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Carnal 4

Carnal 4

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Carnal, the most luxurious den of sin in the city was how the website had described it. Thistle wasn't sure which was more of a surprise, that she got over her nerves to come. Or that the bouncer had let her through to the front desk. She had tried her best to look like she belonged. A sheer mesh crop top with a black push up bra. A short black leather skirt, matching boots. Her auburn locks cascaded, her vibrant fur radiated cleanliness. But despite her efforts and getting past the bouncer, she wasn't guaranteed entry yet.

A tiger with a chunk of his ear missing was scanning over her medical documents. Documents required for entry. It may be a sex club to pursue carnal desires but safety came first it seemed. He completed his examination, then regarded her with an unexpected kindness.

"It's your first time. Correct?" He asked in a voice that said he already knew the answer.

"Oh yes, sorry." She answered, sounding much less sure.

He nodded, her paperwork vanishing under the desk, the sound of a shredder echoing in the entrance way. He then grabbed a shiny white bracelet.

"Give me your arm please." She presented it promptly, without a single query. He was quick to secure it tight enough to stop it from falling off.

"The white shows everyone you're new." He explained once done. "When you enter the club, go to the bar first. The bartenders will explain the rules, got it?"

"Um yes sir." That got a grin with a half fang showing.

"Go on then and welcome to Carnal, Miss Cromwell."

With that she was dismissed. She slipped past the doors, the dark stairs lit by throbbing red lights. She followed them down until she emerged into a world of flashing lights and erotic scenes.

A bar whose front lit up with the beat of the music sat on the right, booths lining the rest of the walls. A large imposing door was in the back wall and in the center was the dance floor with a raised platform in the middle. There was a sea of bodies on the floor but she turned her gaze away after noticing countless people undressed. Hey eyes landed on a half-circle of windows on the second floor that stuck out over some of the booths.

But she couldn't hide from the acts going on. It was why she had come. She let her gaze shift back. A cat was on their knees pleasing a man to the far left. A woman was squished between two men grinding at a booth. One may have been inside her but they were too close to tell. Scenes after scenes were playing out wherever she looked.

A hand found her shoulder and she jumped before calming herself. It was a wolf with fur the same color as her hair. His uniform was similar to the doorman's and the bouncer signaling him as staff. "Bar." She thought he said though his voice was lost to the music.

It was enough to get her moving. She mouthed thanks and worked her way to the massive structure. She started to feel eyes on her but tried to ignore them. She knew what she was here. Fresh meat to be appraised and pursued. Images played of her on her knees like the cat. Would any of the watching eyes want her in that position? She could hope or tonight would be a rather big letdown. Who couldn't get laid at a sex club?

She found a clear spot at the bar and waited for the bartender to notice her. She could count five shifting and dancing around each other serving waiting patrons. A snow leopard girl with a pink ponytail and a top that nearly pushed her breasts out was the first to notice her. She made her way over with a large grin, noticing the band.

"Hey, a newbie. Nice to meet you, I'm Melody."

"Thistle." She tried speaking louder to be heard over the music, and Melody nodded, indicating that it worked.

"Nice to meet you, Thistle. From this point on I'm your chaperone. If you feel uncomfortable or forget the rules any of us can help. But I will be personally responsible for you having a good time. That said, there are rules..."

"Melody, I need help." Another bartender called from further down the bar.

Melody's happy demeanor dropped. In fact, she looked rather unsure, panicked. She muttered something Thistle was sure was of the vulgar nature.

"I can wait." She always hated being a bother.

"Sorry, it's just." Melody started her shoulder sinking, Then she bounced back her smile returning. "I have a newbie of my own. Stay right here and I'll be back."

"Ok."

With that Melody bolted. Thistle lost sight of her behind a large man leaning on the bar talking to a woman who was naked from the waist up. Seconds passed slowly as Thistle waited feeling unsure and out of place.

"Hey there." A slurred voice said from behind her.

She turned to see a lean tall man with the features of a ferret that reeked of sweat and booze. It took some mental willpower for her to not visibly react to the smell.

"Umm hi."

"Hey." He repeated his introduction. "You're new here, right?"

"I am." She doubted it but hoped a short response would drive him away.

