I got this part done faster than I expected. I'm enjoying writing this story, as well as the longer format. I didn't know what to expect going into it, but the longer parts instead of shorter chapters ended up turning this story into more of a novel than a collection of sex stories like most of my other stories. This part is 110 pages, bringing the whole thing to 215 pages so far. Once the third and final part is finished, this will basically be a full novel.
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A sort of cold emptiness enveloped me as I rode up to the mall, in spite of the glaring heat radiating from the torrid June sun. My mind kept trying to contemplate what it had just seen, but I didn't want to let it. There didn't seem to be any scenario I could come up with where the mysterious woman wasn't somehow bad. Despite her bright effervescence, and the shining white fur of the cat, the lady just had a dark aura. I parked my bike beside the others as I rode up. I saw Ryan and Shannon's bikes both parked, and that made me feel better. I headed into the mall, my head still spinning slightly. I didn't get more than fifty feet into the building before Britney came running up to me.
"Hey, Jake," she said in a bouncy sort of way, giving me a sexy smile I wasn't used to seeing from her. She was certainly attractive, but I had never really been into her. Seeing the way she was looking at me now though, I all of a sudden found Britney quite sexy indeed.
"Uh, hey Britney," I said, trying to clear my mind of the dark thoughts brewing there. Seeing Britney's sexy smile reminded me of what I now had. It was a gift, not a curse. And it was meant to be used. And use it I would. Maybe even on Britney if she kept looking at me like that.
"Stephanie's been telling everyone all about you," Britney said excitedly, clearly expecting some big reaction from me.
"Oh... uh... what has she been saying?" I asked. Britney began walking beside me towards the food court.
"You know what she's been saying," Britney said in a clearly teasing manner. "She's been telling everyone she can about what a total stud you are. And everyone knows what a stupid liar Amy is now."
"Don't be mean to Amy," I said, still feeling bad for her. She didn't need to tell people what happened between us, but she hadn't been lying.
"You're too nice, Jake," Britney laughed. "She's going to get what's coming to her." I just sighed, knowing it was no use trying to persuade her against it.
"Do you know where Ryan and Shannon are?" I asked, trying to change the subject, and hopefully be able to escape Britney.
"Yeah, they're at the Radio Shack," Britney said, looking somewhat displeased that I had asked.
"Ok," I nodded, and changed directions. As much as I wanted to go revel in the glory of Stephanie's gossip, I knew I needed to go talk to my friends first. My situation seemed to have taken a serious turn, and I needed advice.
"Where are you going?" Britney asked as I turned. "Stephanie is waiting for you. She even got Ella to come along. She said you're going to apologize to her."
"Yeah, I will," I said. I hadn't expected Ella to be here, and definitely not for her to be waiting for me. But they would have to wait. Right now, I needed my friends. "Tell Stephanie I'll be there soon. I just need to go talk to Ryan and Shannon really quick first."
"You know, Jake," Britney frowned at me. "If you want to be popular now, you're going to have to blow off your loser friends when Stephanie and Ella are waiting for you."
"I got it, Britney," I said, feeling slightly exasperated. "I'll be over there soon. Just, give me a few minutes, ok?"
"Fine," Britney frowned at me. "But don't be surprised if they aren't happy with you."
I hurried down the pathway, leaving Britney behind, looking annoyed. I saw a few people I knew as I walked, and they all looked like they wanted to talk to me, but I kept walking at a brisk pace, and none of them stopped me. When I finally got to the radio shack, I saw Ryan bobbing his head with a big pair of headphones on, and Shannon standing next to him, flipping through the CD rack. She looked over as I approached, and then gave me a funny look.
"What the hell happened to you?" She asked, looking down. I followed her gaze, and noticed I still had a large bloody scrape on my arm. I had forgotten all about it, and as soon as I saw it, it began to sting.
"Oh... uh, I fell off my bike," I said. Shannon just shook her head. Ryan looked over and took his headphones off as he saw me.
"What happened to your arm, dude?" Ryan asked.
"I need to talk to you guys," I said seriously. Ryan just shrugged, but Shannon instantly seemed concerned.
"What happened now?" Shannon frowned.
"I saw the lady from the woods again," I confided. Both of their eyes went wide, and they leaned in to hear more. "Let's go outside."
"Jake, what happened?" Shannon asked in an almost panicked voice.
"Just, come on, ok?" I said. They both looked confused and concerned now, but they followed me. I led them outside, and over to a curb where we could talk without being heard.
"Ok," I sighed as we sat down. "I saw the lady from the woods again."
"In broad daylight?' Ryan asked, sounding skeptical. I could tell he didn't really believe she was real.
"Yeah," I nodded. "She's really hot by the way. But she's fucking scary," I added a moment later.
"What do you mean scary?" Ryan asked with an amused chuckle.
"It's hard to explain," I said truthfully. "She's not normal."
"The scary witch lady from the woods who gave you a magical huge cock isn't normal?" Shannon said flatly, and Ryan laughed out loud.
"No," I said, ignoring her sarcasm. "I don't even know if she's human."
"Really?" Ryan scoffed. "This is getting to be a little much, dude. You've got the whole damn town talking about your dick. You're fucking hot chicks. And now the magic lady is an alien? It's too much."
"I don't know if she's an alien," I said. I hadn't even considered that, but it certainly seemed possible.
"Well, if she's not a human, and not an alien, then what is she?" Shannon asked.
"I'm not sure," I said slowly, not wanting to tell them what I actually suspected. "But she's something weird. I think she might be bad."
"Jake, you're not making sense again," Shannon frowned. "Just tell us what happened. Where did you see the witch lady?"
"I was riding my bike down Cherry Street," I began. "And then this white cat ran in front of my bike. I ate it pretty bad. Hence the scrape," I said, showinghelp up them my cut-up arm. They both looked it over, and then turned back to listen to me. "Then I followed the cat into an alley."
"Why?" Shannon interrupted me.
"I don't know," I shrugged. "I was going to try to kick it or something. Or at least scare it." Ryan snorted laughter, and Shannon frowned and shook her head.
"You're an idiot," Ryan laughed.