This is a FICTIONAL tail wherein, a seaborne creature mates with reluctant girls (18+) while their stepfather happily films the event. If that sort of thing isn't your ball gameβahemβthen look away.
Down to brass tacks, I welcome legitimate feedback. As this is my first work of word craft, you dear reader; are my test subject. Please be blatantly honest and thorough if you chose to bestow your wisdom upon me.
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A young family on vacation was paddling their rubber raft through the gentle costal surf. They were admiring the deep green seaside cliffs, when the youngest daughter Suzy spied a small cave in the rocks. Her stepfather Dave saw no danger in taking a closer look so he paddled the small raft into the mouth of the cave.
Inside, the cave was spectacular, the sharp rocks sparkled with the afternoon sun and the shape of the cave mitigated all but the slightest surf; making it appear as though they were floating in midair within a massive emerald geode. It was very apparent that during rough surf the cave would become a meat grinder due to its ultra-sharp rocks but it was a wonder to behold when conditions were fare.
Dave didn't recognize the change in the viscosity of the water because it was slight but to a keen eye; it would have appeared as though the water in the cave had a film over its glass smooth surface. Seeing no danger, Suzy sprang from the boat for a swim and became the first member of the family to notice the film across the top of the water. It felt like she had jumped onto a tarp covering the water. It wrapped her around her tight 18 year old body and threatened to pull her under.
Just as she was beginning to struggle, Dave's strong hand grabbed her shoulder and hoisted her back into the boat in a single fluid motion. Barking at her about the dangers of jagged rocks and fire coral that could be found throughout the area. She blushed and hung her head which prompted Dave to back off. He knew he was the new addition to the family. If he wanted the respect of any of them he would need to earn it. His usual hardline approach to life had to be tempered with tenderness if he hoped to assert his position as head of the house. All the commotion disturbed Suzie's mother Kim who had been snoozing. She briefly adjusted and then slid her head into Dave's lap to continue her nap in the blistering sun.
What Dave did not know was that Susie's reaction was not in response to his lecture. Rather; because of the movement between her legs. The water on her skin flowed like it was alive as it gathered beneath her generous one piece swimsuit and churned against her skin. It could move with ease just like water and she was helpless to stop its progress around her body. In moments her body was completely dry except her crotch and her breasts. A fact that no one but she was aware of.
The intimate touching embarrassed her terribly. She looked around nervously as she said a silent prayer that no one would see and then continued to suffer in silence. The water around her crotch wasted no time. It pushed past her inner lips and flooded her vaginal canal. At first it felt like bath water pushing into her but it quickly hardened and then started to move. She could feel thousands of tiny fingers wriggling inside her pussy.
She kept darting glances back and forth between her family members and back to her swimsuit, which was now churning as though something was trying to get out of it. She tried to close her legs as tight as she could in an effort to hide it from Dave who was sitting directly across from her. To her chagrin, the movement forced everything that wasn't already inside her to squeeze like jelly into her maidenhood.
She gasped as it filled her to the point of bursting. The pressure was unbearable and it forced her to open her legs again. The relief she was hoping for was granted as some of the jelly like substance poured out of her and remained on the outside of her body, giving her some room to breathe but her respite was short lived. As the creature or thing, poured out of her tiny pussy it seemed somehow agitated, almost angry that it had not been allowed to stay.
The elasticity of the girl's body prevented it from pushing back in so it contented itself by attacking the surrounding flesh. It flooded over her clit and began an awful slathering of her sensitive bud along with a simultaneous sucking and rubbing of her clitoral hood and labia minora. No nook or cranny was sacred to its wicked multi-tongued assault as flowed over her tiny ass hole and began to poke into it.
She clenched down, trying to keep it out of her butt, which made her pussy sympathetically squeeze on the fluid already inside it. The increased pressure on the fluid doubled the pleasure she was trying not to feel. All the contact was awakening dormant feelings inside her as her nubile body slowly came to life. She didn't realize she was wiggling and shifting uncomfortable in response but Dave did.
He watched her curiously until his eyes caught movement at her crotch. His mouth went dry when he saw her pussy lips under her suit spreading and moving. The movement was causing her suit to pull to the side and by now it had almost exposed one full side of her pussy. Dave stared unabashed behind his sunglasses. His heart skipped a beat when, in one big surge most of the water that had puddled around little Suzy flowed into her. It looked almost like she had somehow sucked it all into her except, he could tell by her reaction that the opposite was closer to the case. With all that water flowing into her, her pussy stretched wide enough to expose part of it to Dave's lecherous gaze. He was grateful Kim's head was laying on his erection for many reasons. He didn't know what the water thing was but he liked the results.
Young Suzy learned the definition of Pleasurable pain the moment her hymen broke and it felt like a fence post rammed itself into her. She gripped the sides of the boat and threw her head back to hide her expression from her family, spreading her skinny little legs at the same time to make more room for the stretching of her pussy. As she spread her legs her suit slid further over now fully exposing her hairless teen cunt to her stepfather. It was lewdly stretched open and undulating with the ebb and flow of the beast's wave like action.