A couple of things...
First, I'm sorry it's been a year since my last entry. Work sucks. It's draining and really sucks the motivation from writing. Sorry, dude. But I figure it is better to be late and short than nothing at all.
Second, I think I mentioned in a previous update that my chapters will be shorter from now on. I feel like that's the only way I will be able to get new chapters out. I was reading some of the old chapters and I really wish I had cut those up into smaller entries. Oh, well.
Third, I re-read most of the first chapter, and
man,
there are a lot of errors. Mostly grammatical errors and incorrect words are being used here and there. Not so much spelling, I think. But damn, there were quite a few. I blame Grammarly, which is what I use to help with cleaning up the chapters. TOTALLY not my fault...Either way, sorry about that. That was rough to read. Sheesh. I know it takes me out of a story when there are too many spelling or grammatical errors. I'll try to do better. When I published the first one there were one or two people that offered to do some proofreading/ editing, but they just sort of stopped responding, so there's that. Part of what makes doing this so daunting is writing a big chapter and feeling accomplished, but then realizing I have to run the whole thing through Grammarly and spend another couple of hours or more editing. And then I still fuck it up. Ugh. Though while editing this one I noticed a lot of grammar errors that the program is not picking up.
Some of you have emailed me using the 'send private feedback' feature or whatever it is. I read those. I've responded to all of them, but no one has ever replied so I don't know how that works. Someone let me know. Thanks for those, by the way. It's super exciting to get an email from a reader. I love the comments and encouragement I get from you guys. It's what makes this so fun.
So I wanted to ask, and I'm not promising anything, but what specifically do you guys like about this story? Is there anything you guys are hoping to see more of? Anything other than more lore or antagonists?
One last thing...Please don't come at me if I fuck up a translation for another language that is not English. I'm just using Google translator and I'm doing my best, lol. If you really want to know what I meant to say and the translation doesn't make sense just ask in a comment and I'll respond eventually.
Happy Holidays!
Mason slid his hand between Lucy's back and the bed and gripped the back of her neck, pulling her down, snug to him, so his cock rubbed roughly against her pussy, the thin fabric of her panties was soaking wet.
Mason kissed his way up her neck, leaving a sloppy wet trail up to her jaw.
"Are you ready to be a good girl for me too?"
Lucy nodded excitedly.
"Call him 'daddy', Lucy. He likes it." Lucia moved down so she was level with Lucy. She took up a similar position Lucy was in moments ago, watching the show. He felt two tails wrap themselves around his thighs once again.
Mason just barely managed to suppress a blush by busying himself with kissing Lucy's neck again. The truth of the matter was that he
did
like it, however cringy it may be. It was
hot
for reasons he couldn't put words to at the moment.
"Yes, daddy. I want to be your good girl. Please make me your good girl!"
"Pull your panties to the side for me."
"Yes, daddy!"
She reached down and slid her panties to the side.
"Guide me in."
"Yes, yes!"
She wrapped her fingers around his cock and placed the thick, blunt tip of his penis to her opening.
"Good girl, baby. Good girl."
Lucy nodded excitedly, once again biting her lip. He loved that about her. She could make biting her lip look cute, sexy, or seductive, and he couldn't get enough of it.
He slowly pushed his cock into her, stretching her pussy with his girth. As the length of him went deeper and deeper, Lucy's head tilted back on the bed, her eyes slowly closing, her mouth forming an 'O' that got bigger and bigger until his balls were smashed up against her asshole.
"Such a good girl, Lucy."
Lucy nodded, her eyes still closed. Mason pulled out and then thrust back in, slowly again, causing Lucy to lift her head and drop it back down onto the bed.
"Ohh!" She moaned. "Oohh! I missed this! A day is too long! Even an hour is too long!" She hissed, gripping the sides of his head and kissing him. "Give it to me, baby. I need it. Please give it to me. Please, please please!" She was thrusting her hips up at him now, trying desperately to fuck him.
"Behave," he growled, slapping her outer thigh. "I'm taking my frustrations out on
you.
Not the other way around."
Lucy groaned in disappointment but stopped.
"Please, daddy.
Please,"
She begged. "I want it so bad. I need it so badly! I'm being a good girl for you.
Please!
"
She nearly got him to do whatever she wanted just then, but he managed to control himself. Barely.
Instead of doing what he wanted most, which was to put all of his weight into fucking her, he withdrew himself from her slowly again. He watched her face as he slid back into her at the same pace.
Lucy hummed in frustration, gripping his ass and pulling him into her. He pulled out again and she tried to pull him back in hard, but he was too strong for her.
She made frustrated noises again. "Baby!" She said in mock anger.