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The Commanders Cat Ch 05

The Commanders Cat Ch 05

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I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has left such supportive comments on this story so far! I also want to give a special thank you to my proofreaders for providing feedback and corrections on this and future chapters of Commander's Cat! If you're interested in proofreading this story or anything else I'm working on, please send me a message and I'll start sending you goodies. - β™‘ Ava

FIVE - Luvon

When the sky ripped open and water poured down over Damaqas I knew Fentris and Bahira had been successful. Without it, half of the city or more would have been lost, but the rain slowed the progress of the fires and gave us a chance to get ahead of them. I had so many different things to do and a thousand orders to give, but at the top of my mind were Fentris and Hanna. I waited impatiently to hear the hoofbeats of Fentris' rabid unit, afraid to stray far from the Military Quarter where I was certain they would return. I answered questions and gave orders, and each time I did I turned to look over my shoulder toward the gates.

Where are they?

Finally the sound of hoofbeats so fast they could only be Fentris met my ears. I pushed away some lieutenant who had a knack for asking stupid questions and ran to Fentris. Hanna sat in front of him, slumped over his arm.

Not again,

I thought, and reached to take her from him.

"What happened to her?" I demanded, but I already knew.

I could feel Fentris panicking. "I don't know sir, she just fell asleep like that sir, I swear sir--" I cut him off with a wave of my hand.

"Get Doctor Hashna, you know where he lives, and bring him to my villa," I told him. Luckily my villa had escaped major damage, and other than some potted fig trees that no longer had pots, it was in the condition I'd left it in. I hadn't seen much of it since Hanna had taken over the cartography office. I usually chose to sleep in the tent nearest the office, in part because I worried she might cause trouble in the night, and in part because I worried what the men might try if I were far enough away.

"Someone get me a horse," I bellowed, and one of the Red Caps obediently hopped from his and assisted me in getting on the horse with Hanna. The officers' villas occupied a guarded corner of the Silk Quarter, which was normally just around the corner from the Military Quarter. Tonight the way was littered with burning rubble and we had to take the longer route through the marketplace first and then through the Iron District. It was immediately clear to me the cartographer's office had been the primary focus of the attack. It still stood, but only barely. It was a smoking shell of itself by the time the fire was out, and I had already tried and failed to get inside to see if there was anything worth saving. It was still too hot. It would be morning before I could try again, most likely.

Throughout the ride Hanna spoke, but too softly for me to hear her over the horse, the wailing of the people, and the sounds of buildings caving in. Her cold sweat soaked through any dry spots left on my uniform and I urged the horse on, recklessly perhaps, as it cantered through the narrow streets of the Iron District.

We narrowly avoided a collision with a donkey and its wagon, drawing a distressed bray from the donkey as we flew past. People shouted and soldiers, unaware that it was me on the horse, hollered for me to slow down. I kicked a soldier that held out his hand to grab my reins in an attempt to take control of my horse, and made a mental note to inquire after him tomorrow.

The biggest problem with us, in my opinion, was that we all sort of looked the same. Sure, the Red Caps, Spriggans, Banshees, and Pucks looked different from each other, but in a line of Spriggans you'd likely never be able to tell one from the other. Humans were all different, even children from the same family didn't always look alike. But we were all about the same height, same ashen skin, with the only variation being our facial features and haircuts. At speed my uniform was indecipherable from everyone else's. We were all covered in soot and ash, and I didn't blame any of them for not knowing who I was.

When we made it to the villa I let the horse go. Hopefully it would find someone that would either ride or groom it, and it wandered off to eat from a cart of hay that hadn't yet burned. My villa wasn't as elaborate as some of the others, but it was still a lot more comfortable than the hovel Hanna had called home in the Dyers' District. I carried her to a couch and sank onto the floor next to her, suddenly weary from the long night. I rested my head against her hip and woke with a start when I heard the doctor's voice.

"I have a lot of other patients, too," the doctor admonished me as Fentris pushed him into the room. "There are a lot of people that need medical treatment tonight, you can't just kidnap a doctor!" he shouted at Fentris, who shrugged, unbothered by the doctor's protests.

