Greetings everyone! I have spent a large portion of my life being a reader, a reader of all different kinds of material, including erotica. I have read some really great stuff here. You see, when I read the stories here I always put myself in the story and decide if that was how I would have wrote it. Sometimes it is how I would have done it.....and others....not so much, and then saying to myself I could have done better. Well, I am putting my proverbial money where my mouth is and I am taking a stab at it as they say. I would love to hear what everyone thinks of my first attempt at this. I need to be clear though that I am NOT a professional writer. I didn't even take writing classes in college beyond the required writing 101 class that everyone has to take. I am sure there are some grammatical errors, but I am mainly interested in knowing what people think about the story itself and how it flows so be gentle with your feedback and I hope you enjoy the story. Oh and BTW, the story is completely fictional, nothing you are about to read actually ever happened.
Part 1: Danny's sleepwalking again
It was a warm Saturday morning; Veronica (Ronnie by her friends) had gotten up early to get her run in because she knew it would be hot by mid to late morning. One of the few downfalls if you could call it that to living in southern California in mid July was the heat starting early when there was no ocean breeze.
She was now cleaning up the house after having some coffee and a light breakfast. Ronnie is what her son Danny's friends would call a MILF. At least that's what she heard them tell Danny. Continuing to clean up around the house she stopped in front of the mirror for a look. She thought that she have kept herself up well for being 39 years old. She looked at her body. It is tall at 5'8" and very slim and trim at 130lbs. She worked hard to keep herself fit working out 4 days a week. 3 days a week after work and on Saturday mornings.
Her hair is a long, light brown and with a soft waviness to it. Her face as her husband used to say was nothing short of beautiful. Her skin an olive tone made a little darker from the tan she gets living in a warm summer climate. Continuing to asses herself she sees her long slender legs that meet at her curvy hips and flat stomach, remembering that her husband used to say they were perfect for wrapping around his waist while he was hammering away at my dripping twat. Her breasts were a round and full at a 36 DD with large areola's that are topped with large pencil eraser like nipples that are constantly standing at full attention. Especially lately!
Ronnie continued on from the mirror cleaning. She was loading the next load of laundry when she noticed the time. It was 11 AM and Danny her son was not up yet which concerned her after last nights issue.
She walked up the stairs and knocked on his door but there was no answer. She knocked harder, still nothing. She knocked again and she quietly opened the door. He was sound asleep still. Well, at least she didn't catch him masturbating again she thought. She stares at him sleeping for a few moments,
remembering the last time she walked into his room to put away laundry.
Ronnie came to Danny's door with the clean basket of cloths, not knocking she walked right in thinking he was still at work. She found him stroking his cock while watching a porn video online with headphone on. He was so freaked out that without thinking he jumped out of the chair giving her full view of his full erect and very large cock. It wasn't the first time she had seen it, but it was the first time she had seen it as a man and it was fully erect. Realizing he was showing his mother his cock at full attention he covered it with his hands. Or at least as much of it he could. She apologized and closed the door and made a bit of a giggle not thinking it was such a big deal him being a young man and all. A young man with an enormous fucking cock she thought as she walked away!
Shaking herself clear of the thought, she walked to Danny's bed and shook his shoulder hard and spoke loud enough to wake him. "Wake up Danny honey, its 11 O'clock you'll end up being late for work if you don't get moving, and I mean now".
Danny's eyes flung open, "SHIT" he said, I over slept again! He sat up and looked at his mother. "It happened again, didn't it mom?" He apologized and asked "what did I do this time"? His mother patted his shoulder and said "don't worry about it honey, its no big deal. You got up in the middle of the night and walked to the kitchen and made yourself something to eat". Danny was relieved. His mother continued to speak "in the nude. And you seemed to be very......happy if you catch my drift".
Danny moaned in embarrassment turning red. "I'm so sorry mom".
"Don't worry about sweetie. I would not have even known if you didn't make so much noise that I went down to see what was going on. Go get ready for work, or you'll be late". Leaving his room his mother turned to him, "and believe me honey you have nothing to be ashamed about with...... that thing", waving her finger around in the general direction of his crotch.
What the fuck was that Danny thought?
Thinking nothing more of it because he didn't have time Danny hopped out of bed, grabbed a towel and ran to the bathroom for a shower. Ronnie went down to the kitchen and prepared some breakfast for him so he could eat before he had to be at work at noon.
15 minutes later Danny was coming down the stairs and heading for the kitchen. His mom had a plate of food ready for him on the breakfast bar she was leaning on sipping her coffee. Seeing him walk through the doorway to the kitchen she saw him putting his shirt on over his chest.
A full grown man now at 21 Danny was tall at 6'2", broad chested, very muscular from the years of working out during high school for football being the star quarterback. It didn't hurt that his father was built like that too.
He weighed in at 215lbs now. Working the extra hours at the home center loading trucks for deliveries has given his some added bulk over the summer. His hair is black like his dads but has a nice waviness to it like hers.