[Authors Note]
Ever get a couple of chapters into a story and realise it's not for you? Then it's back to the toil of raking through the heap, searching for that nugget of gold. In this slot before chapter one begins, I'm going to set expectations and maybe save you some time. Read this and accept mild spoilers, or scroll down to the beginning, as you wish.
This is a relatively mild, low-action journey following our MC as she is introduced to a world she never knew she was born for. There are no cliffhangers or dramatic plot twists. The surprise is that the world the MC is entering is actually as promised. Drastic changes in the MC's self-identity can be jarring to read in chapter three. It mellows in time.
Chapters 1 to 5 represent a single, coherent tale of around 35K words. This part is complete and will be posted sequentially. The following chapters, six onwards, are self-contained adventures in the world I create here. They involve more action and less worldbuilding. More lewdness too. At no point will I leave the reader hanging, waiting days or weeks for another snippet of a story.
UK English is used. Smelled becomes smelt, ass becomes arse, and so on. Oxford commas for the win. Typos found and noted in the comments will be joyously received.
Imperial and metric are mixed to whatever best fits the prose. Measurements are not so important here. It's not a blueprint for a battle cruiser. A couple of centimetres is about an inch. Two metres, or six-foot-six, is a tall person.
It's science fiction with fantasy people reacting in fantasy ways to fantasy scenarios with fantasy feelings. I made it all up for you to enjoy. :-)
This is my complete tag list for chapters 1 to 5, with annotations:
- Theme-level tags
Science-fiction and Fantasy
Parasites. Tentacles. Mind Control. Wet and Messy
Female protagonist: weak to strong
- Major tags
Consent, willing, body modification, transformation, nudity, nude world
Gore (brief and low on details--Ch.2 only)
BDSM (restraint only. No whips, chains, etc.)
Gender bending, M2F. (Not experienced directly by the MC but common in-world.)
Aliens, slime and mud, lesbian, F/F, feminisation, anal play, fisting, breeding (non-human)
- Minor tags (for content warning and for completeness.)
Squick, fetish, non-consent (Ch. 1 only), watersports, scat (non-faecal), F/M, exhibitionism, soulmates, incest (sibling, mother/daughter), dystopian/utopian (as per reader's mental wiring)
-rare, suggested or happening elsewhere
Cyberpunk (not explored but the cities of this world would fit well), Death
Chapter 1
Tilly and Max don't rescue the slaves
Tilly dragged her foot another step, squinting her eyes to see through the cloud of dust she'd just kicked up. She reached out blindly for the jagged rock wall they'd been following, seeking balance; another broken nail her reward. Stamping a sore foot in frustration raised yet more dust. Never had she been more tired and exhausted.
The light was fading, and they needed to push on. They were so close and going back would be impossible in the dark. Her heavy, poorly fitting armour exacerbated the oppressive heat. The ship had them land far from the target, and they'd had to infiltrate on foot. The dry, rocky terrain was maze-like and difficult to navigate, and they kept needing to backtrack and find a new route to discover the slaving facility. Max had only compounded problems by bitching and whining the whole way. She wished she hadn't brought him. At least his hefty cock had relieved her boredom on the weeklong, cramped shuttle trip here.
To compound matters, their drone had died. Probably the dust. She had a little footage saved, even though the live streaming had not been able to connect. Fucking Max. Tilly guessed he'd done something dumb and fucked it up. At least he'd been there to lug the extra gear. Only partially useless deadweight. Promises of a blowjob kept him moving. Not that she'd ever deliver.
A friend of her father's had tipped them off to the existence of this place. They'd bumped into him coming out of class one evening. He looked troubled and nervous and spilt the beans with little prodding. Xactos was a behemoth pharmaceutical and energy conglomerate operating across the galactic spur. Everyone knew the name and used their products. The guy said he'd heard rumours they were using forced human test subjects abducted from megacities to speed development of new drugs. The remote planet, Brinkus 3 Minor, hosted their clandestine operation. Given the size of Xactos, any legal challenge was impossible. Their lawyers were the best money could buy. They paid the wages of law enforcement across a wide swath of federation-controlled space; bringing criminal proceedings was out too.