Nope, instead his eyes lit up. "I knew it, I can always tell." Thistle bit her tongue instead of pointing out the clear white band around her wrist.

"So, you're a submissive as well. I can tell that too." He carried on.

"Maybe." She didn't want to give her label to this creep. This was rustling her in all the wrong ways. Her body was on edge and her hackles were starting to rise.

"You are, I can tell. Can I give you some beginner advice?"

"I'm actually waiting for the bar-"

"Psh, they just tell you a script. I know how it really works. Like the first rule is that submissives like you should always listen to dominants like me." He interrupted and held up his wrist showing a black and red band, like she knew what the colors meant. He really didn't understand the being new thing.

But even if it was all new Thistle knew that didn't sound right. "I think-"

"Don't talk over me until I'm done." He tried to order but the slurring words took any authority away.

She bit her tongue hoping to hold out until Melody came back. The man was about to carry on when someone bumped into him, pressing him against Thistle.

"Fuck it's too packed. Let's dance and talk."

"I'm supposed-" He cut her off again by grabbing her arm and yanking her towards the dance floor. He was rather strong so she let him lead not wanting to risk injury. She swept her gaze across the bar, spotting Melody in shock. The leopard immediately began talking into her bracelet upon seeing her.

The man hadn't noticed and found a clearing on the floor. He let go of her wrist and started to grind against her. It was an attempt but even that was too strong of a word for his awful dance moves.

"Start dancing sexy." He shouted over the music.

"I'm going-"

"I said dance like a good girl." No, this had gone too far. She was new but not a pushover.

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"I'm going back to the bar." She stepped back, not waiting for a response. She didn't see the hand that struck her across the muzzle. She reeled, struggling to remain upright. Now she was pissed.

"That is what happens-" Someone in the sea of onlookers decked him, finally cutting him off. He didn't keep his balance as well as her and crashed to the floor in a heap. Gasps filled the room. It became quiet as the music stopped.

Her savior was a wolf with black fur tinted with gray. His height was imposing, and a tailored suit clung to his physique. But it was the anger in his yellow eyes that got her attention. He didn't even look at her, only the man and she already felt scared.

"You will not strike anyone in my club." He said in a deep voice that hit all the right notes for Thistle.

"I got saved by the owner? There goes keeping a low profile." she thought.

"Fuck you." The drunk man managed to get up, rising to a sitting position. "You know how much money I spend here in your shitty club?"

That got the owner's lips to curl, gleaming white teeth on display. "You think I run this club for profit? This is my personal haven and you're pissing all over it. Get out and never come back."

The owner started to stroll away but the man wasn't done. He wobbled to his feet and tried to take a swing. The auburn wolf from earlier moved like a blur and tackled him to the floor. It did get the owner's attention back on him. He turned to kneel next to the struggling man. He drew a black pistol and pressed it to the man's temple.

"At any moment I can kill you. It doesn't matter who you are, who your daddy is, or how much power or money you have. Use that brain of yours to remember that before I have to splatter it on my nice clean floor."

He got back up holstering the gun. "Get him out." He ordered. The auburn wolf lifted the man to his feet, manhandling him toward a door near the bar. Thistle watched but she could feel eyes on her again. The owner's gaze was now on her with a cold disinterest.

"Follow me."

He didn't wait for a response so she didn't provide one following behind as ordered. As they reached a hidden staircase the music returned and the club came back to life. She followed him up a dark hallway to a door with a guard standing on duty. He stood aside, opening the door for them without a word.

Inside she found a mixture of luxury office and VIP suite. Windows overlooked the entire club. He left her in the doorway gawking as he sat in a leather chair behind a gorgeous wooden desk. He nodded and the door shut, barely missing her tail.

"You hurt?" The question was kind but his tone didn't carry that.

She shook her head. "I'm a tough fox, sir."

That got a slight response, a split second of a smile. "Not very bright though. You disobeyed the instructions all new guests receive."

"Ouch, asshole." She thought before responding. "The bartender...he dragged me away."

"I know but you still have to account for your own actions in the situation." She knew to a small degree he was right so she kept quiet, not willing to admit it.

"Why are you here, Miss Cromwell?" Hearing her name in his voice made her stomach flip and it was hard to remain cool.

