The following is my twelfth submission in the Babydoll series. I truly appreciate those who have supported the series and especially those who have written me offering encouragement or giving me constructive criticism.
I appreciate all feedback. I was somewhat disappointed with the reception of the last submission. It seemed to receive some negative votes, but without feedback. I am truly interested in why people gave negative scores. I believe it was because they were disappointed with the direction of the story and not because of grammar or composition.
In the end, this is my story and I take ownership of its praise and its flaws as decided by you. I have enjoyed telling this tale. Apologize that I haven't been able to put it out at a faster pace.
When I sat down to further this a few years ago, I wrote what amounts to three or four chapters and now they are ready for release. As I have finished, I have had to go back and fill in the gaps to maintain the continuity. Just like with a movie script, you don't always know where the direction of the story will lead. The further you get down the road, the more intricate the details become and demand attention. You know where you started and where you would like it to end, but the getting there means that you have to go with the ebb and flow.
Each chapter lends itself to the big picture as a sequel -- just like a movie. Of course these are fictional accounts. Please read the previous chapters, if you haven't. This is purely fantasy. Hope you enjoy the fantasy.
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It was December 21st as I waited for my girlfriend Jill to finish up at her work. My finals in school had finished the week before and it was time to head home for the holiday. We were both Sophomores at one of my home state's universities. Jill was coming to stay at my house, with my family, until the day after Christmas, when I would be putting her on a flight so she could be with her own family before the winter break ended and the start of the Winter semester would begin as we prepared to finish our sophomore year.
I had been home just 4 weeks before at Thanksgiving. That was a tumultuous time that I needed to get out of my mind. I only stayed for parts of three days, because of the events that had taken place. Before that, I hadn't been home for 8 months. At Thanksgiving, you could say that I had gotten my come uppance for the previous dalliances that I had had with my sister and my mother. Now here we were and it was time to head home again. While there was certainly a reluctance, as if playing dangerously with fire, I was drawn to what I understood was a necessity.
Originally, being in college had been hard, because of being away from my family and mostly Ashley, whom I thought of all the time. I was always concentrating on my studies and Jill had helped pass the time by being my friend and study partner.
I always looked to please my grandfather since he had done so much to take care of me. Don't think that thoughts didn't enter my head to cast my responsibilities off and run away. Many times it felt like I was just going through the motions. I was only a year and a half into the journey towards earning a Law degree. That is troublesome many times when your path has been laid out for you.
I lived in a single room apartment just off of campus. You know what is basically a glorified off-campus dorm room. That helped a lot when it came to having peace and quiet. Jill had gotten to where she spent most of her time with me at the apartment, although she kept a place of her own and she had roommates. I think she was enamored with how independent I was. It helped to have a partner to work with to accomplish our goals. Sometimes I felt Jill was clingy, but I never mentioned that to her. In some ways I enjoyed it, although it could be uncomfortable, when you know what I had lurking in the background.
The car was packed and the tank was full as we got ready for the 300-mile journey across the state. It would probably be 3pm before we could leave and we probably wouldn't arrive at my home for nearly 6 hours after that.
I spotted Jill driving up in her little Ford Focus as she parked it next to my car in the designated space for my apartment. I met her halfway to greet her with a kiss, as she entered the apartment, "You ready to get going babe?" "I just left work and came straight here. Would you mind if I take a shower and freshen up a little before we leave."
"OK, but I'm wanting to hit the road before it gets too late," antsy to get a move on. " It's already going to be 9pm when we get there." She tugged my hand, "Come on, I need you to wash my back."
"Jillllll, I've already taken a shower," I responded.
" Yooou haven't taken one with meee," she smirked as she insistently pulled us towards the bathroom. Once we got there, Jill held interlocked my fingers as she leaned her back against the counter of the hand washing basin.
"Have you been thinking about me today?" she asked seductively. "I've been thinking about you all day long... Thinking about our trip."
"Of course I think about you Jilly," I confided as we began nibbling on one another. The touching and feeling aroused me, as Jill reached down and grasped my burgeoning woody through my pants. "Oh my. We can't have you driving around for 5 hours like that can we. I think we better take care of this, don't you agree?" as she pushed in and hungrily consumed me.
"You're the boss," I breathed in her ear, as the provocation began to consume me . "So what are we going to do about it?" I snickered anticipating what was next.
She took my hands and pulled them to the buttons of her blouse, "I want you to undress me honey." And I started at the top button and began releasing the little catches. As I did so, she released the belt on her skirt and slid it and her panties past her hips, letting them fall to the floor before kicking them to the side. She put her hands on the edge of the counter and lifted herself so that she was sitting on it as I leaned into her, and then she spread her legs open to reveal her smooth pussy to me. Her little pink labia peaked out from behind the swollen lips; thin and rosy brown.
She pulled at the buckle of my belt until it released, then uncinched the button of my jeans as she deftly pulled the zipper apart and let them fall from my waist. She then wrapped her toned arms and athletic legs around me and pulled me in for a closer embrace. We were face to face, looking each other straight in the eyes as we once again let go in the raw passion of our kisses.
There was a certain look on her face as we resigned ourselves to where this moment was heading. I could feel the heat of her flushed skin against my own. There was a wetness a to our salivating mouths as we savored one another. The taste of her skin and the sensations of our movements excited me to know end.
Jill slowly slid off the counter and headed towards the shower, where she turned the water on and waited for it to warm. As she stepped in, she motioned for me to join her, "Come on baby, I need you." As I stepped in behind, Jill pulled the shower curtain forward to enclose us and then turned to face me. There was a twinkle in her eyes as we stood nude together with the hot water pulsing over our bodies.
"I'm sooo excited." Jill sparkled as she revealed. "Thank you for taking me home with you for Christmas," as she took the soap and began lathering my chest.
"You're welcome," was the only thing I could think to say.
She smiled, as she put her face and hair under the water. As we stood pressed against one another with our naked bodies touching, she reached up and kissed me, then she grabbed the shampoo and started lathering her hair, before reaching up to lather mine and rolling her hands down thoroughly washing my chest, which she seemed to enjoy. Seeing the positive joy she expressed caused me to pull her close, feeling her torso against my own, while I proceeded to kiss her. Our faces melted together under the hot stream of water with tongues exploring and enjoying one another. I started massaging her now slippery wet breasts, before taking the soap from its holder, working a lather in my hands and washing her back as she wriggled within my clutches.
Eventually she asked, "Jim, will you wash my hair." As she turned away towards the showerhead it only made things better. I massaged her scalp with the sudsy foam before turning my attention to her shoulders. Tenderly washing her, I continued down her back, her bottom, her thighs, and her calves as the water cascaded down continually rinsing the soap away. At eye level I kissed her fine derriere and gave her a light smack before standing back up to admire her firm, toned figure as it glistened with water. She certainly had me turned on.
She reached up and changed the shower setting until it emitted only a fine mist of spray. I was surprised when she reached back and took my shaft in her hand and began rubbing the tip along the folds of her warm labial opening. It was all the encouragement I needed. As she gazed back at me over her shoulder, the look of seduction on her face was enough to make any man weak in the knees and I had no doubt about who was in control of the situation.