Tilly and Max had dug into these rumours after getting home that night. It seemed the guy was onto something, even if Max was a little dubious. Fucking coward. She soon brought him in line. Tilly pushed her rebel freedom fighter persona in everyone's face, much to her wealthy family's dismay. Max, the son of her father's business partner, was equally troublesome, though for different reasons. He was lazy and stupid and fucking useless and a bunch of other things Tilly would gladly list.
They were both outcasts, dumped together for much of their upbringing. Tilly tolerated the dimwitted idiot because he'd filled out so nicely. Handsome, muscular, well-endowed, and completely unable to challenge her superior intellect. She knew she was blessed in so many ways, and she enjoyed using her looks and physique to manipulate the simpleton... to manipulate everybody. It was a useful way to keep him on board as a lackey with her various schemes.
It took a few hours of planning; their previous goals of a long pilgrimage to Earth were cancelled. Tilly would do what nobody else would or could. She'd raid the remote facility, rescue the poor slaves, blow the case wide open and receive her long-overdue praise and recognition. Max's father was happy to lend them a new prototype fast vessel for the trip, ostensibly to visit a holiday resort to celebrate finishing school and moving on to a life of leisure. They were both nineteen now and it was high time she left to go live the high life. Guns and armour came with the vessel, which flew itself; no training needed. This was Daddy's line of work after all. Neither Max nor Tilly had managed to pass any exams. It was with some relief that the pair avoided qualifying for going into the family business. They had younger siblings for that shit.
Tilly took a relieved breath of dusty, dry air. The sharp, twisting spires of rock they'd struggled through for many hours gave way to a wide-open area. Blocky buildings and vast, black ecodomes proliferated beyond, sprawling over the horizon. Their first challenge would be the security fence. She smiled to herself as she assessed where to cut their way through. Their fortunes had changed. Right ahead of them, one of the fence panels swung loosely, despite the still air. Security cameras on posts along the fence either hung limply, dead, or pointed another way. This was easy. Obviously, Xactos had become complacent; the rumours were true. Taking a swig of lukewarm water, Tilly cleared her dry throat and explained the plan in simple words to her crappy sidekick, Max.
In the last of the day's light, they rushed forward, wriggling through the hole in the fence and crossing the short distance to an abandoned, windowless outbuilding. On the side was a doorway, and Tilly thanked the stars her luck was holding; it was not just unlocked but sat ajar. Together, they pushed into the darkness beyond, pistols drawn, ready for anything.
"About time!" A male voice echoed through the darkness.
At that, their world was turned upside down. Tilly was blinded by bright lights. Powerful hands grabbed and disarmed her. Max squealed. Not to be outdone, she lashed out, her small fists bouncing off broad armoured chests, her wild kicks caught and subdued with martial precision. It had been a trap. They were completely outclassed. That didn't stop Tilly, who writhed and fought with everything she had.
"Fuck it, guys; she'll hurt herself. Stun her." A commanding female voice boomed through the internal space. Tilly felt cold metal press against her neck. Her world went dark.
***
The first thing Tilly became aware of was her breathing; the air smelt sanitary, like a hospital. Then the cool, padded surface beneath her. Then Max's weak, hiccupping sobs. Finally, opening her eyes revealed a plain, well-lit room. She tried to sit up, her movements sluggish and uncoordinated. Max paused briefly to glare at her accusingly. He might have a point, but fuck him. She'd get them out of this. Then she noticed that Max sat on the floor, legs spread, naked with a white-padded steel collar on his neck. As her senses slowly returned, she realised she was naked and collared too. A rustling sound behind her caught her attention.
Over her shoulder, she saw an armoured guard. The guy finished up something on the tablet computer he held before standing and addressing them.