"Just tell me what to do," I told him, "then Fentris will take you wherever you want to go."

Doctor Hashna sputtered for a moment. "I don't want him to take me anywhere, especially not on horseback, ever again!"

"We will get you a cart, then. Just, help me. Please."

Sighing, Hashna quickly felt Hanna's face and tutted. "I said two weeks, no strenuous activity."

"You did, but someone had other plans." My tone was sarcastic, but he conceded with a nod.

"You're burned," he said suddenly, reaching for my arm and turning it gently in his hand.

"It's not a big deal," I told him, but he shook his head.

"That's the sort that gets infected. Get me some water and rags," he told Fentris, who marched off obediently. I had no idea if Fentris knew where to find water and rags in my house, but he returned as I finally pried my jacket off, hissing as my skin came away with it.

"I told you that's a big deal," the doctor said, then instructed me to lie on another couch and wait my turn.

I heard him crack open a jar and smelled the familiar sharp smell of the blue stuff.

"Eucalyptus and mint," Fentris announced, sniffing the air. "And what's that other smell, hyssop?"

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"Very good," said Doctor Hashna quietly as he spread the strange paste over Hanna's chest again.

"What do you think is wrong with her?" Fentris asked now, concern in his voice. He didn't bother to look away while the doctor worked, but also seemed completely unbothered by Hanna's exposed breasts. I wondered if he would be the friend I needed when things were a little calmer.

"I am not sure, to tell you the truth. I wonder if it has something to do with her being a Changeling." Fentris looked to me in confusion. I shrugged.

"Now, that arm," the doctor said, suddenly turning on me with a scowl. "You better not give me any trouble or I'll tell this wild man to hold you down."

I couldn't imagine what kind of trouble I would give the doctor, but I understood once he began scrubbing at the burns on my arm with a wet rag. In the end, I'm not too proud to admit, Fentris ended up sitting on my chest while I bit into my own hand. Who knew a burn could hurt so much? The doctor put a cooling poultice in the bandage, but the contact of the bandage was excruciating on its own. I'd never been seriously burned before. Stabbed, slashed, shot with arrows, but never burned. I would have rather had the other injuries instead.

"Are you hurt?" the doctor said, finally turning his attention back to Fentris.

Fentris shook his head. Fentris was like a stray dog, I decided. He'd eat anything you put in front of him and walk away unharmed from getting hit by a cart. Eventually someone, probably a woman, would rescue him and then he'd die from eating actual food. I had never seen someone look so uncomfortable in a house, although he did take a little too readily to sitting on my chest. Then he seemed almost gleeful as he lectured me about being nice to the doctor. I imagined the lecture was similar to the one his dad had given him about girls and laughed in between deep breaths and growls while the doctor scrubbed away the debris on my burns.

"You can take me back to the Dyers' District," the doctor told Fentris, "but only if you ride slower this time. And you must allow me to check on that lad that you kicked, Fentris." I laughed out loud, to their puzzlement, but didn't explain. I wondered if Fentris had kicked the same ballsy soldier as I had.

Finally Hanna and I were alone, but it was hardly the romantic evening I had hoped it would be when I finally had permission to either move her to my villa or the cartographer's villa. Old Zeidani's villa was still locked down and my superiors didn't want to move Hanna into it because they still suspected she was helping him. They lacked imagination and had no idea how else an old man engaged in espionage. I always thought he had done it alone, but no one listened to me. If the girl had helped him she would have had more than a couple threadbare tunics and a balding teddy bear in her satchel when I conscripted her.

I needed to rest but I had too many things to do. Many things had changed and word would quickly spread that Hanna was not only fae, but a tempest. A tempest was worth a thousand times more to the military than a cartographer, even a good one. I could only think of one way to protect her, and I didn't know if she would like it. It didn't matter if she did. Even if she accepted it, it would only mean that I would go wherever she went.

