As I read what I had written, I cried out to the heavens to help me make sense of it.
An angel took pity on my plight and descended unto me.
This Angel spoke these wise words:
"Fear not the 'Volunteer Editor Program.
They're waiting to help!"
With her patience and guidance, we worked together to make it a better story.
When it was finished, we read it, and it was
GOOD.
Reading Chapter 1 of 'Visiting Aunt Gwen,' will greatly aid in putting the characters in their proper perspectives.
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Thickfinger
Reverberating in the semi-enclosed driveway, the horn of the Mustang seemed surprisingly loud, Gwen Philips thought to herself as she leaned on it, hoping to spur her nieces to get moving. She was even prepared to give the girls another blast if they didn't appear damn soon!
Gwen expelled a loud sigh, wondering if her shortened temper had stemmed from the regret that she was feeling for the events that had transpired earlier in the morning. She had caught the girls going through her most personal things. No matter how she justified it in the deeper recesses of her mind, Gwen still felt tremendously guilty. Regardless of the fact that it was some of the best sex that she could ever remember, her brother had asked her to watch over his girls, not to screw their brains out at her earliest convenience!
She just couldn't seem to stop dwelling on the image of her nieces, their naked bodies burned into her mind's eye. Gwen shook her head to clear it, resolutely promising herself that it would never happen again. Her sour mood only served to remind her of where her complete lack of self-control had led her.
Closing her eyes for just a moment, she envisioned herself about to enter the confessional as a child in her church, only seconds later to speak into the grille. "Bless me Father, for I have sinned. I have cursed, lied and had impure thoughts. Oh, and by the way, did I mention that I have just banged the hell out of my two teenaged nieces?" Gwen laughed at the absurdity of the image, but it neatly epitomized how she was feeling.
It did not help her disposition at all. Having been kept waiting for almost twenty minutes, the sun was baking down on her through the open roof of the car. It was more than enough time for her to grow increasingly irritated with their dawdling.
Her stomach was rumbling. The Rolex on her wrist showed that it was now well past noon. Gwen's hand was already reaching for the horn when she saw the two of them come running out of the front door. They were smiling and laughing with each other as though they hadn't a care in the world!
As Sam slipped into the back seat of the red convertible, she said with a slightly teasing tone, "Sorry we took so long getting ready, Aunt Gwen. Katy had a little itch that just couldn't seem to get enough scratching."
Settling into the back seat, she nonchalantly brushed her slender fingers lightly against her aunt's cheek. Gwen was a bit shocked at the familiar musky scent that wafted to her nostrils but she couldn't quite suppress the impish smile that danced at the corners of her mouth.
"You two are incorrigible!" Gwen admonished them, unable to hide her silly grin.
The girls began giggling at her timid scolding. Gwen's emotions were running the gamut from a mild sense of humor, to a feeling of being 'left out.' She was also concerned that the both of them would either be unable to, or unwilling to control their boundless, sexual appetites.
Gwen was having second thoughts about taking them to a lingerie shop after lunch. She
had an idea that her little plan would need serious revising. Getting these two
girls some of their own things may alleviate their inclination to explore her room. Not to mention her personal belongings
When everyone was finally settled in, she started the engine, and the little red convertible roared down the long, curving driveway. Driving through the Malibu Hills, the wind whipped through her hair, helping to push those thoughts from her troubled mind. After enjoying a quiet lunch and coffee at one of the local patio cafes, they headed to the shop as Gwen had promised. She could think of no plausible reason to wriggle out of it.
As they pulled into the parking lot, the girls noticed an unfamiliar sign. Young Katy tried her best to pronounce it, virtually stumbling over each letter. "Lee Bodwaree?" she asked, a little sheepishly.
Bursting forth with a mocking laugh, Sam corrected her and said, "No, silly! 'Le Boudoir.'" she pronounced it perfectly.
"Oh, Cool!" Katy responded enthusiastically.
