to go.
Ross walked up to me and releasedmy hair and told me that hair that was that lovely should not be restrained.
We left my apartment, and went out for our day together.
The city was not that big, so after eating breakfast at Don's Diner, I showed him the parts of the city that I knew about.
In about three hours, our tour was finished. We went to the par and just spent time together. Ross told me stories about his childhood. He described in details the squabbles he'd had with his siblings.
I must admit that I was jealous. As an only child, with parents that were career driven, I only had books and my imagination to keep me company.
I felt his pain as he talked about losing his best friend Rory. I didn't have a best friend or any friends when I was a kid.
As he talked, I wondered what his family would think of me. I wasn't Apostolic, although I enjoyed attending the church. His mother seemed really strict and I felt as if she'd never approve of him being with me.
Unconsciously I withdrew, thinking.
His family will not accept me. I'm not a part of their church. I really like this guy, but I won't ask him to choose. In the end he'd have to, and he probably won't choose me. After today, I won't bother him again.
.
I would simply enjoy this day with him and put any ideas or romantic notions out of my head.
Ross stopped talking and asked me to tell him about my childhood. There wasn't much to tell. When I finished, talking, he had a really tight smile on his face.
"Anna, I don't mean any disrespect, but I'd love to spend a little time alone with your parents." He said in a tight voice.
The implied threat was clear and surprisingly I was somewhat offended. "Well, Mr. Thompson, I'm sorry if my story wasn't as entertaining as yours. Apparently this day was not a good idea."
I knew I didn't stand a chance with him anyway, so once he expressed his thoughts on my parents it solidified my decision.
I stood and asked him to take me home.
"No," he said.