I listened to her wheeze as she slept. Did it sound better, or worse? I wasn't sure anymore, and I couldn't stand the idea of another four days of wrestling with her, mashing wet biscuits into her mouth, and watching her waste away. Would she even survive it this time? She looked frail and thinner than I'd ever seen her, even when she lived in the Dyers' District and lived on scraps of goat and rice. How I had wanted to buy her sacks of biscuits, slabs of butter, pots of rich meat, and chocolates back then, if only so she wouldn't starve before I could finally protect her, but how strange it would have seemed to her to receive those gifts from a random soldier. I sat on my couch watching her sleep on hers and wondered about what the doctor had said.

Is this why there are no changelings? Why there hasn't been a tempest in a hundred years or more? Do they always wither and die like this?

I had other things to do. I knew officers were likely waiting outside, having heard that I was at home. I covered her with a woven blanket and extinguished the lanterns, hoping she would become lucid again soon.

As the night wore on I became aware that I barely knew who I was speaking to anymore. The long days of caring for Hanna and the long night of carrying children into the tunnels and buckets of water to burning houses had taken a serious toll on me. At some point I must have said something really strange, and a lieutenant insisted he could take over. I nodded gratefully and went back to my couch, hissing at the pressure on my arm as I tried to get comfortable.

When Hanna finally stirred I was still too exhausted to respond. I didn't realize she was up until I felt her knee sinking into the couch beside me. I felt her other leg swing over me before she laid down, her hair smelling of sea salt and anise hyssop against the charred shirt of my uniform. We smelled like a shipwreck and I hoped it wasn't an omen. I folded my arms around her, ignoring the pain in my burnt arm, and went back to sleep.

Afternoon sunlight beat on my face and I awoke with a start. It was the first truly warm day of spring and the tang of dust met my tongue through the open villa windows despite the torrential rain that had fallen the night before. I could hear horses and men, too many of them. Fuck, I realized, the army was everywhere. But where was Hanna?

I called for her and heard her answer from upstairs. I leapt from the couch, ignoring the complaints of every single joint in my body, and took the stairs two at a time. I found her in the bath, oblivious to everything else including the minor heart attack she'd given me.

"Can I stay here?" she asked. "This bath is really nice, and there's no soldiers or slippery tiles."

I nodded. "This is my house," I told her, not telling her I'd been almost as patient as I could be with her. If she would have been more willing I could have moved her here the day I conscripted her, but when I realized how naive she was it made me feel like a bad man.

I am a bad man,

I thought.

You are not.

We both blushed.

"I didn't mean to ask that, then," she said, but I shook my head.

"I'm sorry Hanna, but I wasn't able to save your office. You don't have anywhere to go, and anywhere the military will offer you won't be safe." She stared at me, not comprehending any of the realities of her situation.

I knelt by the bath and whispered now, aware of the open windows and the many sets of trained ears below.

"You did something really amazing last night, and the military will try to say they own you. Technically, they do. But there is one way to circumvent military rules." I paused, hoping she would get it on her own. She didn't.

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I sighed.

"Stay here," I whispered, and ran as quietly as I could through the villa to my desk. When I returned she watched wide-eyed as I scrubbed the soot from my chest and approached the bath. I could hear her thoughts racing as I handed her the quill.

"After it's done, I won't make you do anything you don't want to do," I promised her, "but I will make you do this if you refuse. It is the only way I can promise you they won't separate us."

I closed my hand around hers and guided her, writing her name on my chest in my language.

So much for being wanted,

I thought. Of all the different ways I had imagined this moment, it had never been like this. Pain and disappointment twisted my heart. There would be no opportunity to win her over, no celebration, no ceremony. When I released her hand she dropped the quill into the bath and lunged forward, slapping her hand over the writing and kissing me. I had never been branded before, and her cold tempest magick soothed my burned arm and sooty lungs as it pierced my skin. Startled, I slipped backward on the wet floor and fell, moving to right myself, but she was out of the bath in the next instant. She straddled me and pushed me to the floor, her strangely cold hand finding the half-finished brand. The scents of sea salt and ozone intoxicated me just like the night I had branded her, and I dumbly realized she was kissing me again.

