This 15000+ story tell the story of a neglected wife who undergoes comprehensive cosmetic surgery to give her the body of a woman 20 years younger, then still neglected by her husband, turns to her adopted son to fulfill her needs.
I wrote this my 6th submission as an experiment in switching viewpoints between both my characters. Please view it as such when you vote.
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Scene 1
The annoying jingle on her smartphone alarm jolted her into consciousness, her erotic dream shattered.
It was 12:30 am.
A second before, John had been between her legs, hot, thrusting, grunting and gasping, as she dug her nails deep into his back, aware of an orgasm slowly building deep inside her.
Then suddenly she was enveloped in the black cloak of night, alone in their double bed, while the wind whistled through the eves, rain hammered against the open windows, the air in her bedroom cold and still.
For once she'd had the sense to turn the tv off early and go to bed knowing she'd have to drive in the early hours. Three hours sleep wasn't much, but better than nodding off behind the wheel.
She lay for a few minutes in the dark, orientating herself and mustering thoughts before finally reaching out to silence that damn alarm.
One way or another she had to get out from under her cosy duvet and face a very unsociable start to her day. Bed would now be hours away, if at all?
With a clap of her hands the bedside light came on and she reluctantly swung her long legs out of the covers, planting them deftly into her cold slippers, and shivered.
After a yawn and stretch she eventually stood up and padded naked to the bathroom, pausing only to turn up the dial on the thermostat.
In the depths of the empty house she heard the heating boiler fire up and begin it's laborious task of warming rooms.
Examining herself in the bathroom mirror she broke into a broad smile and reached for the hairbrush.
Shame it's not my own colour, she thought, a couple more weeks then I'll need the roots doing again.
As she smoothed out her long platinum hair, washed her face and frothed up the toothpaste with her electric toothbrush, she was still smiling despite goose pimples on her arms an legs.
Then she remembered, Tom's coming home today!
It was 10 months since she'd seen her wonderful adopted son. But before she could hold him and smell his familiar body scent she had to drive the 25 miles to Manchester Airport where his flight should be landing just after 3 am.
Admittedly he wasn't expecting to be met so early in the morning - she hoped it would be a pleasant surprise for him.
Back in her bedroom, still naked, she pulled on a fresh pair of silk knickers, poured herself into skin-tight jeans and hurriedly slipped on her favourite pair of patent black pixie boots, the ones with 3 inch heels.
Age appropriate and very cute, she thought.
Standing back to critically examine herself in the wardrobe mirror, she paused to admire her new firmer, bigger, breasts. Twisting from side to side she never failed to delight in how they defied gravity, her nipples pointing upwards once again, just as they had done thirty years earlier. And they didn't wobble when she walked any more.
Then she ran her fingers down her newly flattened stomach, before sliding both hands down the soft skin between her legs, seeking out the shape of her new expensive Brazilian wax before finally tracing the trim firmness of her ass.
Isn't liposuction wonderful, she thought, Β£220,000 worth of the finest plastic surgery money can buy in the UK.
And yet despite this fabulous body, my husband of 30 years isn't interested in sex with me?
Why the hell not?
For an instant her eyes welled up with tears, but she took a deep breath and wiped them away with the heel of a hand.
I won't let him spoil today. So what if he's got another woman, I've got my son to treasure.
She continued admiring the surgeon's work, marvelling at the absence of visible scars.
Amazing how a simple scalpel could pretty much correct all those years of over-eating, lack of exercise and neglect. Goodbye wrinkles and crows feet, hello tight young skin.
Leaning closer to the mirror she traced her little finger slowly along her lips, Then the final touches, just enough collagen into my lips to make them slightly pouty and very kissable.
Finally she bared her teeth, running the tip of the same little finger across the gleaming white rows of TV presenter quality implants, Β£2000 each tooth, painful but stunning!
Then she took a step back to get a better view of her body.
Look at me, Wow, the walking talking dream results of human body sculpture. This must be how Barbie feels?
Then she scowled, feeling around her neck.
Great pity there wasn't much he could do about my neck, hands and poor feet, crushed and scarred by years of tight fitting shoes and high heels. What was it the surgeon had said, "Unavoidable giveaways to my true age," and he was right, at least for the sharp eyed. But if I dress artfully I can pull off the illusion, divert eyes to look at my tits and not my feet!
And apart from those few inevitable imperfection she felt a wave of satisfaction about herself.
She was fifty-five going on thirty, a fine example of modern 'plastic fantastic' techniques and worth every miserable day of pain, bruising and slow healing.
Mark you he can't take all the credit, all those months of careful eating, hours spent spinning, rowing and pumping weights in the gym has done a lot to help firm and tone my muscles. Hey, I ran that ten kilometre fun run for charity - without stopping!
Nevertheless she still couldn't shake the thought out of her head, Why did John invest so much cash into changing my appearance. Why make me look and feel so good? Why look young and attractive if he didn't want sex with me?
Guilt?
Another woman - in Iceland?