The second instalment of Michelle's depravity. Thank you for all the feedback on the first chapter. Just to clarify a point; when I asked for feedback in the preamble to chapter 1, it wasn't my intention to 'fish for compliments'. What I wanted, and in some cases received, was some constructive guidance on how the piece should evolve (if at all), and any areas for improvement. I would ask the same for this second helping if the reader has time and inclination.
Is the piece confusing with the differing points of view?
Is the Estelle character surplus to requirements?
Do the italics work, and how about the omission of quotation marks in the second sub-chapter?
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Thanks for reading; I hope you enjoy it. Forgive any technical errors.
GA -- In my kitchen. Peterborough, UK. 4 Jan 2012.
1
ESTELLE MATTHEWS SMOOTHED the red skirt of her uniform over her hips and fixed the professional smile to her face. The trio advancing up the aisle in single file were obviously a family, or at least part of a family; the two women shared the same petite figure, straight black hair and full, pouty bottom lip -- mother and daughter, had to be. The young man was the male version, a little taller, nicely broad across the shoulders, gorgeously defined arms too, Estelle noticed; she was poised on the cusp of welcoming them aboard the aircraft, her lips already forming the words when the daughter's green-eyed smirk cut her short.
Vince
, she thought, the girl had the same knowing leer, a way of smirking, an expression on her face that clearly signalled --
I can see you; I can read your thoughts and can peel back the layers of your wickedness until every last sordid fantasy you've ever played out in your head is mine to see, to watch, and to savour. I know what you think of doing, and I know what you've
done.
All of it, I can see all of it; I can taste it, just like you want to taste the honey-pot between my legs; I can smell it on you now. I can smell your cunt ...
It all came in an instant, not as words but as a feeling, an instinct. Estelle knew with certainty this girl, this young woman, could read her with those narcotic, green, penetrating eyes. The boy's face, and the mother's, although there was such a close familial resemblance in the features, didn't possess the same perceptive stare and crooked-mouthed grin. The mother and son were innocents compared to the young woman. This girl was dangerous, a sexually perverted predator --
Just like Vince
.
The pulse started between her legs; her nipples thickened while heat spread from that tiny heart-beat; a visceral lub-dub of lust. She felt herself oiling and knew, even as her vulva began to swell and the desire trickled into the gusset of her underwear, she'd be upstairs in the crew area, the tiny, cramped cocoon below the great fin of the tail, as soon as time allowed. She'd take off her skirt, carefully folding it to avoid creasing, hang up the scarlet blazer and white blouse, and lie against the bulkhead of the plane, atop one of the bunk-beds, and rub herself until the burning itch had cooled.
Passengers went about their business, stowing hand baggage in overhead compartments, settling into seats.
Vince
, Estelle thought again. She felt the heat rise in her face as she blushed. The trickle quickened from her opening at the thought of what she'd done with Vince, what she'd
allowed
him to do.
The girl knows. Somehow, she knows. She's the same as Vince ...
Estelle forced herself to look at the young woman's face. "Oh, God," she sighed when she found the green eyes still boring into her. Estelle struggled to reconcile logic with the strange sensation of the woman somehow knowing about Vince and the perverted acts they'd shared.
She's just a woman, just another passenger. She
can't
know anything. It's impossible ...
An image formed in her head, a fantasy so lewd it made her gasp; one that could lead to dismissal for gross misconduct if it were to play out for real.
The girl and her brother ... and perhaps the mother as well, all three of them ... and Estelle, in the crew quarters, bare-skinned and bright-eyed, with the girl licking Estelle's sex while the mother sucked her son's cock ...
Estelle pictured the scene vividly, could even hear the words; she imagined the girl staring at her and grinning as she spoke:
Lick me, lick me and taste me. Look at my mother, that filthy old slut, just look at her sucking my lovely brother's gorgeous cock. I know what that thing feels like inside. I know how it fills me up nice and tight and pulsing; and I know how it feels when he comes, when he lets it go and all that stuff pumps out of it. He can stay hard you know; he can keep it stiff and make it spit twice, perhaps three times ...
My mother likes it too. I seduced her before we even came away on holiday. Him, my brother, the beautiful Christopher, I seduced him on the island. He was easy. After I'd fucked him the first time I told him a secret; I told him about our mother, and I ... introduced them both to ... well, you know.
Incest.
Estelle's legs trembled; she gasped, staggering slightly, and clung to the seat next to her for support. In her head the girl's voice relentlessly carried on:
Now, stop tonguing my cunt. I taste good, don't I? But I want to watch my brother fuck our mum, and then I want you to watch him fuck me.
In her mind's eye Estelle saw the girl smirk.
You know how it feels, don't you Estelle? It's the same as Vince. You know how it feels to have Vince between your legs; you recognise that itch when he makes you do those things. I know what he makes you do; I know about the dog collar chains and the lipstick tattoos. All the filthy things you do for him -- You love doing it too, don't you, Estelle? You enjoy the wickedness of your own brother fucking you. That dirty secret makes you hot.
Lost in the reverie, forgetting she was inside a packed aircraft cabin, Estelle groaned. Several concerned heads turned towards her.
"Are you all right, miss?" somebody asked from a seat behind.
Estelle managed to croak an affirmation and a weak nod. She needed to get upstairs soon. She willed the pilot to get the plane in the air, get them all settled, and then ... and then she could stagger up the steep ladder, hitch up her skirt -- creases be damned -- and rub herself to a blissful climax.
The girl, the imaginary one in her head, was right. She knew how it felt all right. Knew how it felt to feel Vince and his thick cock filling her as he muttered obscenities into her ear, the filth dripping in like poison. She recalled the thrill and the fear of him taking her out, in public,
SLUT
and
SPUNK-WHORE
, lipstick tattoos branded on her skin, and where he'd used her in front of a dangerously murmuring and unsettled group of seedy men in a seedy lay-by adjacent to a busy English by-way ...
Did those men know they were brother and sister?
Estelle thought that they probably did. And that knowledge, them knowing of her perversity -- of her incest -- only made the whole surreal scene better for her.
The depravity delighted her.
A clear, prescient vision came to Estelle. When the flight came in to London's Gatwick airport, even before the big plane jolted to a halt at the air-bridge, before she'd cleared the formalities, before she'd reached her modest flat in Crawley, she'd call or text her brother and ask him (desperately beg him?) to make some arrangements. Already she could hear his chuckle.
What d'ya 'ave in mind, 'Stelle? Sumfink for just me an' you ...?
Estelle's breasts ached to be touched, to be squeezed ... to be fucking mauled by as many clamouring hands could reach them. Her clitoris throbbed, feeling huge and swollen inside the compress of her knickers, the gusset of which was now sodden.
She was soaked, and all in less than a minute since she'd first seen the girl moving down the aisle.
No
, the voice in her head replied, a voice thick and treacly with lust.