This is my first story and I would like to get some feedback for future stories/continuations.
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As I turned the car off my two friends in the back grabbed the rest of our camping stuff. Lucy grabbed the tent while Dom grabbed the food. As we got out of the car and stepped into the woods of Montana we talked about how our road trip back from Yellowstone was. Lucy tripped and dom jabbed at her verbally about how such a short person and 5'0 could miss such a large rock.
After setting up camp for the night I thought it was a beautiful night so I told my friends I was going on a walk as they went to sleep. I grabbed my coat and my flashlight and headed of into the dark woods.
"Shit" I exclaimed as I stubbed my foot on the same rock as Lucy had tripped earlier. "Well it looks like karma is a serious bitch" I laughed under my breath.
As I kept walking I heard some wolves howl at the large moon. I didn't think anything about it at the time. As I kept walking I noticed a clearing up ahead and I thought it was a good place to look at the stars and the moon.
As I layer my bunched up cost under my head I thought about my summer and how this road trip was probably the last time my best friends from high school and I were going to hang out before going to college in less than a month. It was bittersweet to think about and I stared at the moon as my eyes grew suddenly very heavy.
The next thing I knew I felt something cold and wet nudging my leg. "The fuck" I said a I noted the moon still high in the sky. As I sat up I saw the most frightening sight in my short 18 years I've been on this earth. A large white wolf stood staring at me as I suddenly felt my throat constrict in fear.
The wolf bent down and touched the leg again. I slowly stood up and tried to back up but ended up backed up against a tree. Unsure of what to do I cursed under my breath. "Why God did I have to go and take a walk in the fucking middle of the night? Is this your way punish me, by giving me a gruesome death where people won't know what happen to me?"
I started to slowly side step around the wolf to work my way back to the camp. It suddenly pulled its lips back and growled at me. I decided I can fight it I might as well sprint for it.
I turned and ran faster than ever before, albeit that's no that fast because I am more of a swimmer than a runner as a 6'3 skinny kid with no fat and not much more muscle. My legs were burning and I had cuts from the trees and brush I was running through but I wasn't slowing down. I heard the white wolf gaining on me and it seemed quickly. Up ahead I saw the shouldering remans of my campfire and gave my last push just as I felt something tackle me from behind.
I was waiting for the wolf to end it but this felt different, almost like a human body. "What?" I gasped out in the ragged breaths. As I turned I saw the most shocking and beautiful sight ever. A girls face turned to mine and smiled. I felt my mouth open and close multiple times before I even noticed her nakedness or the fact that she had literally came out of NOWHERE.
