(Author's note)
this is a story that I've been working on for a few years off and on. This is my first submission so would like constructive criticism and advice.
Chapter 1
My name Is David, and this, well, this is my story.
I am 25 years old, 6 foot 2 inches, and 182 lbs, of muscle ( I love to work out.) I have black hair and brown eyes. I'm clean shaven everywhere, and have never been married. My father died when I was about 16; he instilled his work habits in me and how to be self sufficient. My mother died a few years ago, she lived a good life. She taught me how to cook, how to clean and how to love a woman with tenderness; just as my father taught me how to be a man, and protect a woman while also showing tenderness when she needed it. I work at a job that pays great and I love working with my coworkers. I have never really thought of myself as a lady's man, but as you'll find out, it turned out I was to become far more than what I am now.
I worked as a CPA at George & Sons accounting firm, it was a great job, and I had a wonderful home that I saved up for and bought. It was plenty big enough for me. I worked there for over five years and thought my job was secure, but then the economy plummeted. After about 6 months, the company had to lay me off with full severance as well as an opportunity to come back. My life went downhill after I was let go, but I had my father to thank for drilling how to save money into my head. I had a nice nest egg saved away so I could keep my home and car for a while.
I got tired of staying home and not having fun out in public, so I decided to go to a club one night and see if I could have some fun, maybe hook up for a night. Turns out, it wasn't meant to be, and I'm glad of it. As I was leaving the club, after getting turned down several times, I saw a woman walking down the road like she was drunk. She was staggering and leaning against the wall every few seconds like she wanted to throw up. I started to turn away in disgust, but a voice inside my head told me to take a closer look. I noticed that her clothes had been torn and she was disheveled. I ran to offer the woman help, and as I got closer, I noticed that she was bleeding from several cuts.I caught her as she fell and carried her to my car, and placed her in the passenger's seat. As I ran to the driver side of the car, I got out my phone and dialed the hospital to let them know I was coming and what was going on.
It took me almost twenty minutes to reach the hospital. During the drive she was whimpering and curled up in a ball. I could faintly hear her whispering "please no more," "you're hurting me," and "please stop." As we came closer to the hospital, I called the ER again and let them know I was close by and to be ready. I updated them on the sounds she was making and words she was saying, and that I feared she was attacked, or even raped! At the ER, I quickly got out of the car. Just as I opened the door the nurses came out with a bed. As I laid her on the bed, I followed them to the room they assigned her..
As I waited with her for the doctor to arrive, I answered the nurse's questions the best I could. The ER doctor came in and ordered tests and scans to be done. He talked to me about her condition, where I found her, and the words I heard during the drive to the hospital. After an hour, the woman started to wake up and became more aware of her surroundings. I waited until she noticed me before trying to let her know where she was. I let her know she was safe and after a few minutes, she turned her head away and fell back asleep. I notified the nurse that she had woken up briefly, that she didn't seem fully aware, and had a distant look in her eyes before she fell back to sleep.
I gave the nurse my insurance card and told her to try it. I kept my insurance up to date and I knew I could use it for the woman. I also gave my phone number to the nurses at the nurse's station and asked if the nurse would give it to the woman when she woke up. I had to go home. I was helping a friend early in the morning with a moving job he had. I knew he needed help and I was the only one who agreed to help him.
Two days later, while working out at home, I got a call from a number I didn't recognize. I almost didn't answer because it was a private number, but I decided to answer anyway.
"Hello, this is David, can I help you?"
"Hello, this is Jessica. I was given this number by the nurses at The Hallowed God Hospital. Is this the man who brought me to the hospital?" she asked.
"OH, Hi! Are you feeling better?" I asked.
"I'm getting better, just sore all over. I wanted to call and thank you, it was really kind of you." she said.
"I'm just glad I was there when I was and was able to help." I said.
After a few seconds "So am I, I'm not sure I would have survived that."
"Are you feeling up to having coffee later today, to talk?" I asked her.
"Yes! I would like to get a coffee, say, in an hour? We could meet at Quincy's downtown?" she asked.
"I would love to, I'll meet you there." I said.
After I hung up the phone, I took a quick shower, since I was working out in my home gym. About forty-five minutes later, I arrived at the coffee shop and picked a table close to the entrance out on the patio. I looked around enjoying my favorite pastime, observing people in everyday life. After a few minutes, I saw this red haired, 5'6" bombshell walking down the street, and I waved to her. As she walked towards me, I could see she was limping. I stood up and pulled her chair out for her, then waved a waitress over, and we proceeded to order drinks.
"So, how is your day so far?" I asked.
"It's ok, I've just been taking it easy." She said.
"If I may ask, what happened that night?" I asked.
"My husband came home drunk and, as usual, angry at every little thing. I guess I didn't do what he wanted fast enough, or his way, and he got mad and started beating me. I don't know how I got to where you found me but I'm very thankful you did. I don't know if I would have survived that night." She said while looking down at the table.
I could see the pain behind her eyes with the memory. I tried to change the subject for a while to take her mind off those memories. For a while we talked about the weather and her plans, if any, that she has for herself and what she wants to do. Eventually, we get back on that night, so I ask her why she stays with him. She told me, "My two kids, I have to protect my twin girls!" She looked down after the waitress left and said, "My Husband is very aggressive and possessive, he has threatened to kill me and my kids if I ever leave him. There is no one that can help me, so I'm stuck taking whatever he throws at me and I have to live with it." As I watch her talking, I can see she is breaking down from the tear rolling down her cheek.
The tears started coming down and I started to understand how helpless she felt. My heart went out to her and without realizing or thinking about it, my hand reached out to her and cupped her beautiful face, softly wiping away her tears. She looked up at me and gave me such a big beautiful smile. My heart did backflips, surprising me.
"What about your parents? Any family?" I asked.
"My parents died about a year ago, I wasn't able to go to their funeral. I'm an only child and my husband's family is almost as bad as he is. My kids mean the world to me, I fear for their future, but I can't do anything to protect them from this!" she exclaimed.
"Have you contacted the police about this?" I asked her.
She laughed as she told me, "Most of the police department higher ups ARE his family and will protect him! There is one friend I have, but I don't want to involve her, or get her hurt!"
"I can understand that." I said.