This is my first submission here, and I hope you enjoy. It is an excerpt from a potentially longer tale. The premise is the Beauty and the Beast story, with a twist: the man becomes the Beast over time, and must be whipped back to the man again each time, so that Beauty becomes his keeper rather than the other way around. Note: does include some blood/edge play, don't read if that isn't your cup of tea.
It is time. I see the awareness in his eyes, even as the beast subsumes the man. He kneels on the flagstones by the fire gingerly, as if already in pain. I believe the transformation does hurt, as the two natures struggle within for dominance. But not as much as he will hurt in a moment.
I go to the box by the fire and delicately pull out my gloves. They are made of soft and thick leather, even thicker than his hide. He watches as I pull them on and smooth down between each finger, eyes shifting between heat and aggression.
I stride across the room to the basket, where I have gathered a few long, supple and wicked rose canes - not the innocent roses just unfurling, but mature flowers with a scent that wraps itself in a cloud around us, just tipping the balance between maturity and decay. I choose one twice as long as my arm, branching in the middle and heavy at the end with many blossoms. I sit in my high-backed chair and carefully strip the first foot of the cane, watching the beast from the corner of my eye as he watches me. Then I firmly wrap the cane around my hand, under and around three times and hold it tightly in my palm.
As I approach the fire his hackles rise. Some months the man prevails and some months the beast - this month still hangs in the balance - but since I own both, I always win in the end. I come to rest in front of him, where he hangs his head down but begins to show a fang. I part my legs, widen my stance. The beast has a very good sense of smell and a growl rises up from his loins, more felt than heard.
"Beast," I say, to goad him, although I am still speaking to the man, "will you submit, or will I wrest it from you?"
He growls again in return, but as I point to my feet he bows his head even lower and instinct takes over, for I have trained some control into him. He kisses and then licks the tip of my boot, then kneels up and kisses and licks the hand holding the cane.
"I will only ask you one more time, Beast. You know this is for your own good, although -" I laugh "you can smell that I'm not complaining. Will you submit? It will go better for you if you do."
He makes an inarticulate, animal noise.
I swiftly rap him on the nose with my knuckles, a gesture more humiliating than painful. He looks up into my eyes in sorrow and says thickly, "Yes, Mistress." He is not quite lost to himself yet.
"Good Beast," I say, and his hackles settle as he forces his body to my will. "You may move between blows, but do not flinch away from the cane or you will regret it."
I move behind him, use my free hand to give one deep stroke from shoulder to rump, feeling through the coarse fur the fine trembling of his body. Then I pull back my arm and strike.
We settle into a rhythm and the miracle begins. Scent and heat surrounds me as I sink into the moment as surely as he does, until nothing exists in the world but fire, sweat, blood, and the overripe roses. He recoils after each blow but not before, causing both pride and heat to well up within me. He growls constantly as the cane strikes and rises, and sometimes the growl rises to a whine of pain as I draw blood. As I flog him the petals rain down around him, settling on him and sticking to bloody and sweaty skin. I peel away the layers of fur-covered flesh and catch my breath as I do every time, for underneath is the perfect, raw skin of the man.
It takes minutes or hours, but by the end we are both shaking, and he is red and slick and tender as a newborn. I know the moment when the beast gives up to the man, for the growls turn into words, a mantra of "mistress" and "thank you". The cane is now nearly barren of petals, and many thorns have dislodged and remained in his skin. I throw it into the fire, which receives it with wet pops and hisses. I stalk to my chair. Sometimes at this moment I feel that the beast leaves him and flows into me, for the smell of his blood and sweat and even, as he crawls to my feet, his tears, has made me ravenous.
He kisses my feet reverently and works his way up my boots to my calves. My skin flinches everywhere I feel his lips, the feeling almost as rich as pain. He knows the next step in our dance and as I shift impatiently to pull my skirt around my waist he inhales. I know he can see the blood pulse beneath my skin, the wetness glistening on the wood like dew where I brushed up against it. First he licks the moisture from the wood, then lifts his nose and barely lets it brush my flesh. I allow him to pay homage for a moment, then I clasp his head between my thighs and force him in deep, letting him up only occasionally for a heaving breath.
He works my folds with his tongue and lips and occasionally teeth until I am bucking against him. The beast likes the next part but the man does not. I tilt myself up even farther, and I hear a muffled, "please, Mistress" but I still push his head down until he gives in and licks from my pussy all the way back between my cheeks. His tongue plays around my hole, tentatively at first and then bolder when I let him know with a painful tug on his hair that that will not do. He quivers from shame as I tell him to penetrate me, but his tongue stiffens and slowly opens me while I bear down against him.
As he fucks my ass with his tongue I look down at my beautiful man. His skin still looks raw, the firelight glistening off the occasional welt on his back. His arms are boxed behind his back as I have taught him, fingers clenched on elbows, keeping him off balance, but he still manages to thrust his hips helplessly as he eats me. Although I cannot see them, I know that his knees are red and marked by the stone, and his cock is pulsing and leaking onto the floor. He loves the shame, does my beast, and even when his mouth protests his cock still greedily begs for more.