This is my first ever piece of erotic fiction! Any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated, and it may decide whether or not I continue to write. Cheers, and enjoy!
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The tall, lightly tanned girl walked through the door, and took in the circular room with her right eye. Several benches lined the walls, strewn with an assortment of half finished devices, tools, and esoteric looking equipment. Screens glowed pale blue, and LEDs blinked. Beakers, test tubes, and a single large transparent tank bubbled with various colorful liquids, that looked like they might explode at any moment. A mass of mechanical appendages hung high overhead. A few metres in front of her stood a mirror, revealing her exquisite nude form. She flushed and looked down again at the contraption at her feet.
She absent mindedly went to brush her long, chocolate bangs from her face, before being stopped short by the padded cuffs that bound her arms strictly behind her at her wrists and elbows. She tutted in exasperation and blew upwards ineffectually, her bangs settling back into the exact same place over her left eye. She settled for giving the device a skeptical sidelong look.
It was extremely pink. Hot pink. It was all smooth, flowing curves. It was shaped somewhat like a huge bath tub, only with strange sculpted additions. The inner surface seemed to be composed mostly of a sort of squishy foam that she imagined would be quite comfortable. The whole thing was dotted with a neat geometric pattern of tiny holes. In the centre of the side closest to her was a raised, triangular ridge with the base at the near edge of the tub and the tip pointing away from her. The tip seemed to be hiding some complexity in recessed hatches.
The tub's floor sloped upwards, so that the far side was around 40cm higher than the near side. Flanking the triangular ridge were two deep vaguely circular indentations set into the floor, and on the far side, two slightly shallower ones, positioned closer together. The far two seemed to contain similar equipment to the head of the triangle. Ahead of and between the far ones, at the head of the tub, was a much shallower indentation, with more panels hinting at additional hidden devices.
She cocked her head quizzically, then her eyes widened as she realised the sculpted interior was vaguely person shaped! They widened further as she realised the position the occupant would be in: face down, legs straddling the ridge like some kind of horizontal saddle, knees bent and stuffed into the closer indentations, breasts cradled by the far ones. Her breasts and lower regions would be pressed right where all the interesting looking gadgetry was!
Topping it all off was an enormous lid hanging open. As she watched, a tube connecting the giant tank of volatile looking pale pink fluid to the side began to fill the tub. She watched as the breast indents were the first part to be filled.
"I don't know about this, T," She mumbled.
The girl's companion giggled as she stepped in through the doorway behind her, admiring the pert, firm butt in front of her. She was also noticeably lacking in apparel.
"Trust me, Alice," said Tiana, as she began to gather Alice's hair back for her, "you're going to love it."
Alice continued to look skeptical as Tiana efficiently gathered Alice's loose curls into tight pigtails. The pigtails were then wound tightly around two hollow tubes with flared edges, and clipped securely in place.
