Author's note 9-1-2014: Chapter 22 is well underway and I feel like I'm on a downhill run for the finish line. Feeling good about my progress in last two days, I decided to submit this chapter a little ahead of schedule since the events contained in it will not affect any of the chapters I still have to write.
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"Why do you wish me to do this?" M'pel E'kmel asked. Liam was seated on a stump under a tree in the orchard and she was standing behind him with the flint knife the chief of the nomads had given him the day before.
"Because it's been too long since I had a haircut or a shave," he said simply. "Just look at this mess. I'm a Marine. We have to maintain our grooming. And I would like to get this done before the girls get back from fishing, so please just get on with it."
"I think the beard suits you, Sergeant," she replied. "And there is nothing wrong with your hair except that it could use a good combing."
"I haven't had hair this long since I was in grade school," he moaned. "And I never liked beards. Mustaches either. Not my kind of thing."
"I strongly disagree," she said in a chiding tone. "You look vastly more handsome with both."
"Says the woman with a coat of fur," he sniped.
"You once told me you liked my fur," she said in a theatrically sulky voice. "Shall I shave it all off?"
"Oh come on," he sighed. "No. Don't shave your fur. Shave mine."
"Allow me a free hand for the moment and if you do not care for the results we can always shave you the way you prefer."
"A free hand?" he snorted. "You?"
"I must remind you that I have never shaved even the least bit of fur," she replied. "Do you really want me running such a fine edge over your flesh?"
Liam hadn't really thought about that. Likely, very few jZav'Etch had ever shaved anything. Maybe surgeons or nurses would have some experience, but the average jZav'Etch?
"Fine," he sighed. "Just... don't make me look, you know, stupid."
With a pleased purr and a flick of her tail, M'pel E'kmel began. She raked her claws lightly through Liam's hair until it lay smooth and neat. Then she used the stone blade to nick the ends off the longest and most straggly patches, giving shape and order to his hair. It did not look like the fur of a jZav'Etch by any stretch of the imagination, but it was now more presentable and suited the shape of his face. She hoped she could convince him to grow it out longer. There were male Thahn 'Den from a large island in the southern hemisphere of jZav that wore manes of wonderful, lush fur and Liam would look very attractive with his hair in that fashion.
His beard was much easier for her to attend to. It was stiffer than his hair and held its shape better. The stone blade had no difficulty making quick work of it. She brushed away the trimmings, humming happily. She had not groomed a male in many years and this was all the more enjoyable for the discomfort she had just put Sergeant Carter through.
"There," she said with a last rake of her claws through his beard, sprinkling a few more loose whiskers on the ground. "Done. Now, if your mates do not care for that, they have no taste in males."
"You didn't shave anything," Liam grumbled.
"I shaved the back of your neck and portions of your cheeks," she said sedately. "This is a very fine little knife. Nice of the chief to give it to you."
"I wanted a shave," Liam said. He was about to go on when the radio on M'pel E'kmel's hip beeped loudly and a panting squall of jZav'Etch came over it.
"What was that?" Liam demanded, forgetting his beard and haircut.
"Clot'ilda," M'pel E'kmel said and snatched the radio from her belt. "
What is wrong? Are you injured
?"
"
Atttacked
!" Clot'ilda said. "
I'm hurt! Tem'Ma'tel is gone
!"
"
Where are you
?" the commander asked. At her tone, Liam surged to his feet and she pulled him towards their stacked weapons.
"
On the path
," Clot'ilda gasped. "
I can see the gate. Rover is carrying me
."
"
Are you pursued
?" M'pel E'kmel asked, changing course for the gate.
"
No. They took Tem'Ma'tel. I couldn't stop them
."
"What the hell is going on?" Liam demanded as they got to the gate.
"She's injured," M'pel E'kmel said, hauling the heavy timber panels open in time to let Rover barrel through in a ground-eating lope. Nestled among his quills, Clot'ilda held on for dear life. The big creature slid to a stop, his claws scraping over the pavers of the plaza, and lay down rolling his shoulders to deposit the little Pah'Tht gently on the ground.
"Fuck!" Liam cursed dropping to his knees next to her. "Get a med kit! Now!"
Clot'ilda had a knot on the side of her head the size of a chicken's egg. Her eyes were open but glassy and there was a bolas wrapped around her shoulders and neck.
"Babydoll? Clot'ilda, can you hear me?" Liam asked desperately, unwinding the bolas.
"Liam," she said weakly and patted his thigh. "Tem'Ma'tel gone."
"Who did this?" he asked, though he was sure he already knew.
"They did," she said and pointed vaguely to the west.
"How is she?" M'pel E'kmel asked urgently, dropping to her knees next to him. She opened her medical kit and began examining the Pah'Tht's wound. Her ears suddenly laid back as if she were getting ready for a fight. A clear sign things were not well.
"Not good." Liam rose, checking his gun belt to be sure both EP 12s were in their holsters, and turned for the gate. "Take care of her. I'll be back as soon as I deal with this."
The commander rushed to cut him off, placing a strong hand on his chest.
"Sergeant! You can't kill them!" she said intently.
"The hell I can't," he growled. "I'll settle this, Commander. Get out of my way."
"You can't go alone," M'pel E'kmel said desperately. "There are too many of them. At least put on your armor."
"No time. They might already be torturing Tem'Ma'tel." Liam stepped forward, throwing off her hand and pushing her aside. He was forced to stop again when Rover cut him off. Liam was about to kick him, but Rover flexed the muscles in his back and the long quills on his shoulders spread. Rover snorted and looked at Liam.
"Get Clot'ilda patched up and lock this fucking gate," Liam said, straddling the big beast the way he would a horse. "We'll be back soon."
"Take a rifle!" M'pel E'kmel yelled after him, but he ignored her as Rover broke into a run.
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"
What is happening
?" demanded Seschiqal, coming out of his hut. "
Why are the people shouting like this
?"
"
I don't know
," said Sneisqlik, coming from his own hut. "
Someone has just come into the kraal. Riders
."
"
It is Stilmnah
," Seschiqal spat. He reached inside his hut and came out with his spear and club. "
He has done something unwise
."
"
What do you mean
?" asked Sneisqlik, but then he understood what his cousin meant. The huntsman and one of his hunters bore between them a ruddy furred creature like the one he had seen in the grass with the being on top of the hill. "
He has broken the peace
."
"
I will break his head
!" snarled Seschiqal. "