Hi all, this is my first ever story, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. The last time I did any creative writing was about 15 years ago, so no idea on how good the quality of this is.
This is planned to be the first chapter of a story. I have a rough plan outlined, and personally think it's a good fun premise. The start is quite slow, and I intend to do a fair bit of world building in between the sexy bits. I plan to continue writing more chapters, however I can't promise any sort of schedule, as I am very flaky and need to be in the right mood for writing. however if this is well received I will try to push myself a bit.
This story could fit into multiple categories, it is planned to be a isekai fantasy harem story with an incestuous twist. I also plan to explore a range of fetishes through the story. Due to one of the core themes being incest and taboo, I have placed it in the incest/taboo section, rather than the fantasy section, just so people know what they are getting in to.
As mentioned I welcome any comments you have about the story. And I hope that you enjoy reading this first chapter.
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To introduce myself a bit, my name is Tony Hearth, I'm 25 years old, and what follows is my story, or at least my story once it got interesting. My life had changed a lot over the last couple of years, both for the better and for the worse, I'd graduated university with a master's degree in molecular biology, I'd joined the working world at a research laboratory and I'd even got myself a girlfriend. All of that happened within a 6 month period and I felt on top of the world. Then suddenly, I didn't. It was my twin sister, Sarah, who called to tell me our parents had both died in a car crash.
The next month was a blur, sorting out the legal processes, arranging their funeral and dealing with people giving their condolences. It was only a week after the funeral that things settled down enough for it to hit Sarah and I that they were really gone. All the grief seemed to have built up over that last month and it hit us like a tidal wave. We both decided very quickly that we would move back in to our parent's house so we could be there for each other, which we did immediately, before giving notice on the flats we rented. We had always been close, being twins helps with that, and while we had physical distance between us after leaving home for university, we called or facetimed several times a week. We knew that even in this most difficult of times as long as we had one another we would get through this.
Throughout all of this my girlfriend, Charlotte, was more supportive than anyone could have asked for, not just to me but to Sarah too. She made it her goal to ensure the two of us didn't sink into a deep depression, spending more time at ours than she did at her own home. She even went so far as to rope her sister, Harriet into helping her. Although I suspected that came with an ulterior motive, as most of the times Harriet came by she ended up taking Sarah out somewhere just long enough for Charlotte and I to end up a sweaty mess.
Six months later and things had started to settle for Sarah and I. We weren't over the sudden loss of our mum and dad, but we'd reached acceptance and were ready to start moving forwards. Part of this moving forwards came quite suddenly, during a visit from Charlotte and Harriet. While we were sat in the garden enjoying the weather and talking away, Harriet mentioned that things were strained between the sisters and their mum whom they lived with. After a bit of prying Charlotte admitted that between things getting serious between her mum and her new boyfriend, and the amount of time the sisters had spent at our place, pressure was rising for the girls to leave the nest. Before I even had the chance Sarah offered the sisters to move in with us, at least temporarily, seeing as we had the space and was the least we could do to thank them for all their help. So that's how I ended up moving into the master bedroom that I now shared with Charlotte. And that's what led to Charlotte changing my life once again by admitting her hidden desires.
Our sex life was great, Charlotte was an absolute goddess with a sex drive to match. She stood at 5 foot 2, with long straight ginger hair, green eyes and freckles dotted across her nose and cheeks above her full lips. Through years of competitive long distance running she had a toned athletic body, with perky little A cup breasts topped of with big puffy nipples. Equally as puffy was her pussy, with big lips that concealed the gooey centre within. She'd trim her pubic hair into various different designs, but never fully shave it to remind me that the carpet matched the drapes. I wasn't bad looking myself, at 6ft tall, light brown hair, blue eyes and a handsome enough face, if somewhat ruined by needing thick glasses due to my terrible eyesight. I had strong powerful legs from a lifetime of playing football and athletics, though my upper body always remained skinny regardless of how much I tried to train it. However next to Charlotte I may as well have been a cockroach, that's how hot she was.
After moving in Charlotte took every opportunity to jump my bones, though she did her best to remain respectful of our respective sisters. While the sex was fantastic, it was fairly vanilla, and after a few months we sat and talked about wanting to try new things. And try new things we did, over the next month and a half we experimented with different kinks, bondage, spanking, whipping, rope play, exhibitionism, watersports, pegging, mutual masturbation, and the list goes on. Each day Id get home from work and Charlotte would show me the new thing she wanted to try that night. We both enjoyed most of the things we tried, and there were only a few hard limits that we wouldn't try. While I was satisfied with carrying on the new kinds of sex we had discovered, there were a few other things on Charlotte's list that she wanted to try, top of which was a threesome with another girl as Charlotte admitted during this experimenting that she was bi-curious and wanted to see if she was fully bisexual. Not someone to look a gift horse in the mouth I agreed, and Charlotte set us up an account on a site to find our unicorn.
After a couple of weeks we found a girl around our age, a gorgeous blonde named Tasha, who agreed to join us. And so we had fun, even through the awkwardness of your first threesome, wondering what to do at different times and such. Charlotte spent plenty of time getting physical with Tasha, and admitted afterward that she was bi, but still much preferred men. However when Charlotte decided she needed to take a breather and told me to carry on with Tasha while she meant back against the pillows it was like something sparked inside of her unbeknownst to me at the time.
The next day after seeing Tasha off in the morning, we laid in bed and discussed how we felt about the night before. We both agreed that it was great fun and that we'd love to do it again, then Charlotte hit me with her realisation that her favourite part had been watching me fucking Tasha while she sat off to the side. She was worried that I would think she was weird for that, so we took some time to do some research online, finding out that Charlotte had a cuckquean fetish as did many women and that reassured her that she was perfectly normal.
Again the months rolled on, things had settled. In the bedroom we explored Charlotte's new fetish, finding different girls for me to fuck while she sat in the corner and orgasmed her brains out. We played around with different things, and she loved the bits of humiliation play we tried, she also loved slurping up a creampie after I was finished with a girl. Our relationship was getting better by the day and we were hopelessly in love with each other. Outside of the bedroom our house became like a little family, Harriet and Charlotte became like sisters to Sarah and we all made sure to set aside time to do the simple things that families do. We ate dinner together every day, we had lazy nights watching whatever caught someone's fancy. All three of the girls would come to cheer me on when I went to play football, which led to plenty of banter from my teammates. Once a fortnight we would go out somewhere, be it just a walk on the moors, a trip to the zoo or an evening out at the pub followed by going to a nightclub.
And so things carried on in the same vein. The 4 of us growing closer, especially so after a call from Charlotte and Harriet's mum telling them she was moving abroad with her boyfriend. The girls took it well enough, they weren't overly close with their mother and had suspected something like this might happen given the decreasing amount of contact, but it still came as a bit of a shock. While they didn't need as much support as Sarah and I had, we made sure we were there for them nonetheless.