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The Tattooed Woman Volume 2 - Chapter 11: Eat her Heart!
Demeritus looked at the corpse sprawled at his feet. He was still panting, his heart still pounding furiously in his chest, and his teeth bared in a savage snarl. Instinctively he wiped at the bloody spatters on his face with the back of his hand before realising that all he was doing was smearing his features with the gore that caked his arms as far up as his shoulders and he shook his head in disgust,
"Ash and scale, all is disaster!"
The messenger had delivered the dispatch mere moments ago, and for a fleeting moment, the Dragon wondered if the herald had suspected the lethal reaction his missive would provoke, for upon reading the words Demeritus had flown into a wild rage, beating the harbinger with iron hard fists and unfettered strength, screaming his fury as he kicked, tore and stamped upon the bloody corpse until all that remained was a smashed and broken ruin, little more than a scarlet stain, unrecognisable as the living thing it had been mere moments before.
Guards and servants alike had fled the tent in panic before his temper and he knew that his wild display would have been recounted to his Master already.
Staggering to a nearby table he fetched up a golden jug of wine and hastily drained the thing, careless of the spillage that stained his robes. Crushing the heavy vessel, he carelessly tossed it aside, before kicking over the table with another snarl. He looked again at the bloody debris smeared and splashed upon the carpet and licked his lips, knowing that it was not anger that had provoked his violent outburst, but fear.
He closed his eyes and drew a breath, and as he slowly released it, he made effort to compose himself,
"I must go to him and offer an account of this. It is beyond concealment, and my tantrum will have already been well-reported. Any attempt at obfuscation will only invoke greater anger and risk dire consequences."
He tore the blood and wine-stained garment he wore from him and hastily donned a clean robe over his twisted form before pausing a moment longer to collect his thought.
Striding from the tent he went to report to his Master.
...
The Ravens Nest seemed oddly empty and still without her.
Maggie sniffed and wiped her eyes as the thought went through her mind. She had paused as she stirred the soup, and would have probably watched it burn had Iris not moved alongside and gently taken the spurtle from her hands, "Here, Maggie, why not have a seat? I'll watch the pot for you."
The big woman made a half-hearted protest, but she was nodding even as she did so, and one of the other serving folk, a little Elfin ragamuffin whose name still confounded her guided her back to a chair by the kitchen table while another pressed a mug of hot spiced spirits into her calloused hands.
Iris stirred the soup silently for a bit. She had been hardened by a life of service to Lords and Masters both kind and cruel, but even so, she couldn't help but wipe away a tear as she listened to the cook weeping behind her.
She sniffed and her voice was hoarse, "They'll get her back Maggie, I know it."
The cook looked up, "But, Iris, there was so much blood, and she's such a wee thing."
"I heard the Captain telling Nyx that she knew Cassie was alive, that she'd learned it from some Dark Elven witch."
"Truly?"
The woman turned, "I wouldn't lie to you Maggie, not about this. That's what I heard her say. And I'll say this Maggie, I've lived around hard and cruel men for most of my life, and that's before I ran off and was taken by the Dark Eldar, and I saw the look in their eyes. I would not want them hunting me. Between her sister and that Dark Elf, I think whoever took her is going to get royally fucked, and not in a good way."
"But, what? I mean, you saw the blood. She'll likely be hurt."
"Mayhap we can hire a healer then. I've got a few silvers saved up. I'll chip that in if it's a matter of coin."
One of the other serving women approached and dropped a heavy gold coin on the table, "Use that."
Maggie stared at the thing, "Where the f..."
The woman had begun to shuffle off but paused. Her head hung down, she didn't turn, and her voice was heavy with sadness, "That tall woman, the one who says she's the sister to her that was taken. She gave it to me after she pulled me from that... place. Said she was sorry she couldna save my own wee sister, but maybe it'll help hers. Not like I've got a use for it, not now..."
The cook surged to her feet and wrapped her arms around the woman, "Aww lass, come here," she pulled the girl close and held her, "You're no alone. You've got us, and I know your sister's spirit will be watching over you from the other side. And if I was her, I'd like as not be smiling to see you alive and safe."
The girl shuddered and Maggie felt her shoulders shaking, "Think you so? Will her shade not be angry that I let her down? That I could not sav..."
"Gods no lass! Bad folk done that to you both, and there was nought you could do to prevent their evil. And I think that while your sister might have gotten some comfort from you being with her at the end, she would like as not be far happier to see that you lived."
"But I miss her so."
Maggie drew a deep breath, "That's always the way of it. Those of us that are left behind have the worst of it I think, with only our memories, and our guilt."
"Guilt?"
"Aye lass, for all the things we think we shouldn't have said and done but did, or all them things we should have, and didn't," she peered into the eyes of the younger woman and smiled, "but t'is a trap is all, brought on by grief and sadness Your sister loved ye, I'm sure of it, and she would know what was in yer heart lass, I'm tellin ye, she would know! And she would be glad to see you thrive, so I'll no have you disappointing her."
She squared her shoulders, and with a sad grin, she used a corner of her apron to wipe the girl's eyes, "So, tell me lass, do you know anything about making soup, or do I have to start teachin ye from scratch?"
...
The lamp and fire in Narissa's room had both been allowed to burn low and the chamber was filled with shadow, and more than a little gloom thought Maggie as she bustled in a while later holding a tray bearing a hefty mug of steaming soup and a chunk of buttered loaf.
"Here ye go lass, a mug of soup to warm yer bones and make you feel better. Nothing like a mug of soup to set things right when you're feeling a bit low, or so my ma used to say anyhow."
The curled lump under the bedcovers barely moved, and the muffled voice held more than just a little misery, "Leave me be..."
"Och, now don't be like that. I made this special for ye, and the girls helped too."
The Dark Elf stirred slightly and sniffed, "I should be up anyway I suppose. I should be tending bar and cleaning up the... blood... and...," she tried to rise and hissed in pain as her muscles protested, "help me up."
Maggie put the tray down and moved to her side, seemingly in obedience to her command, but the Dark Elf frowned when after several moments of the cook's fussing, she somehow found herself back in bed, sitting up with pillows supporting her while the Human fed her spoonfuls of soup. She shook her head in bemusement, it was like a magic trick.
"But...?"
The cook smiled at her as she lifted another spoonful to her lips, "Isn't too hot, is it?"
"I need to get up Maggie."