After reading stories on here for months I decided to try my hand at it
It took me about 15 hours to initially write/edit/spell check (but there is one intentional misspelling -- look at my posted comments and you'll figure it out).
Boiler Plate Author's Notes:
1) All characters engaging in sexual activities are at least 18 Y.O..
2) I like description and dialogue - so unless noted sexual activity is MOSTLY at the end.
3) I utilise U.K. and U.S. spelling, along with foreign to U.S. words as well.
4) Real People/Places/Things will be notated by an asterisk (*) look 'em up! (if U wanna).
5) Said real People/Places/Things may be anachronistic (think Baz Luhrman's Moulin Rogue soundtrack).
6) Said real People/Places/Things are mainly in 'SoCal' or 'Sin City' ("Vegas Bay-Bay!") - where I'm from/where I live.
7) To paraphrase Doctor Leonard Horatio 'Bones' McCoy - "I'm a straight white male writer, NOT a doctor or lawyer or whatever, " although I do minimal Googling to maintain a 'somewhat realistic' story (where applicable).
Chapter One Specific Notes:
A) Denys Patrique is pronounced 'Den-is Pat-rick'
B) Don't take Denys' and Dawn's feelings about Longrun, Missouri personally...my paternal grandfather (like Denys' paternal grandfather) came from there. I have never been there and only used it:
1) Because I use names of people and places from my family/history.
2) I feel a guy from SoCal would not take kindly to being transplanted there (I know I wouldn't).
'That is All.'
-Chapter One-
(Saturday)
Denys Patrique Ryan sat in his office in Misery, the only Goth nightclub in Downtown Las Vegas going over the upcoming bookings for Gothtober -- he had lined up Aurelio Voltaire* (for an acoustic Black Labyrinth* performance), Video Vision Band*, Night Club*, Remission (a Skinny Puppy* tribute band), Lee Press-On and the Nails*, The Mystic Nights (an Oingo Boingo* tribute band), Calling All Astronauts*, Jessie Frey*, and a reading/performance by Literotica's SnakeySmut* but still needed more so he was looking at various mags to find some and came across an advert for Magenta Dawn a new (to him) band out of L.A., he was intrigued so he gave the number a ring.
"Hello, this is Dawn Simpson lead singer/keys and manager of Magenta Dawn -- what can I do you for?"
This was a name Denys hadn't heard in eight years...
"Hi, I'm Denys Ryan the owner of Misery a Goth nightclub in Las Vegas; you wouldn't be out of Longrun*, Missouri by chance would you?"
"Why yes, yes I am...how did you know that?"
"Because this is your step brother Walter Williams"
"Wally!"
Denys hadn't been called Walter for the last 8 years, he changed his name when he hit L.A. after getting the fuck outta Longrun...he hated that name and that damnable place
Yeah 'Wally' (only she could call him that), "how long you been in L.A.?"
"About 5 years, as soon as I hit 18, I did what you did and got the hell outta Dodge"
Denys was a little over 2 years older than Dawn, his mom Lisa had been killed by a stunt plane trick gone terribly wrong (she was a wing walker) and his dad Ray was the pilot -- he fell into a deep depression afterwards (blaming himself for her death) leading to self-medicating with alcohol which lead to abuse but he was eventually helped by the widow Simpson and was baptized into the Pentecostal faith (along with Denys against his will). He had been an Atheist since the 10th grade after being raised Roman Catholic then reading 'How the Great Religions Began'* by Joesph Gaer* and giving theism up for Lent.
Ray wed Sally Simpson a few months later and then Sally and Dawn moved in. Sally was a pain enforcing strict bible based rules and forcing him to go to church and Sunday Bible School, both of which he was barred from after pointing out the seldom mentioned seedier sections of 'The Most Violent Book Ever Written' after which he left for SoCal. But Dawn was pretty cool and looked up to her new brother he was 17 she was 14.
"So Dawn, why don't I fly you here so we can reconnect and get you booked at my club?"
"Sounds cool Wally, let me look at my calendar and I'll get back to you."
Denys gave her his cell number and said "I look foreword to hearing from you soon!"
