Here's a re-edited version. I corrected some grammatical errors and spelling. I changed the back story a bit and corrected some story and plot holes. The whole thing is 100% better. It's really almost a whole new story! Enjoy and send me your feedback!
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Ben hadn't really wanted to go on the stupid cruise with his family in the first place. Maybe it's because he'd seen Titanic one too many times, but he didn't feel comfortable getting on a big ship and cruising around the ocean miles away from anything. He certainly wasn't excited to have a big chunk of his summer gone; away from his friends, his video games and that cute girl down the street that he was dying to ask out. This cruise was just bad timing! He was hoping that this would be the summer that he finally lost his virginity.
Ben's dad owned a string of car dealerships and had made millions. The family had never wanted for anything. His mother even had a personal assistant, or maid, as Ben liked to think of her. She mostly ran errands and helped his mother with paperwork, but she did some cleaning and cooking as well. She was nice enough and worked really hard, but she wasn't one of the sexy French maids, or statuesque personal assistants that you sometimes saw on the Playboy channel or in the movies.
Esther was her name, and she was a very dark skinned, short, plump older woman. She had full lips and a thick head of frizzy hair. Esther was also the proud owner of a pair of massive boobs that always seemed to be on the verge of bursting out of her blouses, bouncing around wildly as she hurried here and there. He had liked her even more recently, when she confided in him that she hated boats too.
Ben's mom was the opposite of Esther. She was a tall trophy wife and kept her toned body bronzed by tanning beds. She had long, blond hair and massive breast implants that made her boobs jut out from her chest like a couple of zeppelins, ready for take off. She was a little too top heavy, in Ben's opinion, always looking like she was going to topple over.
Ben had just turned eighteen; a few months after graduating high school. He would be off to a prestigious private college next year and was very excited to get out and see the world, and of course, all the college babes. All he had to do was survive this last family outing with his parents. Making this cruise worthwhile, was the thought that maybe just maybe, he could hook up with a girl and finally lose his virginity.
The first day of the cruise was uneventful. Ben managed to stay clear of his family mostly, and he only saw Esther once. She ran into him coming out of the gym, giving him a warm smile as he passed, promising to buy him a drink later as a graduation present. She was really the only member of his household that he was going to miss, in the fall. He really did like her.
As the day progressed, Ben even managed to meet a couple of girls that were actually going to the same college as he was, next year. Maybe this cruise wouldn't be so bad. Esther had indeed brought him that drink she promised him later that night and Ben fell asleep a little earlier than usual.
"Ben, open the door now!"
Ben sat up on his bed, groggy and confused. Was that someone at his door?
There was heavy knocking on his door. "Ben hurry! The ship is sinking!"
Ben heard THAT loud and clear. He sprang to his feet; images of the last minutes of the Titanic filling his mind! He raced around the cabin like a mad man, throwing on his shorts and tennis shoes, and then pulling open the door.
Outside his door in the crowded hallway, his father, mother, and a very shaken Esther, were huddled against the wall. Esther was crying, and his mother was trying to comfort her. Panicked passengers were hustling up and down the hallway.
"Ben, I want you to take your mother and Esther up to the deck and make sure that if worse comes to worse you, get them on a life boat," his father said, sternly. "It probably won't come to that. I'm going to go up to the bridge and see if I can be of some use up there and find out what's really happening." He squeezed his wife's shoulder in a gesture of reassurance, also giving Ben that manly nod that said we'll take care of the ladies no matter what.
Ben's father had been a captain in the coast guard and knew the captain of this cruise ship personally. He stormed off down the hall to make things right.
Ben led his mother and Esther through the crowded hall and to the upper decks. Once out in the open the grim situation came into view. The ship was listing to the port side. The ship was taking on water somehow and there was a massive storm approaching. Even in the darkness of night, Ben could see an even darker mass of clouds approaching fast.
There was an announcement on the intercom system: "Please return to your cabins...All passengers...please returns to your cabins until further notice..." The announcement repeated endlessly.
"Yeah, right," Ben muttered.
Ben was pretty sure that the same announcement had been made on the Titanic! He was out of his mind with fear but dared not show it in front of his mother and Esther. He had to be the strong one since his father wasn't with them. He took his family responsibility very seriously. He wanted to be just like his dad, when it came to handling situations.