My head swam and I wondered if this is what I had done to her. Or maybe this was what it was like to be branded by a more powerful fae. Up was down, down was up. I was lost on a tide of scents and feelings of love, lust, frustration, and disappointment. Everything I had heard about being branded never prepared me for this as memories of all the days I had spent with her so far, the days she was sick, the bathhouse, the quiet days in the office, the horrible night in the alley, watching her be carried away by Fentris, flooded my brain. When she broke the kiss I gasped for air like a drowning man, one thought floating to the top of my ocean-tossed mind.

"I should brand you somewhere else," I gasped, "we will have to prove we did this, and I branded you inappropriately--"

She kissed me again and sucked away my breath. Would it be like this all the time? I didn't know if I would like that or not.

"Let them look at me," she whispered, and I realized she was tugging at the buttons of my breaches.

"Hanna, stop," I whispered urgently, but she was feral now, her eyes glowing more intensely than I'd ever seen before.

"Aren't we supposed to do this?" she asked. I knew she was right. Our marriage wouldn't be considered binding in fae law if we hadn't consummated it, but I didn't want her to agree to it because she felt she had to. I also worried that I had no idea what I was doing with her and didn't want her to know. I was also acutely aware of Lieutenant Reystra's approaching footsteps and the accumulated soldiers outside of the villa.

"Not now," I hissed, grabbing one of her wrists and squeezing. For some reason that always got her attention when nothing else worked. She whined and I kissed her roughly, teasing the fingers of my other hand down her slit. "Later, if you behave," I whispered, then kissed her again. By the time Reystra was at the bathroom door she was back in the bath, obediently washing herself and pouting at me. I cracked the door and asked him what he wanted.

I could tell from his face that he knew Hanna was in the bath. He grinned lecherously and waggled his eyebrows at me. "If this isn't important, Reystra, I have quite a lot of other things to see to." His eyes briefly dropped to my bare chest. I knew he could see the fresh, still-glowing faebrand through the gap and I wondered how long before the whole of the military knew I was a claimed man.

"General Krana wants to speak to you. You know the place and why."

"Right, well," I said, searching for excuses not to go. "I need to see to it that my wife is situated, and get myself cleaned up as well. After that I will visit the general."

Reystra's grin widened. "See to it that she's situated, but don't get so rough you drown her this time," he teased.

My temper was already hot from having to refuse Hanna and being interrupted in my private bath, and I hated the sight of Reystra's annoying face on the best of days. Despite my best efforts to control myself my hand shot through the narrow opening and gripped his neck.

"If it were my intent to fuck a woman to death I wouldn't start with her. I'd start with your mother, and she'd be dead, not alive and well in my bath. Get these ridiculous ideas out of your head and disappear, now."

It was a terrible thing to say to my cousin, but even now, I still sometimes savor the look on his face.

By nightfall I was in trouble.

"I have no reason to believe she is working with the Seelie, since the cartographer's office was clearly the primary focus of the attack. What reason would they have to kill their informant?" I knew I wouldn't be able to get away with it, but I had hoped maybe I could get away with it for a whole day, at least. Word about our impromptu marriage spread quickly, since lieutenants gossip more than housewives, and I'd barely had time to bathe and put on a fresh uniform before I had to explain my actions.

"I don't know how we can trust your judgement," General Krana was snarling at me now, giving the counselor an opportunity to drink water and rest his voice for his next onslaught. "You've clearly been planning this since we told you to put eyes on her. What a coincidence you never caught her breaking the law in all that time, but then again it wouldn't look good for a Commander's wife to be a criminal, would it?"

I bit my tongue.

"No wonder he wouldn't let anyone else surveil her," Counselor Travaran sneered, "we're supposed to believe he was the only man for the job, but he was really just protecting her from the law."

"I never saw her break any laws," I lied, remembering all the times she obscured her pins with the strap of her bag or the tail of a scarf, or that half of her commute could be considered trespassing. "I swear."

Counselor Travaran laughed lightly and rolled his eyes, but Krana had bigger fish to fry. "We should move her to the frontlines. There's no good in having a tempest inside the city, and the war would be over a lot sooner--"

"She's not ready for that," I interrupted, "she only just found out she's fae yesterday. You can't seriously expect--"

"I can seriously expect whatever I want!" the General bellowed, standing so abruptly his chair fell over. "And you will do what I tell you to do!"

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