--Chapter Two--
Denys HATED Longrun, his parents moved there (his dad's dad was born there) after his dad got out of the Air Force, to get a job on a stunt plane team, and he never fit in -- didn't like Country music (the prominent music in Longrun), despised closed minded individuals (never not having met anything but -- save for a few family members and Dawn), loathed sports (the local religion after Pentecostalism), and the overall culture (or his perceived lack thereof). He was 5'11" 195lbs and a good runner, so the football coach tried to get him to go for a place on the team and he said no, then the athletic director tried to get his counselor to pressure him (to no avail), and then after Ray married Sally (who was the varsity basketball coach's younger sister) tried to get her to pressure him to as well - so to get them off his back and to further get away from athletics joined the A/V and Drama departments (although ironically he handled the soundboards for all of the various sport's home games).
Life with Sally was arduous at best, but Dawn was a peach and looked up to him - since he was unlike any person she had met before (she was born in Longrun and it was all she knew) seeing as he was from SoCal (Lynwood* to be precise) he was unique in town...but to her dismay after graduating and turning 18 in October he said "Fuck you" to Sally and "See you later, sorry" to Dawn, crushing her spirits.
Two days later, he was at Artifice* with his friend Angela when he got a call.
"Hey Wally, I'm free from now 'till the second week of November."
"Awesome! I'll book you tix tomorrow with an open ended return date."
"Great! I'll pack a couple of suitcases tonight and I'll be waiting for my flight info."
"Perfect! I'll text you flight deets when I have them...ciaobella"
Denys let Angela know what was going on - she was Misery's 'artistic director' also his 'Major Domo' and a friend from SoCal, who moved to Las Vegas with him five years ago after meeting him at Doug Weston's Troubadour* seeing his friends' band Kaprelyan* and befriending him.
---Chapter Three---
(Still Monday)
Dawn was excited to go to Vegas for the first time and of course to see her big bro again, a few hours later while packing she got the text from him for her noon flight tomorrow.
(Tuesday)
When she landed at Harry Reid International*, he went to her flight's luggage carousel with a sign that said 'Welcome Dawn' holding it above his head like John Cusack -- when she saw him she didn't recognise the almost six foot strapping Goth hunk: he was in all black and red (with some white) and skulls (kilt, Chucks, Lee Ho Fooks* tee, waistcoat, and weed-skull socks) with crimson hair down to his waist. The last time she saw him he had black shoulder length hair and wore blue jeans and band tees, and combat boots but then again she followed his fashion cue, but wearing an all black and white ensemble.
"Wally!" she cried out as she leapt into a ginormous hug.
"Only you sis - only you," he cringed.
"You'll always be Wally to me big bro."
"Well anyhoo, welcome to 'Sin City', let's get your luggage and stop at the club before getting to my place."
He put her down.
"Is it true what they say 'bout what's not being worn under your kilt?"
"Oh hell naw, no going 'commando' for moi" and turning around proceeded to moon her and the rest of the luggage carousel with his black and red biking shorts with red sugar skulls on each cheek (and crotch, but she or they couldn't see that).
They got her luggage and headed to short term parking and loaded her suitcases into the back of his black and red 1957 Cadillac Miller Meteor Hearse* securing them on the body slide - "love the ride", "thanks sis" and headed to Misery to meet Angela and look at open dates in October. When they got there Dawn needed to use the bathroom and when she got out saw Denys talking to Angela.
"Hey Wally, you're out of paper towels in the Ladies room."
"Wally?" Asked Angela with a puzzled look on her face.
"Changed my name from Walter Irving Williams to Denys Patrique Ryan when I got to L.A. to start afresh and I never felt like a 'Walter' or 'Walt' anyways and only liked it when Dawn called me 'Wally', but ONLY in private." Dawn grinned at that.
"OK, well Dawn, I'm Angela Denise Taylore I've known 'Wally' (he winced at this) for about seven years and I'm Artistic Director here at Misery"
"Bro - why did you call your club 'Misery'?"
"It's a play on the pronunciation of Missouri, how I felt there, and it also has Goth vibes."
"Very good, now let's go look at the calendar then get something to eat."
The trio went into the office to check dates open in October (it was currently the second week of September) and surprisingly there were opening act time slots every Friday and Saturday.
"Well sis, I guess you guys are our 'house band' for the month of Gothober. I can pay you the 'family rate' of $1,000 a night plus 5% of drinks and a grand a week until then, how many in Magenta Dawn?"
"Two of us, Chris 'Magenta' Summers and myself."