"Thistle, please."

"Archer. Now answer my question, Thistle." Yeah, it was even better hearing her first name. But she noticed something. For a moment he smirked. He knew the effect he was having. He didn't give a shit about her. This was all a little game he was playing. Well, if this was a game, she was going to play too.

"What do you think I'm doing here?" She fired back, stepping forward hand on her hip. She may have been scared to come here, but she despised being manipulated. Even more so than an asshole slapping her.

"Causing me a headache so far." He retorted, leaning back in his chair, no longer hiding the amusement.

"You're the one that let him in."

"And you had no backbone. You let that man coerce you without even the slightest fight." How did he know that?

"Well...your system is flawed." It was a weak response and she knew it as well as him. He grinned, savoring his victory.

"Go back to the bar Thistle. Melody is indisposed currently but any of the other bartenders can fill her role. Try to be more aware and perhaps you will find a decent master that wants you for the night."

He didn't have to call her out as submissive like that. But as she looked at him leaning back all confident in his victory her stomach flipped again. The smart thing was to take his advice, she knew that but he had just said she wasn't too bright.

"What about you?" She asked, adding a coyness to her voice.

"What about me?" He asked, sitting forward, leaning on his elbows.

"Are you a master or submissive?"

"Master." He said as if the question offended him. "And not a one-night stand kind."

"How about long term then?"

He arched an eyebrow at that. He rose from his desk reminding her how much taller he was. He came around standing inches from her.

"Why are you so eager to submit to me, fox?"

"Thistle and you tell me, wolf."

He stared her down until she couldn't handle it and looked away.

"Either way my answer is no."

"Why?" She fired back, a bit put out by his quick rejection.

"You're new and soft. I require more than you could give to be one of my playthings." His eyes left hers and he turned to return to his seat.

"Try me." That made him turn back to face her. He didn't respond at first then the smirk was back, that stupid sexy smirk.

"Alright." He gestured to a couch that overlooked the club. "Get comfortable. There is to be entertainment tonight. Watch it, go home, and think if you could do that. Then come back tomorrow and tell me your answer. But either way I'll be doing my research on you. If you pose any threat I will end you."

It was a clear threat but held no menace to her. A report about her word would most likely kill him from boredom. Being here was her one great brave achievement.

"What's the entertainment?"

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His eyes lit up as if he was hoping for that question. "We have a rule for the staff here. You fail at your job, you pay a fee or become entertainment for as long as I rule fits the crime. Melody chose the latter."

Thistle's heart sank at this revelation. "She's being punished because of me and that ass?"

"She's being punished for fucking up her job. Don't be so egotistical." She didn't know what she hated more, that he was learning her buttons so quickly or that it turned her on.

"What if I took her punishment for her?" As soon as she said the words she knew it was a stupid offer. But she wasn't going to watch this knowing she was the cause. Besides he wanted proof she could handle him.

For the first time his ice mask dropped and genuine surprise filled his face. "You would take her punishment with no questions asked?"

She shrugged. "I doubt you will do anything that will leave long term physical damage."

"And what about mental? Going too far past your limits?"

"I'm kinkier than you think and besides you said if I want to serve you, I will be doing stuff like this."

He shook his head as if in disbelief and strolled back to his desk. He stared at her as he picked up his phone and waited for an answer.

"Send Melody to my office." He said before putting it back down. He took his seat again leaving Thistle standing there in awkward silence. She swished her tail anxiously until the door creaked open. Melody slunk in looking rather less confident than earlier. She locked eyes with Thistles as if hoping for mercy.

"Melody." Archer spoke, drawing all attention to him. "You decided to take punishment, correct?"

"Yes, sir and may I..." She fell silent as he raised a hand.

"You don't need to kiss ass. You're a perfect employee besides tonight and are still in line for what we discussed last week. Besides Thistle here, who was the cause of the issue, has offered to take on your punishment."

"Seriously?" Melody exclaimed, her eyes going wide as she looked at Thistle.

"I figured it was my fault, I should take responsibility." She shot Archer a glare at that last part.

"I've accepted her offer as we have a little wager going. Take her to the staging area and help her prepare. You're her assistant tonight so you can see the bullet you dodged. Oh, and cut it to half the time since she's new."

