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Lonesome Dove Units Heroine Medic

Lonesome Dove Units Heroine Medic

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My marriage was over. After six years it was gone - stuffed, and shafted - and I needed a place where I could brood for a bit and then get on with the rest of my life.

I figured my deputy could babysit the business, while Katerina began splashing the settlement she'd danced away with. The geography says Hawaii is a full four thousand miles, one continent, and one ocean away from Galveston. That seemed about far enough. I booked a ticket to Honolulu and told Willy Carstens I'd be back on deck in three weeks.

I began my new life with four days loafing around the famed Royal Hawaiian Hotel, enjoying an occasional beer, a deck chair that earned tips for the hotel's beach boys, and a view of Waikiki's bikinis -- the good, the bad, and those who shouldn't have.

Then I caught a morning flight out to Kauai, "The Garden Isle." My next-door neighbour, Alfie Schwab, had tipped me off to an old weatherboard holiday rental that was not too flash but over-compensated for this with a back lawn that dipped straight down onto a white sand beach. He'd stayed there twice and maintained it was about three steps better than paradise, and an ideal spot to lose yourself.

The house needed a rental car for access, and I booked it through a local island agency, as I figure the smaller joints rip you off more sunnily than their big brothers at Hertz and Avis.

"Good choice taking the convertible. Life's better topless," joked the old guy who owned the place. "Give my daughter Sammy the paperwork. She's got your keys. Step outside, and you've got that new Mustang she's hosing."

His daughter was thirty-ish; a tall, slim, brunette, and in anyone's language, a looker. But oddly, she was wearing long slacks despite the tropical heat, and these were covered in splash-marks from her cleaning work. As she stepped towards me, I saw the daughter carried a slight limp and favoured her right side.

"Your car's ready to rumble. So where are you heading off to?" she asked.

"I hope I've got lucky. I've booked an old house a friend said had a great location. It's right on the beach, near Hanalei."

"Ah, Han-a-lei. It's as lovely as it sounds, and not more than an hour from here," she said. "Let me match up your driving license and the papers, then you're on your way." I passed my license to her. She glanced at it, then bent her head to examine the details more closely.

"Daniel Scott Thurlow, from Galveston." she read out. She looked up at me and studied my face. "I think that must be Captain Dan Thurlow. Decorated in Afghanistan. Served with the Tenth Mountain Division in its Third Combat Brigade

"Yeah, that's gotta be you," she murmured, and shifted her sunglasses up onto her hair. The eyes were mesmerising - deep brown with distinctive green flecked irises. Her right eye, I realized, was slightly lazy.

I'd done my best to leave Afghanistan behind when I finally left the armed forces. But who was this mystery woman who apparently knew me? I couldn't place her, yet it wasn't a face to forget.

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Afghanistan in 2011. The Tenth's Third Brigade is called The Spartans. We were named after the Greek super-warriors, whose motto said you return from battle "With your Shield, Or on It."

That sounded fine at home base in Fort Drum, but not so great two days out on patrol from Forward Operating Base Pasab, in the Pakistan border country. We'd lost more than one hundred men since the war begun and were now working gingerly through one of the Taliban's heartlands -- a terror zone where the villages had shrunk as scared families fled to the regional capital of Kandahar.

It was strongly rumoured that Mullah Omar, the 6ft 6-inch religious zealot who founded the Taliban, was being protected somewhere near us. I had one of my three platoons with me - about forty men in it. We were six miles south of Highway One, and a month into the brigade's mission to break the Taliban's hold on the Zihar region. This meant pushing their terror back to south of the Arghandab River, so we could free up the main route down into Pakistan. We'd also begun building the first of twenty new schools where Afghan girls too could be free to join classrooms.

Unlike most of Afghanistan, much of Zahir is flat and rich, with orchards and vineyards that are irrigated by channels pulling water from the river. But Zahir could also be deadly. The Taliban had fields and tracks sown with mines, and in the villages, thick-walled baked mud homes with their small grilled windows, sometimes made nasty machine gun nests.

I paused my platoon a hundred yards short of a small village, because we'd had a sudden medical emergency back down the line. In front of us three women in burqas helped by their children, were lifting buckets from a well, and putting them on a cart.

"Reporting on Urlich," snapped Corporal Browning, a wiry NCO whose competence I trusted. "It's acute appendicitis. Bloody hell! We need to chopper him out. Real fast, according to Lonesome Dove."

