Hey! I'm a long-time reader but a first-time writer here. I have a few fantasy stories under my belt, but this will be my first (of many, hopefully) time writing erotica. This tale is going to be a novel-sized work about a man's romance with his sister, as well as a few other women. There will be plenty of sex all throughout it, but the beginning starts out somewhat slow and builds up to the good stuff. If you're looking for a quick two-page fix, this probably isn't the story for you. Anyway, I hope you enjoy, and I look forward to hearing some feedback!
Prologue -- Heartbreak
Like any story worth telling, this one starts with a girl. Mikayla Bayer, i.e. the love of my life. She has long strawberry blonde hair and eyes like the crystal-clear sea. She's 5'6" of pure petite beauty, slender in all the right places, and curvy in the rest with delectable B-cup chest. More uniquely, she has a facial birthmark. Honestly, the birthmark is probably why I first noticed her when we met our junior year in high school, although she has always been ashamed of it. It's a port-wine color, reaching from under her left eye to travel down her cheek and lightly touch her lips and nose. She's pale year-round, so with the sharp contrast it is usually the first thing people notice about her.
Anyway, I've never been much one for overkilling with too much preamble, so let's get straight into what started all of this.
July 4
th
, 2012
I stretched lazily with an even bigger yawn as I woke up on the old living room couch. I didn't have work today, so while watching TV and waiting for Mikayla to finish her shift at Denny's I must've nodded off. Still in a half-asleep daze, I picked my cell off the coffee table and checked for notifications. I swore softly as soon as I saw it was already half-past six and shuddered inwardly at the expected slew of missed texts, quickly unlocking my phone.
5:05 pm, Mikayla: Hey baby. Just got done, I'm gonna head home and shower my sweaty ass b4 I come over.
5:30 pm, Mikayla: Yo, douchebag, y u no love me?
6:00 pm, Mikayla: Just got out of the shower. Ur missing out big time 😊
6:15 pm, Mikayla: ...
I sighed and quickly typed up the response, knowing full well I was about to seriously get it. Two years of dating and she was still just as insecure as the girl I had fallen in love with my junior year. Never mind that I had never once given her a reason not to trust me.
Me: Hey babe. I was asleep, sorry. I worked a full 14 shift last night at the DC. I miss you bunches. You on your way?
A few seconds later my phone dinged, meaning that she had probably been tightly clutching her phone while trying not to sob into the hoody I gave her. Again. I sighed once more, too exhausted and sore to put up with this today. The distribution center had been especially busy lately, by the time I got home from a night of order filling I had to literally use my arms to help drag my sore legs into functioning.
Mikayla: That's alright, baby. I know you've been working really hard lately. I just pulled up now. See u in a sec.
Completely caught off-guard that she wasn't livid, I tried to quickly jump to my feet. It was a mistake because my body roared in protest, my legs shaking violently before I nearly crashed into the glass coffee table. Catching myself, barely, I stood slower this time to give my legs time to wake up from their sore stupor.
As I got to the door and pulled it open, she was just stepping onto the small porch. She grinned and darted over to give me a quick kiss. She looked stunning in a tight, blue tank top the same color of her eyes and what ought to be illegally tight jeans. She rolled her eyes when she pulled away to give me a once over.
"You really did oversleep. Or were you trying to be shirtless to tempt me for some quick fun before we head to your uncles?" her soft, melodic voice was unusually chipper for a workday. She must've gotten some great tips. That thought was confirmed as she ran her icy blue nails down my bare chest seductively.
In sharp contrast, my deep voice was gruff and somewhat hoarse since I was still in a daze. "I think my madre would murder me if showed up smelling like sex."
She giggled and let herself in as I closed the door and locked it. "Oh, the horror! Her poor corruptible baby boy." I rolled my eyes and she followed me up the stairs to my room so I could get ready. She plopped down on my bed and watched while I stripped and pulled clean clothes out onto the footboard.
Before I could make to pull on clean boxers, she was suddenly next to me. I let out a soft hiss of surprise as she leaned down to softly cup my balls in her hand. "Mmm, I really missed you this week," her soft voice was as mischievous as I had ever heard it. It was surprising, but I wasn't about to complain and ruin her good mood.
Her eyes sparkled with her words, as with painstaking slowness, she moved her mouth to my neck and kissed softly. My already barely functioning legs shook weakly from the mixture of her soft touch and warm breath, slowly trailing her lips down my collarbone to my chest. "God, I missed you too babe."
I could practically feel her grin against me as she continued trailing her lips to my nipple and nibbled softly. Being one of the average men who had extremely sensitive and small nipples, I gasped at her quick torture before she continued her decent to my flat stomach. All the while never taking those gorgeous orbs of blue from my face.
I had to grip the dresser to not fall over when she finally completed her torture to my now fully erect member and lightly took the tip in her mouth as she cupped my balls still in one hand and pinched my nipple hard with the other. The triple onrush of senses was what nearly knocked me over, and her eyes grinned even more mischievous.
There was absolutely no fight in me to protest, even if I wanted to as she quite masterfully swirled her tongue around the head while bobbing gently back and forth. She had quite a gag reflex, so usually she refused to take more than an inch or two at once. So, it was a big surprise when she suddenly forced her throat down nearly half my length.
I probably said 'oh, God' a dozen times and gripped the dresser like it was a life raft as I felt the tip brush the back of her throat. Before she could gag, she slowly pulled back out to just the tip and began swirling her tongue around the underside of my shaft. Her hand finally released my nipple and joined her sudden quest of getting me to erupt in less than five minutes, beginning to stroke my length. Stamina wise for sex, I was plenty prepared, but for a rare, spontaneous blowjob better than any she had given me before -- I was not.
Licking the precum I was sure was dripping copiously now, she forced her head back down to engulf half of me. I pulsed, hard, and cried out to every god listening in thanks for the angel before me as I desperately struggled not to cum yet. It took everything I had in me, but it was successful. Her eyes went pouty then sexy as she began to hum softly in her throat.
The vibrations intermixed with her tongue's gentle probing and the light sucking motion in a perfect harmony of the most wonderful torture in existence.
Her moan turned to pure bliss as I finally lost an uphill battle and erupted a week's worth of unspent cum. I wasn't usually aggressive, so my sudden guttural growl probably shocked me as much as it did her. I grabbed a fist full of her pale hair and held her still with half my length engulfed in her beautiful petite mouth. The first massive spurt of cum went straight down her throat. She gulped it greedily with a deeper moan, desperately trying not to cough or choke.
My own moan was more of a throaty growl as two more of the most intense spurts of my life shook my body. She gulped with everything she had, and I finally released my hold on her hair. Her eyes were amused as she pulled back to the tip and continued to suck until she possessed everything I could give and a little more. Finally, she ended the agonizing assault on my dick and released me with a wet pop. It was like music to my ears.
My knees wobbled as she shot to her feet and grinned from ear-to-ear. I could barely believe what just happened. She had never swallowed me before ever. Whatever suddenly changed, she really seemed to enjoy it now though, because not a single white drop of my nectar was spilt. "Marry me," I joked weakly.