Welcome to part two of our story. This series is a multi-part collaboration attempt between two first time Literotica writers (very special thank you to HunnyBunnyGirl for taking this journey alongside me). As we are writing this series is written in tandem, you will notice changes in pronouns. To avoid confusion, we'll be labeling our sections HIS and HERS.
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HERS
As we kiss deeply, I can taste my sweet nectar on your lips, my body still shaking, waves of pleasure still radiating from me, your touch so intoxicating against my skin.
My nipples are still unbelievably hard, looking at your face as you watch Ryan storm away. "DADDY Dom, fuck, you made me feel incredible. Let me make you cum, please," I beg.
I watch you nod in approval, slowly kissing across your bearded cheek, making my way to your ear, whispering, "Someone is happy to see me. Or are you just happy you've humiliated Ryan?"
My fingers glide down your body feeling the contour of your strong muscles, my man's strong body. Reaching into the waistband of your shorts, I lean in and nibble your ear lobe lightly, pulling it with my teeth as I let you go, causing you a little pain before I kiss your neck. Biting you teasingly.
Butterflies arise in my stomach, I'd never felt like this before, and yet here I was, losing all sense of control. I needed to feel your cock against my skin one way or another. FUCK I'm losing my mind, willing to act so slutty. I'd even allowed you to make me orgasm uncontrollably with my friends and family around.
I could see my mom and dad talking at the BBQ and briefly wondered what you and my Dad had spoken about, but I assumed you'd let me know later if it was important.
I can feel your hard cock pressing against your shorts wanting to break free, I cannot possibly describe the way my body is reacting, just being in your presence makes me wet, and mere seconds ago you made me gush like a water fountain in the pool.
I'm just glad the water is hiding how much of a mess we made together. Was I truly in love or was I waking up to new and incredible sensations, the same sensations which made me want to please you in front of my family and friends?
I'd never done something like this. Never before had I submitted my body to a man. I was a feminist, how could I let a man dominate me like this?
The thought of being submissive to you, of giving over my body completely for you to use, sends a chill down my spine and I do the unthinkable, pulling your cock free from your shorts. Looking around, hoping nobody is watching, after Ryan had stormed out, I was on high alert. "Fuck it," I think, it's my turn. I need to please my man.
My fingers grab your cock and begin to gently stroke your shaft, squeezing your cock a little, sending jolts of pleasure down your spine. I start pumping your hard cock up and down without wasting any time.
My hand is slick and wet from the pool water, using the water as a natural lube, your cock growing harder, more rigid in my fingers. I can feel your 7-inch, thick, cut cock throbbing in my hand as I continue slowly stroking you, from base to tip.
That's right Daddy Dom, I've got you too, let me show you my abilities right here and now in the pool. My fingers are sliding over your whole length, smoothly massaging your throbbing shaft, and rubbing the sensitive spot right under the head of your cock. Finally, gliding my hand across the smooth tip I rub the head with my fingers and palm before going back down to the base of your hard cock.
God, I wanted you to fuck me right now, to take my pussy like a whore and let my friends see you cover me in cum, sending it deep inside me, fucking me like a submissive pet. But, this was impossible, so I'd have to settle for making you cum with my hand and mouth at best.
Suddenly we hear my mom calling me to help with fetching the food. God, I hated that it was always the woman's job to serve the food but there was no way I was leaving this pool without making you cum first.
I hear you moaning and writhing against my body and hand, my skill and fluidity nothing like you've felt before as I expertly rub and jerk your cock, driving you crazy with pleasure. After a few seconds, my big Daddy Dom is reduced to a panting, shivering mess in the pool, your cock throbbing against my fingers.
Your balls are tightening, getting ready to explode, but fuck that, I squeeze your cock expertly letting your ejaculate slow allowing me to continue my torture on your cock, I start using both hands one to fondle your full balls, the other stroking your hard cock, thankful to be able to stand in the pool, against the ledge, otherwise this would be an interesting balance act.
Your cock feels incredibly warm in the cold water. Your veins throbbing against my palm and precum dripping freely into the pool from that gorgeous slit.
Hearing you moan, "Damn you're good, you slut," my heart swelled with a sense of pride, and I was getting incredibly turned on again, I had never given a handjob underwater before, let alone this close in the open to friends. My parents could be anywhere, hosting this party. At any moment, they could turn the corner and see us, your cock exposed under the water, my hand pulling on it, my eyes burning a hole through it.
This was a completely different feeling. Accepting my place, admitting my total submission to you, and to that gorgeous cock. I'm sure it wasn't the first time you'd made someone submit like a whore for you, but I certainly was hoping it would be the last.
I was watching you squirm and groan from my touch, fuck, I started pumping you faster, twisting my hand when it reached your cockhead in the way I knew you liked, I could feel your legs shaking and your hips start to thrust as you started fucking my hand.
" You bitch!" you moaned through gritted teeth. "Make me fucking cum," you breathed heavily.
Your face flushed with pleasure, my breathing just as heavy now, my arousal so strong again, excitement coursing through my body. My nipples rock hard, the small power I had over you, now making me smile, knowing this power will be fleeting once you've cum.
I'm stoking you so fast but that isn't enough for you, you're fucking my hand with abandon. Your cock slides up and down in my fingers, your balls bouncing around, and your breathing is erratic as I feel your hands around my neck squeezing tightly.
"Make me cum bitch," you moan.
Your whole body tensed and ready to blow, my hand on your cock quickens its pace moving at rapid speed, as your whole body convulses and you let out a groan. Your cock swells bigger, and violently explodes, your hot creamy cum coating my body, before being washed away into the pool.
HIS
As my breathing begins to regulate, I look into your beautiful eyes, looking back at me with pure adoration. You're so beautiful when you've earned your praise. The sparkle in your eyes gives you away. You're proud of yourself. And you should be. "You made Daddy feel so good, princess," I say, reaching out and tucking your hair behind your ear.
"Thank you, Daddy," you say, as I lean into you and cover those perfect lips with mine. Allowing my tongue to enter your mouth. Swirling with yours. We break our kiss just as our breathing is beginning to increase in intensity. I pull back, and press my hand against the side of your cheek, my thumb lightly rubbing it. You nuzzle deeper into my palm, pressing your face more strongly into it as I lean in and whisper in your ear, "Let's get out of this pool before I make you ride my cock in front of this whole fucking party."
I can tell you are intrigued, you're biting your lip, looking so fucking hot that despite your having just made me explode, my cock twitches. "He just can't get enough of you," I chuckle, "come on let's go be social," I say, climbing out of the pool and extending my hand to help my little girl out.
The motivation for my chivalry is twofold. Both selfish and unselfish. You've earned my courtesy, my protection. I simply want to carry the weight of the world for you. Selfishly, helping you affords me an exquisite view. Exposing your perfect body to me inch by inch as it breaks the surface of the water. As soon as both feet are on solid ground, I lift you up into my arms, one hand under your legs, perilously close to your ass, feeling the heat radiating from that pussy of yours, the other supporting your neck.