"Lonesome Dove? Who the fuck's Lonesome Dove?"

I'll give Browning his credit -- he blushed. "Sorry, that's Private Anoki, the stand-in medic. Turns out she's part Sioux Indian. Anoki doesn't know it yet, but she's been called Lonesome Dove. It kinda makes sense. She's the first woman we've had in the platoon; she'll be back at base in a week anyway, and she's also alone. So -- we have ourselves Lonesome Dove, like in that book and TV series."

"Well, if you say so. And how well's our temporary Medic shaping up?"

"It's early, but she seems good at what she does. The guys like her - and the guessing is that hidden behind the dark glasses and helmet, Lonesome Dove may be a treat."

Lonesome Dove -- Private Anoki. By now I should have spent some time with the fill-in Medic. It was my fault, but there'd been no real chance. Her presence had come as a surprise. Hadlee, a stand-up guy who'd been the Medic for six months, broke his ankle skylarking the night before we left Pasab's tent base. One hour before we drove out through the heavily armed base gates, the army (which doesn't always know best) took Anoki from its mobile "gypsy medic" team and assigned her to us. Women weren't yet meant to be risked on direct ground contact patrols, but it wasn't the very first-time necessity had stretched this rule.

The drama with Urlich's rumbling appendix had slowed us down, and instead of being front and back of the column, both our Cougars - MRAP (Mine Resistant Ambush Protected) vehicles - were now at the rear.

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"Okay, a chopper can set down in the village," I told Browning. "I'll slip back to see Urlich and have a word with Lonesome Dove. We'll need her to...."

Suddenly my ears were singing, and I was hard on the ground beside Browning. A rocket had smashed into the light vehicle leading the column, and a trail of bullets chased past my face. I rolled into the ditch by the track and checked behind me. The platoon had also dived for the ditches or scrambled for protection behind the bulky Cougars. Peeping through a gap in some vines, I saw gun barrels juddering from slit windows in two of the mud huts.

"We want camouflage, we need to go backwards into the orchards so we're screened and can start to circle them," called Browning. "Sir -- quickly."

"No, we'll stick in the cover here a moment. They may have put mines behind us." Like as not the setup we faced was from the Taliban playbook for village ambushes. They'd shelter machine gun nests behind a couple of mud house walls on the village fringe and then try to push you backwards off the entrance track -- and straight into mine traps they'd laid in wait.

The Cougars are nearly five tons, with tough metal sidewalls built to protect troops against incoming fire, plus a 50-calibre machine gun, and a grenade launcher. I waved to McKean and Carmichael and immediately they began firing over our heads towards the two Taliban gun positions. But it was difficult because their firing line was part obscured by the damaged light vehicle in front, with its driver slumped over the wheel. Its second man, was now on the ground, writhing in agony, but also in line of fire.

"That's Julio Perez," said Corporal Browning. "We could get him if...."

Another fierce volley of AK 47 fire whipped our ditch edges. It also ran a line of puffs between us and Perez, who was about 40 yards out. "Perez, can you get to the ditch," I yelled, "Five yards to your left."

Perez was hunched on the ground, moaning loudly, sometimes screaming. He had immediate shelter behind the light vehicle, but that couldn't last. There'd either be another rocket, or he'd be flanked. If he made it to the ditch, we could crawl down it to get him away from the gunfire. Browning yelled instructions again and I did too. But Perez either couldn't hear or was unable to move. An AK47 raked the space in front of him again.

"Maybe I should go out?" asked Browning.

"No, they'll have you in three seconds. He's not gonna move, so the best thing is we drive one of the Cougars up close and try to pull him into shelter aboard," I said. But as I turned to signal the first Cougar, a figure bolted past me, heading towards the crying, wounded Perez. It hit the ground once, surrounded by dust puffs from AK47 bullets, then crouched and rushed forward again.

"What the... "

"It's fucking Lonesome Dove," screeched Browning. It was too late to call her back because she was halfway to her target. Medic Anoki hit the ground again as another stream of bullets burst round her, then sprinted the last fifteen yards to the shelter of the vehicle, where Perez lay. She flipped him onto his back, tore his shirt open and began working rapidly round his abdomen while tracer marks skidded past her crouched position. It was pure fortune she'd reached Perez, and there seemed no way she could make it back.

