People seemed to like Karen's story, here is Chapter 2. Let me know what you think, both good and bad. I try to edit my stories but I haven't found a good editor yet to help, so there could be a few typo's.
Jack
Chapter 2 β More denial and humiliation
August 23rd, 2008
Karen stayed naked after getting out of the shower except for her robe. She knew she was going to chat with her new online friend Jack and he liked her naked when they talked online.
She hoped he would have more of the story for her to read as well.
She had played with her clit in the shower. She couldn't help herself. Her session two days ago with Jack was very hot. He knew how to get her hot, wet, and horny fast. She hoped for more fun and maybe another orgasm today.
She looked at the clock and signed on to Yahoo, she was glad to see he was already online.
KarenCum : Just got back online.
John Dough : OK - I've got something for you to read
John Dough : Hang on a second
KarenCum : ok
Her phone rang, it was her husband Tim.
KarenCum : brb
John Dough : ok I just sent it, I have a little more to add, but someone walked in on me as I was writing it.
John Dough : I'll send the final part of chapter 4 in just a few minutes.
KarenCum : ok, give me a minute im on the phone, sorry
She typed that quickly to John and tried to focus on her call with Tim. She told him what she wanted him to buy for dinner tonight then quickly hung up with him. While she loved her husband Tim, he was too nice. She discovered in college that she liked to be dominated sexually, and Tim just didn't have that in him. He would tease her but not dominate her like her roommate Christy. Her computer beeped bringing her back to reality.
John Dough : That's fine, writing the end to Chapter 4 . . .
John Dough : Are you dressed at all or are you dressed how I like?
KarenCum : I have a robe on.
John Dough : Nice, but you know I want you naked. Take it off
KarenCum : just opening up mail now
John Dough : I have a little more to chapter 4 to send, I'm almost totally done with it
KarenCum : ok im just starting to read threw it again.
John Dough : Read the story naked, let me know how your body reacts. You might need a towel
John Dough : Are you naked?
KarenCum : just a terry robe, you dont want me to freze do you?
John Dough : Take off the robe and put it on your feet..
John Dough : You're smart enough to figure that out Karen.
John Dough : It' s better if you read the story totally naked, like you'll be with Jenny.
KarenCum : ok
Karen took her robe off and put it on her feet. Sitting naked in her living room for Jack was more exciting than she expected. She let her hand drift down to her pussy, it was wet and slick with her excitement. She slowly started to rub her clit as she read the story. The details were rich and detailed, it was easy to imagine herself in the story.
John Dough : You know Jenny will want to keep you naked most of the time you two are together
John Dough : It makes the story more real
KarenCum : I had not thought about hat.
KarenCum : that
John Dough : Plus you can tell me if your nipples get hard
KarenCum : yes you seam to want to keep it as real as you can.
She was done with Chapter 1 and the action was only just getting started. Even so, her nipples ached and her fingers were very wet with her slick cream.
John Dough : Or if you pussy gets really wet as you read Chapter 4
KarenCum : they were hard already
KarenCum: from shaving
John Dough : Ah - good to know.
John Dough : I haven' t put that in Chapter 4 , but I'll add that to chapter 5 .
John Dough : I know you'll like it the more real we make it. So reading the story naked, chatting naked is good. You'll feel more a part of the story.
KarenCum : if you say so
KarenCum : but im having a hard time trying ot read it and chat
Karen couldn't do two things at the same time real well. Her mind was distracted by the story and the heat from her sex. She tried to read more of the story but he continued to ask questions.
John Dough : Then just sit there naked, and read the story, let me know when you're done
KarenCum : ok
Karen quickly focused on the story and read as fast as she could. She loved the detail in the story and she was soaking the seat of her chair. Thankfully she was sitting in wooden chair so it didn't matter. She was surprised by how wet she was and how wet the chair was. Her ass was literally sliding on the seat of the chair. She was going to have to get a towel.
KarenCum : just finished
KarenCum : it looks really really good so far
KarenCum : saw a few missing words, but understood it
KarenCum : did not take time to correct as I was in a hurry to see what happend
John Dough : If you can reply and fill in the missing words that would help.
KarenCum : love the details.
John Dough : I am getting ready to send you the end of Chtr 4, you'll like the additional details
Karen loved how he wrote, how he put her into the story and made it about her. She loved how nasty she was in the story. She pinched her clit hard so she didn't get too close and climax. She loved denying her orgasm. Her orgasms were always bigger and better if she delayed it. Her roommate Christy would do that to her. Tease her, play with her pussy while Karen licked and sucked hers. Christy wouldn't let Karen cum for a few days and it drove Karen crazy and made her very submissive. The things she did for Christy were very humiliating.
John Dough : OK - just sent the end of Chapter 4. I made up some parts about you and Tim. Feel free to make suggestions where my assumptions are off base.
John Dough : Are you touching yourself now? Or are you being good?
KarenCum : yes touchhing myself, and opeing your mail
She eagerly opened the story and began to read the latest details of her submission. She ran her fingers down to her pussy and got them wet, sucking them clean as she imagined herself in the story. It was very good. Jenny, her mistress in the story, was mean to her just like Christy.
Karen could easily imagine submitting to Jenny. She pumped two, then three fingers into her wet cunt and then licked them clean. She wished Jack knew how wet she was. She wished Jack would make her lick her cum from the seat of the chair. She knew Christy would have made her do that. Christ would laugh at Karen as she submissively licked her own cum from the chair.
She had to pinch her clit again to hold back her orgasm.