This is my first story, so I have no illusions that it is any good. There are a few chapters already done and more are being considered. However, if you all really hate it, please make that clear in the comments and I won't darken your screen time by going any further! I promise not to take your criticism too personally.
This is based - though much altered - on a story I read several years ago. I hope I have done the original idea justice.
The completed chapters include scenes of incest (M-F, M-M, some F-F), anal, reluctance (though no actual rape) and a form of mind control. I have tried to split out the sections into chapters of their own so you can skip the bits you're pretty sure you won't like. However, if none of these ideas are things you find appealing, please feel free to look elsewhere for your enjoyment. This site has many stories that are more likely to be your thing.
The first chapter is a bit of a slow-burner but does get to it about half way in. Chapters two, three and four follow on directly from chapter one so begin the fun stuff much quicker. No further chapters exist yet, so I can't speak for them at this time.
I hope you enjoy it.
"Bang!"
The front right tyre of the car simply exploded. A brief scream and shouts could be heard from the occupants of the car. Mike Ross, who was driving, only just managed to keep it on the road as he fought to avoid smashing into the bushes that lined the narrow lane.
At least
, he thought as he finally managed to get the vehicle under control and bring it to a stop,
I was only doing 50 or so
.
"What the fuck was that?" his wife, Sarah, asked. She, like the kids, had remained relatively quiet whilst Mike had fought for control of the car, although Aimee had screamed a little at first.
"No... idea," Mike replied, fighting down the urge to use the same profanity his wife had. "The tyre's not that old." He thought for a moment. "If Taffy has sold me a shit tyre, I'm going to have him shut down!"
Robbie, their son, got out of the car. It was a dark, quiet back road in the middle of nowhere about ten miles from home. There had been no other traffic on the road at this time of night in either direction. Indeed, they hadn't passed a car going either way for about ten minutes.
The Old Smokehouse
might serve the best comfort food in the region, but it was a long way down some old, winding roads that were little more than dirt tracks in places.
Robbie walked back down the road for a short distance. It didn't take him long to see the broken board with the rusty nails stuck in it just off the side of the road. He picked it up, carefully, and took it back to the car.
"Not the tyre, Dad," he said, showing his father the board.
"What the hell?" Mike asked. "What, did someone just throw a board on the road to stop cars? Did some dickhead think that was
funny
?"
"Maybe not, Dad," Aimee said, looking out of the car window. "There was that old trailer we passed on the way down, remember? It had lots of shit in the back. You know how bumpy this road can get. It probably got bumped out of the trailer and we just happened to go over it."
Mike wasn't happy, but he realised that it was at least plausible that this was what had happened. "Not that that helps," he said. "Tyre's still fucked!"
Aimee giggled. Having only turned 18 a few weeks previously, she still wasn't used to her parents - and her older brother - having released their inner potty-mouths now that she was an adult. It was still funny to hear them use words like "fuck" in her presence when only a few weeks ago her father would likely have said the tyre was "fudged" instead.
"Robbie can help you put on the spare," Sarah called out.
"No," Mike said. "We don't have one."
"Every car has a spare tyre," Sarah replied.
"Not any more," Mike came back. "Most cars nowadays have that gunge you squirt into the tyre to clog up the hole and get you home. Screws the tyre up and it still needs replacing because it can't be fixed, but it's cheaper for the manufacturer than providing a spare and it doesn't deflate from not being used. But this tyre's ripped open," he continued, looking at the tattered remains of rubber still gamely hanging around the wheel-rim. "Gunge won't do shit for that!"
"You mean we're stuck here?" Sarah asked, incredulously.
"Maybe," Mike said. "You never know, someone might come down here in a little while."
"Or not," Sarah came back. "This road's so damned quiet, you know that!"
Mike nodded. He did know that. The Ross family had been going to the
Smokehouse
for years and rarely saw cars down this road.
"Well, now what?" Aimee asked. "It's late. It's dark. OK, it's not cold yet; but it will be overnight and who knows when someone will come down here. Probably not until morning."
Mike nodded his agreement. Aimee was right, there was every chance that the road would remain unused all night. He put his hands on his hips and sighed as he looked around. "There," he pointed.
"What," Sarah asked. She was still in the car and the hedges on the side of the road prevented her from seeing what her husband was pointing at. She got out and looked in the direction he was indicating.
About a mile away, across an open field, was what looked (in the dim light of dusk) very much like a farmhouse. Sarah had to admit that she wasn't madly impressed. It looked a little...shabby.
Bullshit
, she admitted to herself,
it looks like a place in a horror film where sex-starved teens go to get murdered!
"You're kidding," was all she said.
"Can you see anything else around here?" Mike asked. He gestured in a wide circle. Sarah looked around, quickly. They were near the top of a slight rise and she had a reasonable view of the fields all around them. Literally. For miles in all directions, all she could see were fields, fields, fields with sheep in and fields. And one drab-looking farmhouse.
She sighed in exasperation. "I guess. Maybe," she began.
"Maybe?" Mike came back. "
Maybe?
Are you mad? What the hell else do we do? Aimee's right; it's warm enough now but in a couple of hours it'll be bloody freezing! We're in the middle of nowhere. The wind will get up and we'll all get cold. I can leave the engine on for a while and use the heaters to keep us warm, but we've not even got fifty miles of fuel in the tank because I was going in the morning on my way into work. I don't know if that will be enough to last the night."
"OK, OK." Sarah knew she was beaten. Moreover, she knew her husband was right. It was late summer now, just a few days before she and the kids went back to college; her as a teacher, they as students. It was warm, but already the wind was starting up and it wasn't blowing warm air by anyone's imagination.
"So, I'll go and ask to use the phone," Mike began. "They'll have one, I'm sure. Stuck out here, in the middle of nowhere, they need something to raise emergencies with!"
"If only you'd let me bring my phone," Aimee muttered, but both parents heard her.
"You know I hate those things," Sarah said. "All people do is stick their noses in those little boxes and piss about on pointless shit all day. I don't ask for much, but one night a month without the phone isn't too much to ask for, surely?"
"No, but... You know. It would have helped. We could have called for a tow or something."
"No," Robbie said. "We couldn't." In his hand was his mobile that he had managed to sneak past his parents when he got in the car to come out. He didn't know why, since he couldn't use it - even in the car where his sister would have ratted him out. It was probably just some rebellious streak or something. Anyway, he'd brought it and now that he had looked at it - hoping to bring it out in triumph and save the day - he saw he had no signal at all.
Sarah looked exasperatedly at him. She was about to call him out on it when Mike pulled his own mobile out of his inside pocket. Sarah looked, gobsmacked, at her husband. "What?" Mike asked as if he didn't know.
"You...he... why the fuck do I bother? One fucking evening! That's all I wanted!"
"Well, neither of us used them, so what difference does it make?"
"What difference... oh, fuck off," she retorted and turned away from them.
Mike grinned at Robbie and then scowled as he noticed his own phone - which was on a different network provider - also had no signal. "Shit. Well," he said, putting his phone away, "that's that. I'll have to go over now."
Sarah's heart sank. She had a really bad feeling and it had nothing to do with the prawn cocktail she'd had for the starter. She wanted to tell Mike no. She wanted, so much, to make him see how absolutely certain she was that, if he went up to that farmhouse he'd end up with a giant shotgun blast shaped hole in his chest. But it was, really, the only option.
Or was it? "I'll come with you," she said.
"It's only a mile - if that," Mike said.
"I said," Sarah replied, staring him down, "I'm coming with you!"
Mike knew better than to argue. "OK," he said.
"Fuck that," Aimee said.