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The Tattooed Woman Volume 2 - Chapter 4:
The slave-castle of the Dark Elven city of Emain was a fearful place, with high walls, barred doors, whipping posts, chains, and many cells holding those taken in the border reaving into Human lands. The prisoners huddled in those cells were for the most part a fearful and motley collection of scared and terrified peasants and tradesfolk snatched from the fortified villages and towns nearest the border. These included a few angry sellswords who had been taken in battle and swarthy bandits captured in pursuit of their own mischief, but also among them were a few of those most strange and eclectic of all creatures, the so-called 'adventurers'. That rare and peculiar brand of dangerous malcontent who, with a disregard for risk that others often found bordered on the insane, would seek out the most perilous of escapades in pursuit of riches, strange secrets and hidden lore. Capturing such dangerous game came with its own risks, and more than one band of slavers had met with a bloody, violent and often quite spectacular end when making the attempt.
But Dark Elves were both cunning and inventive, and had, over many long years of experience developed the means and wherewithal to deal even with such perilous folk, with enchanted locks and wardings to defy arcane spells and cunning rogues alike, manacles that drained mana and rendered even quite powerful wizards impotent, and worst of all, alert and watchful guardians and overseers, all vigilant to attempts at escape and intolerant of defiance.
Deep within this edifice, Overseer Falsara-Kur sat in her chambers staring at her dinner without any great appetite. She had been testy and waspish all day and had eventually taken herself away from the auction blocks, where a recent batch of workers was being sold, lest her intemperate demeanour spill over, to the cost of some hapless fool who had probably done little to deserve her anger.
She looked to the practice blade lying where she had discarded it and frowned. It was daft for a woman of her age and notorious temperament to be mooning over some silly wee bint of a girl, but she couldn't help but miss the little fool. Falsara chuckled at the memories of repeatedly dumping the daft bugger on her arse while training, but she shook her head in wry amusement as she recalled how the woman just wouldn't stay down, for the stubborn wee bitch simply did not know when to quit! In fact, the only time she got her to halt her trying was when she more or less accidentally-on-purpose knocked the idiot out cold.
Falsara sighed morosely and poured herself another drink. The truth was she was habitually bored these days, probably a sign of the creeping ennui of old age she thought, and trying to teach the annoyingly recalcitrant little tart which end of a sword to hold had been a far better distraction than she had anticipated,
"The little shit was cute too, in the way that puppies, kittens and small children were cute... well, maybe not small children, for the smelly little bastards are usually as annoying as fuck."
A clatter on the door of her chamber drew her from her reverie and she looked up, "Come!"
The door opened a little and one of her senior guards popped his head in and Falsara's eyes narrowed, for the man had a distinctly suspicious grin on his face as he addressed her, "Hey boss, got something here that might cheer you up."
She grinned, "Not more of your wife's pastries, is it? I mean, she's pretty enough, but dear Gods she can't cook for shit, er...no offence."
The man chuckled, "None taken, I didn't marry her for her domestic skills after all," he held both his hands well out in front of his chest as though measuring a pair of rather prodigious breasts, "more for her other... um,
attributes
you might say. But no, it's not that. See what I found."
With that, he nudged the door open with the toe of his boot.
Falsara stared at the Dark Elf standing in the doorway and had to look away for a moment to stifle her grin before she growled at the wench, "So, Muriah, what have you done to annoy your Mistress so much that she sends you back to us then I wonder?"
As she spoke, she peered out the door beyond the woman before turning her eyes to the guard, "Here, where's her escort?"
"Didn't have one boss, she just wandered up to the front gate all on her lonesome."
She looked back at the young Dark Elf with a puzzled expression, "What price this Muriah?"
The Dark Elf grinned and shrugged, "I asked the Captain if she would let me stay here."
"Why the fu... er, what for?"
Muriah scratched the tip of one of her pointed ears, "Ashunara leads her Company to the war in the north in a week or so and she made the offer that instead of awaiting ransom here I could go with them and serve. If I did, she promised to free me without obligation upon our return, assuming we survive. And so, I accepted the offer."
Falsara laughed and shook her head, "So instead of safety and reasonable luxury here you choose to risk your life campaigning in the north? You know, somehow, I am not surprised. But why are you here lass?"
Muriah laughed, "Well, funnily enough, I'd quite like to not die in the first battle for lack of skill, and... well I was hoping to train with you some more in what little time I have. Besides, I don't want to live in the woman's house, it's vexing enough that I'm bound to her like this."
"Is she hard on you?"
Muriah sighed, "No, but that just makes it worse. The woman utterly vexes me, and I don't understand her. When I was given to her as a slave, she terrified me with threats of abuse and humiliation, then when I made a complete fool of myself with my outbursts, she refused to even beat or punish me. She would chain me like a dog outside her tent, and then give me her own fucking blanket for the cold!"
The young woman looked up and Falsara saw the confusion in her eyes, "Then she saved me, and I don't know why. My own kin would not have risked it."
"What happened?"
"We were attacked by... demons, I think, and one came straight for me. I froze in terror, but she came to my defence and pushed me from its path before killing the thing. I tell you I want so badly to hate her, but in truth, she's not entirely unkind to me. There are no insults or mockery, and it makes me feel like a petulant child that I'm so angry with her," she grinned, "which of course just makes me want to hate her all the more. Plus, there's another thing..."
Falsara had waved the guard away with a nod of thanks, "Oh? Do tell," she pointed towards a chair at the table, "sit, have you had supper?"
"No, I've not eaten today."
"Do they starve you or somesuch? A punishment of some kind?"
The younger woman laughed, "Er, no, but me and this Sunkissed lass got into a drinking contest at dinner last night and I got absolutely shitfaced. I had the most awful bloody hangover when I woke up and spent the morning with my head over a bucket. I mean who would have thought a skinny runt like her could drink like a damned fish? But then she's an adventurer and they're all fucking mental anyway."
The overseer shook her head with a wry chuckle, "Well, we've all been there I suppose, but what's this 'other thing' you speak of?"
Muriah blushed, "Well when I was first taken, I challenged the Captain and made a complete tit of myself."
Falsara stared incredulously and then burst out laughing, "You
challenged
Captain Ashunara? To a fight? With
swords