This 15000+ story tell the story of a neglected wife who undergoes comprehensive cosmetic surgery to give her the body of a woman 20 years younger, then still neglected by her husband, turns to her adopted son to fulfill her needs.
I wrote this my 6th submission as an experiment in switching viewpoints between both my characters. Please view it as such when you vote.
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Scene 1
The annoying jingle on her smartphone alarm jolted her into consciousness, her erotic dream shattered.
It was 12:30 am.
A second before, John had been between her legs, hot, thrusting, grunting and gasping, as she dug her nails deep into his back, aware of an orgasm slowly building deep inside her.
Then suddenly she was enveloped in the black cloak of night, alone in their double bed, while the wind whistled through the eves, rain hammered against the open windows, the air in her bedroom cold and still.
For once she'd had the sense to turn the tv off early and go to bed knowing she'd have to drive in the early hours. Three hours sleep wasn't much, but better than nodding off behind the wheel.
She lay for a few minutes in the dark, orientating herself and mustering thoughts before finally reaching out to silence that damn alarm.
One way or another she had to get out from under her cosy duvet and face a very unsociable start to her day. Bed would now be hours away, if at all?
With a clap of her hands the bedside light came on and she reluctantly swung her long legs out of the covers, planting them deftly into her cold slippers, and shivered.
After a yawn and stretch she eventually stood up and padded naked to the bathroom, pausing only to turn up the dial on the thermostat.
In the depths of the empty house she heard the heating boiler fire up and begin it's laborious task of warming rooms.
Examining herself in the bathroom mirror she broke into a broad smile and reached for the hairbrush.
Shame it's not my own colour, she thought, a couple more weeks then I'll need the roots doing again.
As she smoothed out her long platinum hair, washed her face and frothed up the toothpaste with her electric toothbrush, she was still smiling despite goose pimples on her arms an legs.
Then she remembered, Tom's coming home today!
It was 10 months since she'd seen her wonderful adopted son. But before she could hold him and smell his familiar body scent she had to drive the 25 miles to Manchester Airport where his flight should be landing just after 3 am.
Admittedly he wasn't expecting to be met so early in the morning - she hoped it would be a pleasant surprise for him.
Back in her bedroom, still naked, she pulled on a fresh pair of silk knickers, poured herself into skin-tight jeans and hurriedly slipped on her favourite pair of patent black pixie boots, the ones with 3 inch heels.
Age appropriate and very cute, she thought.
Standing back to critically examine herself in the wardrobe mirror, she paused to admire her new firmer, bigger, breasts. Twisting from side to side she never failed to delight in how they defied gravity, her nipples pointing upwards once again, just as they had done thirty years earlier. And they didn't wobble when she walked any more.
Then she ran her fingers down her newly flattened stomach, before sliding both hands down the soft skin between her legs, seeking out the shape of her new expensive Brazilian wax before finally tracing the trim firmness of her ass.
Isn't liposuction wonderful, she thought, £220,000 worth of the finest plastic surgery money can buy in the UK.
And yet despite this fabulous body, my husband of 30 years isn't interested in sex with me?
Why the hell not?
For an instant her eyes welled up with tears, but she took a deep breath and wiped them away with the heel of a hand.
I won't let him spoil today. So what if he's got another woman, I've got my son to treasure.
She continued admiring the surgeon's work, marvelling at the absence of visible scars.
Amazing how a simple scalpel could pretty much correct all those years of over-eating, lack of exercise and neglect. Goodbye wrinkles and crows feet, hello tight young skin.
Leaning closer to the mirror she traced her little finger slowly along her lips, Then the final touches, just enough collagen into my lips to make them slightly pouty and very kissable.
Finally she bared her teeth, running the tip of the same little finger across the gleaming white rows of TV presenter quality implants, £2000 each tooth, painful but stunning!
Then she took a step back to get a better view of her body.
Look at me, Wow, the walking talking dream results of human body sculpture. This must be how Barbie feels?
Then she scowled, feeling around her neck.
Great pity there wasn't much he could do about my neck, hands and poor feet, crushed and scarred by years of tight fitting shoes and high heels. What was it the surgeon had said, "Unavoidable giveaways to my true age," and he was right, at least for the sharp eyed. But if I dress artfully I can pull off the illusion, divert eyes to look at my tits and not my feet!
And apart from those few inevitable imperfection she felt a wave of satisfaction about herself.
She was fifty-five going on thirty, a fine example of modern 'plastic fantastic' techniques and worth every miserable day of pain, bruising and slow healing.
Mark you he can't take all the credit, all those months of careful eating, hours spent spinning, rowing and pumping weights in the gym has done a lot to help firm and tone my muscles. Hey, I ran that ten kilometre fun run for charity - without stopping!
Nevertheless she still couldn't shake the thought out of her head, Why did John invest so much cash into changing my appearance. Why make me look and feel so good? Why look young and attractive if he didn't want sex with me?
Guilt?
Another woman - in Iceland?
Was that why he was always going there on so called business trips?
Is he curled up with some athletic young thing right now in his upmarket hotel in Rekyavik? Is he screwing the whore right now?
Then feeling the chill of the room, she made her way into Tom's bedroom, opened the top drawer of his clothes cabinet and took out one of his old faded green army 'T' shirts and pulled it on over her head. She kept them there, all clean fresh and neatly ironed for the odd occasions he came home these days.
She smiled in satisfaction as the material stretched tight over her breasts, emphasising their pert shape and ever so prominent nipples.
A wonderful feeling and such a simple pleasure, she thought.
Seeing how good she looked she decided that she wouldn't need a bra for this trip, just the tight 'T' shirt to show off her beautiful tits to the world.
Yet she knew that wouldn't be enough to lift her mood, just looking thirty again couldn't heal the marital wounds of a neglected middle-aged housewife and mom. She needed a stiff cock inside her.
The house was warming as she went downstairs to make a welcome coffee, put on her black padded puffer jacket and soft pashmina scarf.
Another glance at the wall clock told her it was almost time to get on the road.
The house would be warm and welcoming for when they got home.
Scene 2
Six hundred miles away in Stuttgart airport Tom Cronin sat quietly in the airline hospitality lounge enjoying his second beer, relaxing while half watching a 24/7 German news channel .
He felt good about his trip, eager to get home and spend some quality time with family and friends.
He had planned the timing of his three week break carefully to coincide with the absence of his adopted father on yet another business trip.
It was better if they didn't meet - these days they were like oil and water.
They'd hadn't got on for the last decade, and an hour together in the same room was 59 minutes too long for both of them.
Of course Mum had tried to heal the rift, but inevitably that seemed only to make things worse.
Dad had never forgiven Tom for giving up his engineering degree at Edinburgh University.
Tom had been brought up with tales of his grandfather and grandfathers, both notable Scottish engineers. Dad once regaled Tom with a family story of one of them working for Brunel on the huge Great Eastern steamship. Tom had quipped that he probably made the sandwiches and cups of tea for the real workers. To which his Dad had exploded in anger and almost struck his son in blind rage.
That was just one more incident that drove the wedge even deeper between the two.
Ten years had passed since the day he had arrived home during his second year at university to tell his parents he had left and applied to become an army officer. Since then he and his stepfather had barely exchanged more than a dozen words, which was a shame because Dad had
given him a life he might never have had after his birth parents had both been tragically killed. He had doted on Tom, loved him as his own flesh and blood. In hindsight he couldn't have wished for a better Dad and deep down he felt a terrible remorse at the way he had replayed this man's wonderful generosity.