AUTHOR'S NOTES:
This story is erotic fantasy, set in a world of magic.
This tale may be the beginning of a sporadic look into Devan and Danica's history, or it may be a one shot story born of pure inspiration at work today. This tale takes place *many* years before my core Danica story here on Lit, when Danica was still a teenager and her sister Devan had just reached her majority. This story centers on Devan, who makes only rare appearances for quite some time in the core tale, most of which are just references. This tale is a turning point in her life, and thus in Danica's as well.
I'm trying to utilize the feedback I've received on Lit to improve my writing, and hope to continue to do so. Please do comment, either in public or private. I would prefer public, but that's just me hoping to give my stories another opportunity to be noticed in the feedback portal. Anyone who leaves a means for me to contact them, either by being logged in when commenting or giving an e-mail addy with feedback, will get a reply.
Constructive criticism is also most welcome, feel free to point out anything that detracted from the story in your eyes.
I hope you enjoy this foray into the past of the sisters Ardane.
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Two figures stood in the shadows of a small, dimly lit structure. Their faint silhouettes and their voices betrayed them as male, but an observer would have been able to determine little else, were one present.
"Exactly as always, no changes at the last minute, agreed?"
"Of course, I just thought I'd add a little variety to my life with the changes last time. I had no idea you would have such a fit over it."
"Two days each, no more."
"Yes, yes, two days, you may as well give me the coin now, because it is as good as done."
"Nothing until you succeed."
A note of nobility, with a great deal of sarcasm attached, crept into the man's voice as he spoke, "You wound me with your disbelief."
"Whatever."
"Two days is an eternity, I'll hit my first mark before the night is over, a few hours at most."
"Not if you stand here bragging all night."
A quiet chuckle was the only response to that.
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"Stop hogging the mirror Devan, I can't see what I'm doing!"
"I'm almost done Danica, don't push, I'm in a hurry."
As usual, the auburn-haired younger sister deferred to her flame-topped older sibling. Danica moved back a bit, pulling a brush through her hair and waiting until she could see in the mirror again to work on arranging it.
Devan plucked a final errant hair from her eyebrow, twitching both and smiling into the mirror when she liked what she saw, "Okay Danica, I'm done."
Devan stepped away from the mirror and winked at her sister in it before going to her clothes chest to decide what she was going to wear tonight.
A smile came unbidden to Devan's face as her younger sister scowled and pressed at her breasts. Danica's boobs had started to come in three years ago, and at sixteen, they showed no sign of stopping yet. Danica was at least twice as big up top as she was, and had some difficulty coping with her new attributes.
She knew her little sister would learn to deal with them eventually, but it was amusing to see her fiddling with them and trying to keep them out of her way. Devan thought it was a good thing they had grown into very different figures as they aged, because as kids they had looked too much like twins for Devan's tastes. She knew Danica would eventually come to appreciate the attention those big boobs would garner from boys.
Devan pulled a white cotton top with a button neckline out of her clothes chest, smiling a little wantonly as she looked at it. The material bordered on scandalously transparent. When she wore it, the dark circles of her areoles were plainly visible from close distances. Her small blister-like nipples also pressed against it because it could barely contain her firm, rounded breasts.
Pulling on the top, Devan rubbed her nipples slightly to stimulate them, generating exactly the effect she wanted. Over this went a more modest blouse, something to keep her mother from having heart failure upon seeing her off. It would quickly be lost as Devan went on the prowl for her prey this evening. Devan also pulled on two skirts. The outer skirt had the same purpose as her second top, protection from her mother's wrath. The one she would actually be wearing was short enough that an errant breeze, or just the right amount of bending, would reveal her thin cotton panties to whomever she chose to show them.
Devan was on the prowl tonight, having just finished a difficult week of study in magic school. There was little more her master could teach her after her success this week. Soon she would have to seek another teacher or her fortune, and she wasn't sure which she wanted to do yet.
One thing she was sure about was exactly who she was trying to lure tonight. She and the young man had both told each other they would be at the square tonight, neither quite ready to ask the other to step out. It was a date though, despite the lack of formality.
Serhan was handsome and witty, his family was wealthy, and there was an interesting bulge in the front of anything he wore. Devan had only been with a couple of men, but those two had shown her the difference between what a big dick inside her and a smaller one was.
Bigger was certainly better.
It had also shown her that once a man had the prize, he often lost interest. Devan was determined to keep the prize in his vision, but just out of reach for a while. It wasn't going to be easy, because even as she thought about it, Devan was ready to unwrap that gift right now.