Author's Note: this story is a sequel to "Maidenstar," set a few years later. It's for all of you who were interested in learning a little more about these characters and their world. One of these days, they'll be in a fantasy series of their own, to go along with my MageLore and ElfLore books. Thank you for the many great comments and feedback on the previous story; I'd appreciate hearing what you think of this one! β S.
"It is, I am told, truly amazing to behold," Rodenveld said as they strode side-by-side down the corridor. His was the accent of his people, rich and rolling and clipped. "But then, as you well know, my brother β¦ she is an amazing woman."
"I do," Karandis said. He reached briefly over his shoulder to touch the amethyst pommel-stone of the truesteel greatsword strapped to his back. "And she is."
He felt perfectly at home for one of the few times in his life as he walked the stone halls of the castle β¦ perfectly at home except for being nearly two full feet taller than his companion and most of the people they passed.
There had been a time in when Karandis had hated and despised all things dwarven. He had fought them during the ill-fated war between the Emerin and Montennor, the magic of the elves and the war machines of the dwarves clashing in terrible carnage and destruction. He had suffered in that war β¦ but had come to realize that the wounds of the body, inflicted by the enemy, paled in comparison to the wounds of the spirit inflicted on him by his own side.
And now, these many years later, here he was. Soul's brother to the thane of Tumblund. A man in the eyes of dwarven law. He was one of them, adopted into the clan Warsmith with every legal claim to kinship and citizenship. He'd earned his way into status in the Explosivists' Guild. He had been guided by the warrior-god Karzok, was bearer of a fated weapon, and deliverer to Rodenveld of the thane's own fated weapon.
For an elf, he made a pretty respectable dwarf, all things considered.
"Of course, there was no shortage of volunteers," Rodenveld went on. "This has become among the guilds one of the highest, and most eagerly sought-after, honor that any smith, armorer or metalworker could hope to win. They say that there is something about her that helps them to be faultless in their work, to finish projects with uncommon swiftness and skill."
Rodenveld, who
was
a dwarf, made an even more respectable one. In his gold circlet and casual around-the-castle breastplate, he was the very ideal image of a thane. Young, strong, powerful, determined. His hair and beard were black as obsidian, his eyes like gasflames behind panes of cobalt blue glass. He moved now with no trace of a limp, of the club foot that had plagued him for most of his life. A miracle, the Tumblunders said. The hand of Karzok.
True. But Karzok's miracle had been in bringing Karandis and Rodenveld to the same place at the same time. To the great cliff known as Karzok's Ladder. The climb. The test of faith and fortitude. The greataxe from the ruins of Stone's Deep, Karandis had carried across half a world to be given into Rodenveld's hands.
Only then had he taken Rodenveld to his other friends. Tavelorn's surgical skills and bone-shaping spells had done the rest, turning a crippled youth into a whole and hearty dwarven man.
"It is what she was meant to do," Karandis said. "Thank you for making it possible."
Rodenveld scoffed and flapped a hand. "Believe me, my brother, it is my pleasure and that of my people. She is a living legend among us. As you are well on the way to being, yourself, I suspect."
"Not quite in the same way," Karandis said. "Even Rae thinks I'm a relentless, ruthless, tyrannical killing machine now."
He did not know why it was that he should have been drawn to this path. From everything he and his friends had learned in their travels, it was apparent that the elves and dwarves followed the same gods, albeit by different names. Saint Rubia and the goddess Shannia were both the patrons of beauty, love and artistry. Saint Tobin and Valannin of law, order and reason.
Yet he, Karandis, served Karzok. Not Kaledhol. It was the dwarven aspect of the Great Protector that called him. He was at home among the dwarves in a way he had never been, and could never be, at home in the Emerin. His uncanny bodily strength and health, hard-won through untold amounts of training and battle, had left him their physical equal as well, able to withstand their medicines, their alcohol, their amusements, even the spices of their food, which were all so potent they risked being fatal to any other elf.
Now, it seemed β¦ though he hardly dared to hope β¦ that he was not so unique, not so unusual, as he had thought. That the one person he most wanted to be able to share this with him, would be. If she would only choose to take the chance β¦
"Dame Fethilde says that Saint Agatta's fire burns in her," Rodenveld said. "My father, Baron Cort, and all the others who escaped from the Mountain Kingdom said the same. They did not know how it could be so, but none of them could deny it."
"Audra says that Livana's light shines in Dame Fethilde." Karandis shrugged, his mouth twisting in a wry grin. "We don't have an explanation for that, either. Livana's the goddess of magic. But Dame Fethilde is not a mage, not in any way we can determine or recognize."
"Unless it is that elven magic and dwarven creativity
are
the same, at their core." Rodenveld shrugged as well. "We need not question it. What matters is that, however it came to be, it is true. The blessings of the gods are to be accepted as thankfully as they are generously granted."
"I know." He touched the sword again, keenly aware and keenly grateful.
His fated weapon β¦ his truest love. He had spent years in an agony of wanting what he thought could never be. And then, surpassing all hope, he had been given what he wished for more than anything else. The sword with the mind and spirit of a woman had become a woman in fact and in flesh. She had been more beautiful than he had dared to dream β¦ more passionate β¦ more giving. She had fulfilled needs he hadn't even known he'd had. With her, he was finally complete.
He would have been content to leave it at that, with Audra able to transform between the one and the other. A weapon in his hands by day, a lover in his arms by night. He would have given up the sword forever if that had been the only way to free her from the enchantment. It would have been enough for him.
Not so for Audra. The sword was her masterpiece. She could not consign it to oblivion, even for the sake of herself. Finally, she had decided that she could no longer live that double life. Part of it was her chagrin at what she called the "imperfect" enchantment, a failing of her skills that she could not tolerate.
And so she had sought to undo what had gone wrong, a century and a half ago in a land few Emerinians had ever seen.
A prisoner of the Mountain King, a slave, she had been forced to craft armor and weapons for his armies. Her final project was to have been Maidenstar, and once that task was done β¦
Karandis' fist curled. His jaw tightened. That Mountain King was dead, generations of his descendants having ruled since. Audra had escaped him before he ever had the chance to carry out his black intentions. It had all been long before Karandis had known her β¦ long before Karandis had even been born.
Which changed nothing. He still wanted to find the man who would have dared even think of doing such a thing to her. Find him, and kill him.
With her masterpiece completed and her future unbearable, Audra had taken what she'd seen as the only way out. She had braced the sword and thrown herself upon it. Yet, instead of dying, she had somehow merged her body with Maidenstar, the two becoming one.
It made him heartsick to envision. He could see her lovely face, resigned, knowing that the first blood her life's work would draw was to be her own. He could see the knowledge of her death shadowing her silver-grey eyes. But she had never faltered.
The wound β¦
When she had resumed her elven form, there had been no trace of it. Not so much as a scar.