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Part Deux
Danielle faced her old nemesis again. She'd cornered it into submission. Making absolutely sure she was going to reign victorious over this stupid piece of manmade crap. Danielle slid her access card through the slot. A pleasant ding announced that it would accept her as its passenger. Danielle smiled and let the good vibes flow. That is until the double doors opened and her friend from yesterday stepped inside.
They stood shoulder to shoulder. Neither acknowledging the other for fear of recognition of what he or she had done. Danielle of course remembered the mind-blowing orgasm she'd had at the hands of her elevator companion precisionly well. She'd had two post-orgasms just thinking about it while she painted her toenails last night.
He on the other hand seemed uninterested in her and unfazed that she was riding alongside him, again, to their respective destinies. She, to go prove to her boss that she was in fact not wearing undergarments; he, to go save the world from back taxes or whatever it was he did on the thirty-second floor.
The awkward silence lasted all of ten seconds.
"Unbutton your blouse," he said not even bothering to look at her as he spoke. Danielle felt something quiver deep inside of her. An ovary perhaps.
Her fingers traced the seams of her blouse. They were crisp, freshly ironed and completely ready to be pulled apart to expose what lay beneath. In all of her female wisdom, she decided to do more than the primp and prep. She moisturized everything within hands reach. Shea lotion does wonders or as Marco would call it, "The white woman's cocoa butter." Thinking about the elevator operator inside, outside, and back inside again got Danielle salivating upstairs and down. She was an adult, she made her bed, her coffee, and was starting to make actual meals instead of resorting to Lean Cuisines. If this was wrong, this whatever it was between her, her boss, and the mystery man beside her, then she'd ride it out so to speak as far as the wrong turn took her.
Danielle began unbuttoning, one, two , then three buttons, all the way to her belly button. Her elevator companion didn't blink an eye. Her fingers shivered, trying to explain to the brain that they'd done their job, there was no need to go further. Danielle pushed through this reaction, unbuttoning her blouse till she'd reached the last cream white button. He hadn't reacted yet. Then the elevator stopped. Someone would be joining them in a few seconds. That was not enough time to re-do what she had undone.
The doors slid apart and a lawyer named Dixon Jenkins stepped in. He noticed right away that her blouse was parted, her breasts pressing through like two puppies begging to be petted and her companion's nonchalant expression. Danielle had only time to button the last two at the bottom, the slightest wrong angle from Dixon could give him his morning pick-me-up. Dixon stared momentarily, as if stone cold on where he was originally going.
"It's a titty bit nipply out there isn't it?" Floor thirty-two asked to break the ice.
"Sure is."
Danielle shifted her weight onto the left foot, then the right. No matter how she stood, it was achingly apparent that her two girls were visible to the newest member of the mile high club. Every second that ticked away had him shifting his eyes to her neckline and the crisp button down that flared out to assist in the exposure. Thirty-two hummed a tune behind her and moved his body a hair to the left. Just enough to see down her shirt. Actually, neither of her elevator mates had to worry about staring directly at her chest. All they had to do was look at the mirror tiled ceiling. Dannielle's tit's perked up as if on cue. Ready for their close up.
A pin dropped and everyone heard it. Actually it was a pen.
"Could you pick that up, sweetie."