"I can take the full punishment." No way was she letting him be so smug after she did this.

Both looked at her. "You should take the offer." Melody whispered.

She got no chance to respond as Archer beat her to it. "She said full time so she gets that. You're both dismissed. Oh, and Thistle, put on a good show for me."

There were no more words as Melody turned to leave. Thistle following behind. They didn't speak until they were halfway down the hallway going the opposite way of the stairs.

"Holy shit, you're crazy, girl." Melody exclaimed. "What fucking wager do you have to do this?"

Thistle felt rather embarrassed suddenly at how forward she had been with Archer. She was never like that but something in him irked and drove her mad. "If he didn't say I don't think I should."

"Probably true. Do you even know what you signed up for?" When Thistle shook her head, she let out a laugh. "Yeah, crazy is an understatement. Come on, let's get you ready."

She was led down the hallway to another flight of stairs and the room past them. It was full of racks of costumes, vanities, and an insane amount of props. Melody's voice rang out, leaving her with little time to take it all in.

"I'll get what you need so go ahead and strip." She ordered before vanishing into the racks of costumes.

Strip? Melody's remarks about being crazy were starting to make sense now. How stupid had she been to agree to this with no knowledge? She could still be smart though. Back out now, screw over Melody. No, she wouldn't do that. Besides, she would hate seeing that stupid smirk on Archer's face again.

She didn't even understand why she hated it so much. Yeah, he was tall and hot. And had a voice like a siren's call tuned into her. But he was also an ass, stranger, and clearly dangerous. So why was she trying to prove him wrong? It was borderline an obsession that had formed in one night

Snapping fingers brought her back to the here and now. "Hellooo?" Melody called out. "I told you to strip unless you want me to do it for you." She ended with a wink causing blood to rush to Thistle's cheeks.

"I'm good, sorry." She said getting to work on her top.

"Shame." Melody didn't look away as she stripped, just watching and waiting. A normal day this would be the weirdest thing to happen. It didn't take long for Thistle to be completely nude and get a nod of approval.

"Perfect in every aspect. So, since you have black fur on your wrists, I got black rope to match."

"Why do I need rope?" Thistle asked, alarmed.

"Don't worry I'm not tying you up. It's for a rope harness. It will be mostly decorative for your chest but will also give me a rope lead to guide you."

"Oh ok." She guessed that sounded logical.

Melody moved closer measuring a length of rope. "Being your chaperone is definitely coming with some perks."

Thistle stayed quiet as Melody fully got to work. She seemed experienced with this sort of thing and moved quickly and precisely. The only issue was that loose hands kept brushing her breasts, which was rather pleasant. She thought it was an accident until a flick on her nipple made her yelp. She caught Melody's smile then and turned a whole new shade of red.

In a prompt amount of time a rope harness sat secure against her chest with a rope leading right Melody's hands. They tested it out walking over to a mirror to give Thistle a look. It was a struggle at first adjusting her stride but she got the hang of it quickly. Though when she saw herself, she nearly fell over.

She had always been petite. Small in height even with her large ears, waist, and breasts. The harness weaved intricate patterns around her breasts making them look desirable and lush. No wonder Melody had toyed with them, she was tempted to herself.

"So, what do you think? Not that it matters, it's staying on."

"It looks good."

"I can sense a bit of downplay there. You look fantastic. Normally there would be other accessories but as it's your first time, you aren't allowed. You will have to wear a blindfold though." She held up the black satin fabric with gold embroidered letters of the club name.

"Why?"

"The thrill, protect your identity, and so on. It's why I have the guide rope. Now remember, consent is key. At any point you can end it by giving me the middle finger since I will be right there. Thumbs up though means yes. That said it is a scene so I'll be playing a role too. Try not to take anything said out there to heart and you'll be fine."

"So, like acting?"

"Acting with lots of action." A voice crackled over Melody's wrist communicator. "Yeah, we're ready to go," she responded before refocusing on Thistle.

"Show time." She quickly secured the blindfold over her eyes, plunging the world into darkness. She was now at the mercy of a girl she had just met. Hopefully taking her punishment meant something.

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