As the minutes turned into hours, the ship started to lean even further to the port side. Now the rain had started and the ocean was getting choppy. Ben's father found them on the deck and beckoned them to follow him. When he had them alone near a row of life boats, he pulled out a key. "Listen, I'm going to put you down in one of the life boats. These things will float even upside down and full of water. There's something going on down in the engine room and...well, I'm worried. I want you off the boat. I don't give a fuck what anyone else says...something's seriously wrong and you'll all be safer in the water, right now."
"Dad?" Ben started, but his father cut him off.
"I'll be okay," is all he said.
Ben and his mother both knew better than to argue with him, and they climbed in the boat with Esther, pulling on their life preservers. The boat started to lower into the water. As the lifeboat slowly lowered down to the roiling sea below, there was a tremendous explosion, and the little life boat fell the remaining twenty feet into the water, nearly knocking all three of them into the ocean.
As soon as the boat hit the water, they realized the full extent of the storm as hell was unleashed upon them. Waves were washing over the side of the boat as it was tossed about violently. There was no time to think of anything except survival.
Ben had no idea how long they were tossed about in the storm. It felt like days. All he knew was that he had awakened on the boat with the sun shining down upon him. He was alive! He looked about in a panic for a moment until he saw that Esther was asleep next to his mother on the bottom of the boat. The three of them had made it. He realized that they weren't moving. They were too still.
Ben sat up and looked over the side of the boat. It had been washed ashore on a sandy white beach. The beach went on for a few hundred yards in each direction and was encased by dense jungle. There was nothing else; no other people, no wreckage.
Ben looked down at the two women he was shipwrecked with. They were both sprawled out on the bottom of the life boat, side by side. His mother seemed fine and was breathing steadily. He stared a second too long at her massive, heaving chest. She would be fine. She was a tough woman. He looked over at Esther, who seemed to have survived in one peace as well. Somehow, in the violent storm, her top had torn, revealing one of her massive boobs. She apparently hadn't had time to put on a bra last night. Despite the desperate situation he was in, he couldn't tear his gaze away from the maid. He had never seen a nipple so thick and dark, and long in his life. His cock twitched and he forced himself to look away.
"Ok... enough of that, you pervert," he said to himself. "I've got to look around for any other survivors."
Ben hopped out of the boat, leaving the two women to sleep some more, and walked the length of the beach, looking hard out to the ocean, and gathering up any driftwood he could find. He found a couple of newer pieces of wood that could have been from the ocean liner, but he couldn't be sure. There was really nothing else of any value or use.
After he gathered up the wood, bringing it up toward the tree line, he went through his own pockets, taking inventory. He had his pocket knife, a book of matches that were fairly dry, a pen, some useless scraps of paper and a couple of condoms. He had brought them along, hoping to get lucky on the cruise. "A lot of good these will do me here," he thought to himself. He took another look at the book of matches. It was from the bar that Esther had bought him the drink in, and it had the name and number of a cute coed he had met there. Esther had joked that the girl looked a lot like his mother. Ben shook his head and put his stuff back in his pockets. He wondered if she had made it.
He then went about gathering some large palm leaves for shelter or to sleep on. He wasn't exactly sure what he was going to do with them, but they always did that in the movies. He also found a few coconuts. That was good luck, he thought. Then he went back to the boat to wake the ladies up. He started with Esther first.
"Esther," he said gently, trying not to look at her exposed tit and failing. "Esther, wake up. It's all over. We're okay."
Esther slowly opened her eyes, looking up at Ben. She sat up gingerly and got to her feet, suddenly pulling her shirt across her chest as she caught Ben glancing down. Ben helped her out of the boat. "Sorry," Ben said, turning red.
"It's okay," Esther said with a half smile.
"Let's see if Mom's okay,"
Esther looked over the side of the boat as Ben climbed back in and went over to his mother, shaking her gently. "Mom," he said softly.
"What? Where?" she asked foggily, squinting up at him.
"Mom, it's okay. You, me and Esther...we're okay...we made it through the storm and washed up on this beach."