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"Tommy? You home yet?" I yelled as I walked in the door from a hard day of school.
"I'm upstairs." he yelled down.
I walked upstairs and into his room, not there. I continued down the hallway peeking in my room and then the bathroom. Finally I found him standing in front of the mirror combing his hair.
"What are you doing?" I said full knowing what he was really doing.
"I'm getting ready for my date tonight." he said.
"What date?" I said not knowing that he had a date tonight.
"I made a date today with Jenny Larson." he said.
"Oh." I said looking a bit disappointed.
"What's wrong?" he said looking at me with a look of concern.
"Oh nothing." I said.
"Come on something's wrong, tell me what it is." he said.
"Oh nothing, I just stopped at the video store and rented us a couple movies cuz I didn't know you had a date tonight. I thought we could stay in and watch them but if you have a date I'll just watch them by myself." I said.
"Oh Jen, I'm sorry. I didn't know you were going to get some videos. I'll call Jenny and tell her I can't make it." he said.
"No, you go on your date. I'll be fine." I said as I walked out of the bathroom disappointed.
I walked downstairs and sat down on the couch thinking about all the fun Tommy was going be having tonight with Jenny Larson.