This is a FICTIONAL tail wherein, a seaborne creature mates with reluctant girls (18+) while their stepfather happily films the event. If that sort of thing isn't your ball gameβahemβthen look away.
Down to brass tacks, I welcome legitimate feedback. As this is my first work of word craft, you dear reader; are my test subject. Please be blatantly honest and thorough if you chose to bestow your wisdom upon me.
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A young family on vacation was paddling their rubber raft through the gentle costal surf. They were admiring the deep green seaside cliffs, when the youngest daughter Suzy spied a small cave in the rocks. Her stepfather Dave saw no danger in taking a closer look so he paddled the small raft into the mouth of the cave.
Inside, the cave was spectacular, the sharp rocks sparkled with the afternoon sun and the shape of the cave mitigated all but the slightest surf; making it appear as though they were floating in midair within a massive emerald geode. It was very apparent that during rough surf the cave would become a meat grinder due to its ultra-sharp rocks but it was a wonder to behold when conditions were fare.
Dave didn't recognize the change in the viscosity of the water because it was slight but to a keen eye; it would have appeared as though the water in the cave had a film over its glass smooth surface. Seeing no danger, Suzy sprang from the boat for a swim and became the first member of the family to notice the film across the top of the water. It felt like she had jumped onto a tarp covering the water. It wrapped her around her tight 18 year old body and threatened to pull her under.
Just as she was beginning to struggle, Dave's strong hand grabbed her shoulder and hoisted her back into the boat in a single fluid motion. Barking at her about the dangers of jagged rocks and fire coral that could be found throughout the area. She blushed and hung her head which prompted Dave to back off. He knew he was the new addition to the family. If he wanted the respect of any of them he would need to earn it. His usual hardline approach to life had to be tempered with tenderness if he hoped to assert his position as head of the house. All the commotion disturbed Suzie's mother Kim who had been snoozing. She briefly adjusted and then slid her head into Dave's lap to continue her nap in the blistering sun.
What Dave did not know was that Susie's reaction was not in response to his lecture. Rather; because of the movement between her legs. The water on her skin flowed like it was alive as it gathered beneath her generous one piece swimsuit and churned against her skin. It could move with ease just like water and she was helpless to stop its progress around her body. In moments her body was completely dry except her crotch and her breasts. A fact that no one but she was aware of.
The intimate touching embarrassed her terribly. She looked around nervously as she said a silent prayer that no one would see and then continued to suffer in silence. The water around her crotch wasted no time. It pushed past her inner lips and flooded her vaginal canal. At first it felt like bath water pushing into her but it quickly hardened and then started to move. She could feel thousands of tiny fingers wriggling inside her pussy.
She kept darting glances back and forth between her family members and back to her swimsuit, which was now churning as though something was trying to get out of it. She tried to close her legs as tight as she could in an effort to hide it from Dave who was sitting directly across from her. To her chagrin, the movement forced everything that wasn't already inside her to squeeze like jelly into her maidenhood.