Hi! This is my very first post on here and it's a little scary to put my stuff out there. I would like to know your thoughts about the writing I do and I'm looking for all kinds of feedback, I'd love to grow as a writer. I'm mostly writing my stories on a me/you base, but please let me know if a me/him or a she/him would read better. English isn't my native language, so any grammar mistakes; I'm sorry, please point them out to me! Enjoy reading it :)
We are finally on our getaway, we needed that so much. To get away from the real world. Exploring nature, different places and each other. It is the early morning and I'm still in bed, snoozing after a late night of a lot of fucking, talking and a little bit of drinking. You wake up and see me lying there, naked. You smile as you see the welts all over my back and decide not to wake me up early this morning. Instead you decide to go for a run, get some exercise which not requires your cock as it has been in constant use for days now. You dress yourself, you whisper in my ear that you will be right back and give me a gentle kiss on my head.
After a few minutes I have realised what just happened and I suddenly feel the craving in my body for you and my head is in a subspace. My body needs you and I need to please your body and mind. I get out of bed, take a quick shower and I put on my heels, knowing that you'd enjoy seeing that when you come back from your run. Just wearing my heels and the welts and bruises on my body from the night before. Through the window I see you coming back. I rush to the living room where I kneel down, right where you see me when you come through the door. My hands are on my legs, my head down, looking at the floor.
When you come in and close the door behind you I quickly look up and say 'Good morning Sir, what do you want for breakfast this morning?' Fully aware that at that moment you want to have me and only me. I could catch just a glimpse of the corners of your mouth going up as I quickly look down again, avoiding eye contact. Instead of answering my question and telling me exactly what you want, like you normally do as you know putting your needs into words will make me slightly uncomfortable and shy, which entertains you. You walk towards me, grab me by my arm, pull me up and drag me to a dresser next to the stairs.
Without saying a word you bend me over the dresser and you start to tie my hands to the bars of the stairs. My arms wide open, knowing that it would make me feel more vulnerable. You want my mind sharp and on edge. Thoughts running through my head, this is not what I had in mind or expected. A little bit of panicking, not knowing what you're going to do to me but still trusting you enough to let you go your way. I'm resisting a little bit and when I want to turn my head to see what you're planning to do, you force my cheek onto the top of the dresser. I feel the cold wood against my nipples and I feel my pussy getting more and more wet.
The resisting has also cost me the freedom of my legs. You tie them up, each leg on a side just so I can't move at all. The position I'm in, arms wide open, legs spread, the vulnerability has made my breathing heavier. The desire I had for you this morning has only grown stronger. I need you to touch me, I need you to enter my body. I want the unknown and I want it now.
At this point I can feel myself dripping down my leg and all of a sudden I feel your tongue on my thigh, licking up my juices. 'This is what I want for breakfast', you say with a light groan. I gasp for air and a moan slips out of my mouth, unconsciously I'm trying to move my pussy closer to your mouth. Then I feel your hand, landing flat and hard on my ass cheek. 'Stand still'. Quickly I grab the bars with my hand as tight as I can, trying not to move feeling your handprint burning on my ass and I'm enjoying it. I feel your tongue again, this time directly on my clit. I did not expect this as you normally can tease me for hours. My legs start shaking and I'm having trouble to stand firmly on my high heels, I can't help myself but to moan and I'm moving my hips once again trying not to cum right away as my mind and my body are both so on edge.