I am trying something different with these stories. Instead of writing a single narrative, I have written 10 vignettes from a relationship. Each chapter alternates between the point of view of the two main characters and is written as if talking to the other person.
In addition, I have written each chapter as a quickie; all of the stories are 1,000 words or less, which is something of a challenge for me. They take place in chronological order, although there may be days, weeks or months between chapters.
Please let me know what you think of this style by leaving a comment or send me feedback via email.
Enjoy!
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He said
In the dark, my eyes flutter open.
My cock is swollen and hard. It's enveloped in something warm and soft.
Looking down, I see the sheet bobbing up and down in my lap.
I am paralysed by your oral ministrations.
Your mouth is magical.
There: I admit it. You have mad blowjob skillz.
You told me you like the submission and the power of giving oral.
The submission of being on your knees and subservient.
And the power to control your partner's orgasm.
Sometimes, you get me off with a quickie. Other times, you make love to me with your mouth long and slow.
When you add in the gentle strokes of your hands or the heavenly softness of your breasts, I can't help but melt.
I know a lot of people who only give head because they feel like they have to. You love it.
Just as I love going down on you.
I sink down into my pillow as you continue to work my cock between your lips.
You do the swirly thing with your tongue that drives me crazy.
In the darkness, I see you pull the sheet down.
Our eyes meet. Your mouth makes that lovely O around my cockhead.
Time seems to stand still as you continue, edging me close to orgasm. Then you back down.
Again and again, you deny me the cum I desperately crave.
When your jaw tires, you stroke my cock with your delicate hands.
Your lips caress the insides of my thighs. You suck my balls into your mouth.
My cock swells when you rake the tip with your fingernails.
And then I'm back in your mouth.
I am in heaven.
The room starts to spin. I feel faint.
After what seems like hours of bliss, you pick up your pace.
Your lips form a seal around me. I resist the urge to push you down on my cock.
Finally, you squeeze my shaft at the base and I let go.
Soft slurping noises are the only sound in the room.
"Fuck!" I gasp as you suck all of the cum out of me.
It seems to go on and on.
When the orgasm subsides, I feel you cuddle up to me.
You kiss me gently on the cheek. "Shhhhhh, you're asleep."
When I wake, you lay on your side, facing me. The pre-dawn light sneaks through from behind the curtains.
I run my hands through your hair. You smile contentedly.