"Anoki, stay with Perez till we get a Cougar abreast of you. You got me? REMAIN THERE," I bellowed. Lonesome Dove gave me what looked like a thumbs up but may have been the opposite. It didn't matter because another rocket immediately smashed into the vehicle protecting her. Ten seconds later everyone, the Taliban included, saw Anoki stagger out from the smoke and dust, with Perez slung over her shoulder.

Browning and me poured our M4s towards the Taliban positions to help give her cover, and the Cougars, which had now got a slightly better sightline, re-opened their fire. But the drama of Anoki/Lonesome Dove, carrying Perez, had become the Taliban's total focus. She wheeled, jigged, and staggered through a screen of spiteful metal, and suddenly she was immediately in front of me.

"In here, with us," I yelled. She pushed Perez down into my arms and scrambled into the ditch.

"Shit! Are you okay?" I asked.

"I'm right, but Perez - only maybe. Riley's dead in the truck, and Perez needs a Medivac chopper fast, or we'll lose him too," she said.

"We already called Pasab," said Browning. "They've diverted another mission they already had airborne, so we're lucky. They'll be with us in minutes."

Anoki passed me back a syringe she'd stuck in Perez's arm; she snapped on a pair of surgical gloves to begin feeling around the soldier's ribs, then began applying combat dressings she'd ripped from her kit. "Quik Clot Gauze," she muttered to me. "I've got the new version. It's got clotting agents that staunch bleeding even better, so it'll buy him more time," she told me.

I don't clearly recall the massive thud of the incoming mortar, but I can't forget the stabbing, searing pain I felt before I passed out. The platoon's mission report details how the shell wounded Browning, me, and Lonesome Dove, who was leaned over Perez.

The Taliban forces slid away as soon as they heard the approaching whirr of two attack Apaches and the Chinook medivac. On board the Chinook, I came to again, and realized one medic had begun frantically taping me, and a second was putting a needle into Browning who was writhing, his boots rat-tat-tatting on the chopper's bloody floor. Lonesome Dove, slumped opposite, was bleeding too, staring in shock through dark brown eyes with vivid green flecks.

"You were terrific," I told her, but her eyes had rolled up in her head. I took her hand. Thirty seconds later, my injections kicked in and I was pretty much under.

The choppers carried five wounded and one body back to Pasab. Plus Urlich who strangely was the only survivor not to eventually walk from the Field Hospital. Urlich's appendix finally ruptured during the flight, and at base they couldn't save him.

I was in our hospital for nearly three weeks. Two days before I was due for discharge, I got an urgent message from Galveston. My dad, the second generation to run our family's Gulf shrimp fleet and its processing business, had dropped dead on the docks. This tour was my second, and because it was ending in two months and I wasn't yet combat fit, they decided to send me home early.

But I could drive. The day before I left, I took a jeep and a box of candy treats, and drove to Siab Jan, where we'd built one of our first schools. There'd been few girls in the region who dared attend school for fear of the Taliban's violent reprisals against both them and their families. Now two of the classes included a row of girls-- eight and nine-year-olds happily crowded at their desks, wearing white hair scarves.

That was back in a time when we still dared to hope. I said my goodbyes to Browning and Perez and to the rest of the team, but I missed Private Anoki. Lonesome Dove's wounds had meant she needed to be sent on to the Kandahar base.

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"She said to tell you 'Heaps of thanks' for what you did in the chopper," said Browning. I stared at him puzzled, having no idea what he meant. And I never saw Private Anoki again. I did, however, spot her in a news picture a year later. A general was pinning the Silver Star for valour onto her tunic. You could barely see her face between the flags, salutes, and hats.

I'd known her for about forty minutes.

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With the top down, I drove the rented Mustang up to Hanalei, my mind grappling with the rental car attendant's face. I'd been about to ask her the "how-come-you-know-me?" when the office door flew open, and the older guy called: "Sammy -- we've got a customer who'll take a SUV for a month, but only if its ready right now. Can you get that red RAV4 cleared -- super urgent, like?" She shook her head to me in apology, and then vanished, with no time for explanations.

I found the house about two miles past the Hanalei village. I lifted my bags up three steps, opened the door, and walked through its lounge out onto the wooden front veranda. There it sat, just as Alfie Schwab had promised-- a small paradise. The bright purple flowers of a bougainvillea vine framed a lush lawn buttoned with white bloomed hibiscus trees and frangipani. Beyond that, the beach, the sparkling bay, and....

