This is chapter 1 of the untitled series. One day I will be creative enough to come up with a name but for now this will have to do. Each chapter is taken from the point of view of a specific character, it will all start to come together in the future after the characters have all been introduced through their respective chapter. As in the prologue, this is only a rough draft and full of mistakes. I am looking forward to hearing your comments so that I can make this story as good as it possibly can be. Believe it or not, your criticism is the only thing encouraging me to keep writing. So, enjoy. J
Chapter 1 (Carrion)
Music and laughter pierced the silence of the cliffs, disturbing the peace that Carrion was so accustomed to. The mist of the great waterfall caressed the fifteen-year-old's face as he sat near its rocky edge, watching the festival in the village of Ceeny unfold below. Birds were singing there morning songs above him, people were celebrating in the village below him, and a cool breeze rushed past, whispering softly in his ear. The calmness of Carrion's surroundings began to take hold of him, making him yawn as sleep began to creep up on him.
Carrion pulled himself away from the waterfall's edge, and finding a large stone, he sat down with his back resting against it. Closing his silver-gray eyes, he allowed the sleep to overtake him.
He dreamt that he was in his own village, standing in his own room. Carrion could see and hear the festival going on outside of his window. There were harpists playing beautiful music in the various tents stationed around the village. Women were singing and dancing throughout the streets as men sat and drank the wine that being served in the alehouses.
There was so much peace, so much fun and laughter that Carrion could not help but to want to go outside and join in, but he could not exit his room. He turned to survey his walls and found that there were no doors anywhere. He ran toward the window, but it slowly closed and began to fade away until it no longer existed, it just became part of another empty wall. He heard screams coming from outside, but he could do nothing to help; he was trapped in his own room, frantically trying to escape. Finally, Carrion blacked out...
Screams were still audible in Carrion's mind. Even in complete darkness, the screaming of the people in his village persisted. A reddish glow pierced the darkness of Carrion's mind, and, with horror, he realized that he was no longer in a dream. He opened his eyes and looked in amazement and dread, as he saw the raging fire that was consuming the entire village of Ceeny.
The boy's mind was screaming at his body to move and help his people, but his body would not oblige. Instead Carrion just sat there on the cliff, watching all of his memories and friends burn along with his village. Carrion cursed himself for his cowardice, and forced himself to stand.
Carrion noticed a shadow out of the corner of his eyes. He barely saw the attacker before their bodies were colliding, and he was forced to the ground. The boy instinctively rolled with the impact and rose to his feet, prepared to defend himself against the threat; and then, he was looking into the eyes of his mother, eyes full of pain, sorrow, and confusion. She grabbed him and pulled him close to her, she refused to release him from the embrace.
"Mother...?" Carrion was utterly confused. His mother was never an emotional person, but now she seemed to be crying as she held him tightly against her body. "What happened to the village?"
She remained silent, her tears were running down her face and Carrion could feel the warm moisture caress his face as she cried.
"Mother, what's wrong?" He searched her eyes for some sort of answer, but he could not find any. His mother's silence mixed with his fear and anxiousness began to anger him. "Answer me!"
She finally spoke, her words soft as she tried to stop crying. "There are men," Carrion's mother was still out of breath from both her crying and the run into the cliffs. It sounded as if her words were choked out. "They are looking for you. They've set Ceeny ablaze, they killed the elders, and... and..." She trailed of and began to sob bitterly.
"And what?" Carrion was slowly growing impatient, his anger rising rapidly. "What else did they do?"
"They..." she looked away from him, lessening her grip on him. She refused to look him in the eyes any longer. "They killed your father!" His mother released him, fell to her knees, and hysterically began to cry.
Those four words caused him more pain than he had ever experienced in his life. It felt as if a piece of his heart had been ripped out of his chest and replaced with tamefire. Carrion visibly flinched as the words finally sunk in. Taking a step away from his mother, he turned and began to walk the long trail leading to the burning village of Ceeny.
"Where are you going?" His mother cried behind him with a fear in her voice that Carrion had never heard. "You can't go down there."
Carrion did not answer her; instead he changed from a walk to a run, and sped toward the village, never looking back toward his mother.
His mind was a blur as he continued down the cliff. Nothing about this made any sense to the young man.
Why are they looking for me?
He asked himself.
What is so important about me that they would burn an entire village to find? And, why would they kill father?