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Severely injured at practice playing football, Susan takes Brett to the doctor
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"I know you can handled this as well as anything you put your mind to but taking my brother to see his doctor should be my responsibility and not yours," said Erin giving Susan back more attitude than she received.
The more mature adult, Susan was calm and in control of Erin. With the both of them having control issues, Erin gave Susan a look as if she was ready to fight over taking her brother to the doctor. Seemingly, their line of demarcation, Brett was the lynchpin, the key, and the one they needed for one or the other to gain complete control over the family and neither women was ready to give up their control over him. The woman who controlled the family would be unofficially deemed the Dominatrix. It was an unofficial title because the family didn't even know that they were under the spell of a Dominatrix, Susan, and a Dominatrix in training, Erin.
With Erin not even 20-years-old, she wasn't old enough and sexually experienced enough to be given such a title, the title of Dominatrix. She still had much to learn in how to exert control, punishment, and discipline without having to submit and give her submissive one sex. Erin was certainly sexually experienced enough but not in the wily ways that Susan was. With Susan an experienced Dominatrix, she had a way of getting whatever she wanted from men and from women without ever having to give them sex unless she wanted to give them sex. She controlled when and how much sex she gave anyone.
Other than her father and her brother, Erin possessed that gift too but to get what she wanted from all of the other men in her life, she had to submit her beautiful body to them and give them sex. Breaking the code, giving too much too soon, a Dominatrix never submits to anyone unless she wanted to submit and unless that was her plan for her to gain even more control of her submissive one. With this family the prize, it was all about taking control of Tiffany, the mother, Michael, the father, and Brett, the son.
Only, Erin was the one ruining everything. She was the one getting in the way and interfering with Susan's plan. She was the one resisting Susan taking control of her family. Erin wanted to have control of her family but she wasn't ready to have the responsibility of control but Susan was.
"Your mother asked me to take Brett to the doctor's office, not you," said Susan talking to her in a soft, calm, and controlled voice.
Seemingly the calmer Susan spoke to Erin, the more upset Erin became. The poor thing, she had so much to learn. If she couldn't control her own emotions, how could she control anyone else's emotions? If she couldn't even control her own temper, Susan had little hope that she could control anyone. She had to learn the first lesson of being a Dominatrix, never allow anyone to see you coming.
"You may control my mother and my father but you don't control me or my brother. I control my brother, not you," she said pointing a stiff index finger at her. "Much like my mother, you're a control freak," she said falling silent and softening while seemingly waiting for Susan to capitulate.
Susan didn't submit. She'd never submit to anyone, especially to someone like Erin who was so young, so inexperienced, and who knew so little about life. Not allowing herself to be sucked into Erin's little power game of struggling for control, Susan didn't respond. Instead she remained silent.
She paused the conversation to allow Erin to stew in her own thoughts. She knew that Erin had a way of bringing herself to a boil. She didn't need to say anything to help her poison stew along. She knew that Erin would lose her temper without any help from her. Susan gave her a look at is she was sizing up the competition at the Olympic game of jousting, should they ever have an Olympic game of jousting.
'Kettle black,' thought Susan while laughing to herself.
If anyone in the family was a control freak, Erin was the one who was controlling. A spoiled brat, Erin was the one who had been running roughshod over this family for years. Frustrating her mother at every turn, she had her father and now her brother wrapped around her little finger. Her wish was their command. Her desires were always fulfilled by her father and/or her brother while her mother helplessly watched from the sidelines.
Even with the small notion of not being able to take her brother to see his family doctor, she was made powerless by her mother calling Susan and not her. If anyone was a control freak, it was Erin. It was best that Tiffany had clipped her daughter's wings, otherwise, she may have already flown away and taken off with some man. It was best, that Tiffany put an end to Erin's reign over the family by enlisting Susan's help. Without even realizing it, by relinquishing the control of her family to Susan, Tiffany had chosen the bigger of evils by choosing her best friend over her daughter.
"Why would you want to go to your brother's doctor's appointment when you've shown no interest in your brother, other than when teasing him, enticing him, and seducing him into giving you sex?"
Rubbing it in her face, when Erin looked guilty and embarrassed that she had sex with her brother, Susan laughed. She was such a novice at the Dominatrix game. She didn't know the first thing about being a Dominatrix. She didn't know the first thing about controlling anyone, never mind her brother, especially her brother who only wanted sex. Only, with her beautiful face, shapely body, and mean disposition, she had all the makings of a becoming a good Dominatrix.
"We were all a little crazy for a while, especially before Brett was injured," said Erin. "Besides, using his injury as your excuse, and with him unable to shower himself, you wanted to show Brett your naked body as much as he wanted to see your naked body when you helped him shower last night. You're as much of a whore and an exhibitionist as I am," said Erin.
She was right. Susan had played her own version, a reverse version, of the movie called, Spanking the Monkey. Instead of a son helping his mother take her shower after she had broken her leg, she had helped her surrogate son shower after he had injured himself playing football. Only, instead of remaining dressed, averting her eyes, and reaching her hand and arm in the shower to help Brett wash himself, she stripped herself naked and climbed in the shower with him. Her last resort way of regaining control over Brett after his sister had given him sex, she was desperate to reel him back in before she lost control over him for good to Erin. If she didn't have control over Brett, she'd never have control over Erin and if she didn't maintain control over Brett and Erin, two against one, she'd lose control over Tiffany and Michael.
If she felt that she needed to get in the shower with him, she could have helped him shower by wearing her old, grubby clothes and thrown them in the wash afterwards. She could have helped him shower by wearing her bathing suit or her bra and panty but she didn't. Instead she removed all of her clothes. She stripped herself naked. By stripping herself naked to help Brett take a shower in readiness for his doctor's appointment today, she had used her naked body as her desperate attempt to gain control of him. After Erin had torpedoed all of Susan's hard work in gaining control over Brett, she needed to take him back from his sister.
"There's nothing sexual about nudity when used in the right context," said Susan putting Erin on the defensive. "There was no way that Brett could shower without my help. The only difference between you and me is, I didn't have sex with your brother. If you had stripped yourself naked to shower with him, you would have had sex with him," said Susan with a laugh. "You're such a little whore. If you had stripped yourself naked, you would have fallen to your knees in the shower and sucked your brother's cock before fucking his cock."
Unsuccessfully trying to hide her anger, Erin gave her a knowing look.