And suddenly I saw a possible connection to the girl who'd signed out the car. Her slight limp was unfamiliar, and I didn't know any girl with a lazy eye. But her eyes were brown with distinctive green flecks. Plus, she had the high cheekbones, and the smooth brown skin -- was it possible she was Lonesome Dove? But I'd never seen our medic when she wasn't shaded in camouflage gear, her face obscured by sunglasses and our unit's tussock covered helmet. Besides, Mountain Division had several women in support sections who'd be much more likely to recognize me in civvies. But Private Anoki? It did seem a chance.

I found the rental agency's number in the Mustang's glove box and called. "The girl with the hose? You mean Sammy?" her dad asked warily but brought her to the phone.

"It's Dan Thurlow speaking. I picked up a car this morning," I told her. "I hope that by some chance I'm right. Is it Private Anoki I'm speaking to? Were you a medic at the Pasab base in Afghanistan?"

"Well, it was Corporal Anoki when I finished up. But yes, and it's plain Sammy Anoki now. I'm sorry I had to rush off on you at the car lot. It must have seemed rude. But it seemed that you didn't remember me, which was understandable. I had all our camouflage gear on, and the medivac ride back to base was pure bedlam."

"It sure was. Definitely the worst chopper trip of my life. Yours too I guess?"

"You're not wrong there," she said. We chatted briefly, and to my relief Sammy Anoki said "Fine, yes. Let's get together for a catch-up." She recommended an Italian place called Bar Acuda, for the next evening.

I got to Bar Acuda five minutes early. When Corporal Anoki walked in, she was likely the best-looking girl the restaurant had hosted in a month. She'd let her dark hair down to her shoulders and wore an ankle length red flowered mu-mu, which clung to her trim body. Her high heels looked a damn sight sexier than the boots and camouflage gear.

"What sort of odds against us meeting again? It has to be worth survivors' champagne," I suggested as she sat, and she agreed.

"So, its been eight years, and now you're here on Kauai. What's been your journey since Afghanistan?" I asked once we'd settled.

"The army funds a program for Medics to get themselves a formal nursing qualification. So, I finished that, and since then it's been emergency department nursing or theatre surgery. Here and there, but mostly Southern California.

"Then Dad called a year back. He's by himself and wants to sell up the rental business so he can get himself retired. He'd built a good fleet -- eighty cars - but the books were disorganised. And he'd never really cottoned to the 'hows' of web-marketing, which make all the difference when you are a local taking on the big guys.

"It's much more profitable now, but he still needs a buyer. So, I've stayed here hosing cars and doing the back-office stuff he needed. But that's my main things - how about you?"

"A vaguely similar tale. The family had Gulf shrimp boats and a processing factory in Galveston. When my dad died the business was in a hole. But we managed to fix it by widening out to restaurant supplies, then doing their laundry too, and next the same thing for the tourist hotels. We've still got a few boats, but now it's more about sheets than shrimps.

"Personally - I'm recently divorced and beginning to realize it's a blessing," I said. Sammy nodded sympathetically. "Yeah, I understand. But how's your body holding up? Last time I saw Captain Thurlow he was-- as much as I can remember -- quite a mess. Shrapnel all places."

"It was tough for a while, but I got through. My side still looks like a road map, my left arm's got scars to Africa, and they both give me grief when it's cold. But everything's working now. How about you?"

"They needed to take me back to Kandahar. The surgeons were brilliant and with my being a medic, they gave me the full 'home-team' treatment. But they took out eight bits of Taliban tin, and the rehab programs took ages. You'll have noticed my leg's not quite right.

"Then there's this," she said gesturing to her right eye. "One spike entered above my ear and damaged nerve endings. I can see fine, but what spooks me is lately my eye's gone a touch lazy," she said.

"Nah, you'd hardly notice it," I said. "And I can tell you this for sure -- Lonesome Dove, our wounded medic, looks like she's in great shape!"

"What did you say? Lonesome? Lonesome Who?"

"Lonesome Dove. You didn't know? The platoon liked you so they nick-named you Lonesome Dove."

"Lonesome Dove? Huh? Lonesome - - oh, I think I get it - the medic girl is by herself, and she's Indian too. Hey, that name sounds rather nice -- perhaps I could like it." She smiled to herself. "Dad's mom is Sioux. Gran insisted - no, she flat out demanded -- that my middle name be Red Wing, after her own mom. But somehow Red Wing got dumped when I went to school."

"Did Red Wing make it to your Silver Star citation?"

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