The storefront revealed little about the wares that were available inside. The building itself had an unremarkable Spanish-style façade with large glass windows. Decorative wrought iron grilles protected the panes of glass, while the semi-sheer curtains allowed a little light inside.
Gwen led them through the massive, solid wood doors, grinning when she heard twin gasps behind her. The girls had finally realized what the store contained! Katy blurted out excitedly, "This is so awesome! It's like… like… a supermarket for sex!"
Sam chuckled at her sister's apt description, while Gwen could only mentally cringe at the emotion in Katy's tone. It certainly dashed any hopes that they would have found it somewhat boring. Deep down, she now knew better. This entire venture seemed to be turning out to be a huge miscalculation on her part.
Hearing footsteps from behind, Gwen turned to her left. She was delighted to find that it was her friend Melissa, 'Mel' the owner of the shop, approaching with arms outstretched.
"Gwen! Why didn't you let me know you were coming by?" she asked, giving her friend a warm hug.
"Well, my nieces and I decided on a whim to do a little shopping today," she replied, stepping aside. Gwen smiled at her friend.
Mel flashed a bright smile as she looked at Sam and Katy. "So, these two beautiful young ladies are your nieces?" she inquired.
The girls glanced at each other and then back at Mel. Their aunt's friend had stepped forward to hug each of them in turn. Sam blushed slightly when Mel clasped her, their large breasts inevitably touching. She immediately detected that the lovely woman was braless because the petite woman's stiff nipples brushed against her own. When Katy also received a quick hug, Sam couldn't help but stare at Mel's slim waist and round bottom. Both were clearly contoured in the close fitting deep blue dress that she wore.
She felt satisfied that her niece's had dutifully endured the requisite introductions. However, Gwen did feel her inner torment renewed when she said, "Okay you two. Shop till you drop!"
Katy clapped her hands and squealed in an adorably girlish fashion before sprinting across the store. She slid to a stop on her knees in front of a huge display case which housed a dizzying assortment of latex 'toys.' Sam, on the other hand, took her time. Walking over to the lingerie section, she seemed to be unable to tear her eyes off Mel.
The woman's exotic beauty was so transfixing that she almost bumped into a large, revolving stand full of silk stockings! The poor girl quickly scampered to the rear of the shop, blushing hotly with embarrassment as her Aunt Gwen and friend looked on in amusement.
"My goodness, they are gorgeous, aren't they!" Mel exclaimed. She glanced from one to the other as the girls moved through the store.
Gwen nodded with a hint of pride. She chuckled nervously when she finally spoke, her tone was a little stern, "That doesn't mean they aren't very naughty girls, though."
Mel was just making her way behind the counter when she heard Gwen's cryptic remark.
She spun around on her heels so quickly that her black hair twirled around in a shimmering swirl. Hurriedly stepping back towards Gwen, she said, "You can't possibly be talking about those innocent looking darlings?" Mel's sarcasm was dripping from every syllable.
Looking at her friend, Gwen simply nodded.
Clutching Gwen's hands, Mel said excitedly. "Oh… do tell!"
Glancing around to make sure that they couldn't be overheard, Gwen stared into her friend's beautiful almond eyes. She paused for a moment before whispering hoarsely, "I caught them going through my things this morning."
She could tell from Mel's expression that she hadn't quite comprehended and added, "The pair of them apparently watched me last night when I was… providing myself with a little 'relief' in my room!"
Gwen could almost see a 'bulb' light up above Mel's head as her lips curled wickedly.
With a mischievous glint in her eyes she spoke softly, "Oh, your little 'toys!' "
Mel thought that she noticed Gwen's cheeks reddening when her friend looked away. Her vivid imagination seized on that tiny visual clue and decided there was more to the story. Gwen wasn't sharing, so she leaned closer and asked, "Whatever did you do?"
Having a great deal of trouble looking her friend in the eye, Gwen just couldn't admit to Mel what she had done. She was one of her closest friends and on several particularly lonely nights, her lover, too.
Sputtering in a halting whisper, Gwen could only say, "Well, that's why we're ah… here shopping."