This is my first submission and attempt at giving my writing skills a challenge.
A big thanks goes out to
ghostdaddy27
for editing my work and the advice about the story.
On that note, Enjoy. Any constructive comments, positive and negative, are appreciated.
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Capt. Johnathan Saunders sat bolt upright in his bed when he heard someone knocking on the front door of his one story ranch house. Rubbing sleep from his eyes, he tossed the heavy comforter on his queen-sized bed and made his way to the door. A delivery woman held out her signing pad.
"Good morning, sir," she said, pleasantly. "Please sign for your package."
He silently signed and took the package. It was addressed to him, sure enough, but it had no return address. Shrugging, he went into the kitchen and started up his coffee maker. While it was working, he grabbed some granola cereal and sat down to eat after he had enough coffee for a cup.
John reached for his cell phone that had been charging overnight on the table, unplugged it and ran through his messages. He saw a couple more condolence messages and deleted those, unread. Next, he ran through his electronic agenda. He saw that there was only one thing happening soon, an interview with a local farmer about helping out around his farm in two days.
He didn't really need the work because of his medical retirement and property income he had but he tried to keep working hard to keep the dreams and personal demons at bay with exhaustion. The work the farmer was offering was interesting since John had never even lived on a farm, let alone worked on one. He was also attracted to the long hours mentioned in the advertisement. The advertisement also mentioned using tractors and other heavy equipment. That didn't bother him either as he had driven lots of heavy vehicles in the Marines.
His phone rang. He checked the display and saw it was the farmer renting the land he had bought after his discharge.
"Hello?'
"Hey, John, it's Maggie. Sorry to call you so early but I wanted to let you know about something."
Maggie Thurston had inherited the farm next to his and had wanted more land for her crops. John hadn't had a problem renting the land to her and had given her a very good rate, in turn she helped maintain the land. She was an attractive blond with a very strong, athletic figure from the years of farm work.
"What's up?" he replied.
"I was down by the south end of the fields and there's a section of fence that's broken. I've already fixed it but I thought you should know."