I have written nearly all my stories from both the male and female points of view. I did a similar one for the 750 word challenge. This is a short one from just the woman's viewpoint. I'm a man so would like feedback on where I've gone wrong, or maybe not.
Prior to submitting I read many stories on Literotica without giving stars, as an author I like to know what people think so please feel free to award stars, preferably 5.
I think it's getting light, the blindfold is pretty comprehensive when it comes to not being able to see but I think there is some light filtered through. Dawn is at about five or six o'clock so I have been bent over this bench for four or five hours, in total darkness up to now and with ear muffs so I couldn't hear anything. A clip on my nose so I couldn't smell anything and there was nothing to taste.
So I was deprived of four senses which allowed me to concentrate on touch. Where to start? My bum was sore from the paddling he had given me. My pussy was sore from the hard fucking he had given me and my boobs were sore from hanging down with nipple clamps and weights. But worst of all, instead of the soft leather against my lower chest and belly he had covered it with a dirty, spiky door mat, coconut matting I think it's called.
He had fucked me while I was bent over the mat, pushing me backwards and forwards, my belly and ribs felt red raw. The weights on my nipples had swung about and I was dribbling all over the floor through the mouth gag. He finished off by fucking my mouth through the ring gag, most of his spunk ended up on the floor with my dribble.
I slept for a while and now I was waiting, I don't know what for but something will happen soon even if it is only that I pee myself. If I do he will make me lick it up along with all my saliva, he likes a clean floor. My arms and legs are tied to the bench legs. I am so thirsty, breathing through my mouth all night, I have stopped dribbling, I need liquid in one end and out of the other.