Warning: You will drive yourself crazy if you focus too much on the grammar, so with that being clear out of the way, I hope you enjoy the story.
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Today is Rachel's 18th birthday. She has been waiting for this day since she was 15th. This birthday was going to be different from all of her other birthdays. Rachel wanted this birthday to be special for her and her father. She didn't want no presents, or any materialistic things. She knew exactly what she wanted from her father, and she plan on getting it tonight on her birthday. She has turn down so many boys at school, and all because she want her father to be the first. Her first sexual intercourse, her first kiss, and even her first lover. She couldn't wait to turn her fantasy into a reality. She knew it's going to be a big risk, but she's hoping she will be able to change the way her father looks at her after tonight.
Dad: "Rachel, are you sure you don't want anything for your birthday? I even offer to buy you a car, and surprisingly you turn it down."
Rachel: "A car is nice, but it's not what I want for this birthday."
Dad: "What kind of daughter wouldn't want a car for her 18th birthday? What could you possibly want more than a car?"
Rachel: "Daddy, I know you're confused right now, but tonight I will reveal all to you."
Rachel smiled.
Dad: "What does that even mean? Why can't you just tell me now, so I can give it to you by tonight."
Rachel: "I really hope you do give it to me by tonight, but daddy, you have to promise me that no matter what, you will give me what I ask for."
Dad: "I can't give you what you're asking for if I don't know what it is."
Rachel: "Just promise me, daddy."
Dad: "Ummm, I guess."
Rachel: "I need to hear you say, I promise."
Dad: "I promise."
Rachel: "You promise what?"
Dad: "I promise I will give you whatever you want tonight for your birthday."
Rachel: "Daddy, tonight it the night is where we become very close."
Dad: "I don't know how we can get any more closer than we already are."
Rachel: "Don't worry, daddy. You will see what I mean by the end of the night, and who knows, we both might like it."
Dad: "Like what? You're confusing me, sweetie."
Rachel: "Daddy, just relax for now, and when the time is right, I'll let you know when I'm ready for my present."
Dad: "I haven't bought anything for you, yet, because you say you didn't want anything at the store."
Rachel: "I don't, daddy. All I need is you to be here for my birthday. I'm also giving away something for you, daddy."
Dad: "What! Why are you giving me a present on your own birthday?"
Rachel: "Let's just say, that it will benefit the both of us."
Dad: "You have completely lost me. When you're ready, let me know, and I'll give you whatever that you want."
Rachel: "Remember, you promised"
Dad: "Yeah, yeah, yeah, I promised."
He was so confused about the whole conversation that he just had with Rachel. How could he giver her a present when he haven't even bought anything at the store? What kind of present is she talking about? Whatever the present is, it seems like Rachel is really excited about it. He couldn't imagine anything that's better than a car as for a birthday present. She never mention anything about concerts, or traveling, so what could his daughter possibly want that he doesn't possessed. He was watching TV then all of sudden he hear his daughter Rachel calling him. He walk down the hall way, and stop in front of her bedroom door.
Dad: "Sweetie, are you in there? Did you want something from daddy."
Rachel: "Daddy, I'm in the bathroom, come in, and sit down on my bed."
He walks in, and sat down on the edge of her bed.
Dad: "Sweetie, are we going out because if so, you should've told me, so I can get dress."
Rachel: "No, daddy, we're not going any where tonight. I just need you to relax, and be ready to give me my present."
Dad: "I still don't know what I'm supposed to give you. Can you at least give me a clue?"
Rachel: "Just sit, and wait. I'm almost done, daddy."
He have no idea why he feel so nervous, but he couldn't wait to get this over with. His daughter was acting strange today, and he couldn't figure out why. Then he heard the bathroom door opened, and he saw Rachel walks out.
Dad: "Rachel, why are you wearing a bath robe?"
Rachel: "Daddy, before I tell you what I want for my birthday, I want to tell you that I appreciate everything you've done for me. I know it wasn't easy raising me as a single father. You bought me food, and clothes, and kept a roof over our head, and I just want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart."
Dad: "Is that what you wanted to tell me this whole time? You don't have to thank me, sweetie, it's my job as a father to take care of you."
Rachel: "There's more, daddy. I love you very much, and you have shown me how much I can trust you, and tonight on my 18th birthday, I want you to take my virginity."
Dad: "Are you out of your mind? I can't do that, I'm your father."
Rachel: "Well, maybe this will change your mind."
Rachel drop her bath robe, and she was completely naked. He couldn't believe his own eyes, and not because his daughter was naked, but because of how beautiful she looks naked. For the first time, he saw his daughter as a grown woman, and he have to admit, she looks very sexy. He wonder to himself, how did he not notice how beautiful she was before, or maybe he did, and he just chose not to acknowledge his own lustful feelings toward his daughter.
Rachel: "Do you like what you see, daddy?"
Dad: "Um, I think I shouldn't see you like this."
Rachel: "See me like what?"
Dad: "You know, like this."
Rachel: "I think you see more than just your daughter. I think see me as an attractive woman. I think you see me as some one that you want to have sex with."
Dad: "No, I don't."
Rachel: "Then tell me why you have a boner in your pant? I think you want me, daddy."
Dad: "Rachel, can you please put some clothes on?"
Rachel: "Don't you think I'm beautiful, daddy?"
She walks closer to her father.
Dad: "Rachel, please don't come any closer."
She continue walking closer until she was at a close enough distance between herself and her father.
Rachel: "Daddy, give me your hand."
Dad: "Why?"
Rachel: "Daddy, I'm not going to hurt you. Just give me your hand."
He don't know why, but he did as she said. She took her father's hand, and put it on her right hip. His heart was beating so fast. He couldn't believe he was touching his daughter naked flesh.
Rachel: "How does that feel, daddy?"
Dad: "Umm, it feels nice."
She took her father's hand, and move it behind on her right ass.
Rachel: "You can squeeze it if you want to, daddy."
He gently squeezed his daughter ass, and it feel so wonderful in his hand. She moved her father's hand up to her right breast. This was becoming too much for him to bear.
Rachel: "Do you like how my breast feel, daddy?
Dad: "I do. It's so soft and tender."
She took her father' hands once again, and slowly move it down pass her belly button.
Dad: "Stop. We can't go there."