Taken by the Sea Serpent
was one of the trio of stories that were published when I joined Literotica as an author, just over ten years ago now. A few months afterwards, I wrote a short continuation but never got around to changing the story on Literotica. Rather than edit the original, here's the continuation by itself.
The young ones higher up in the valley were the first to go. One day they were bright flowers, their juices the sweetest and most refreshing, their tentacles the most slender and playful, so that she loved to visit them in the afternoon, the next day they had closed up in tough shells, like giant clams. Their closure puzzled and saddened her.
A few days later, the plants on the main floor of the basin had begun to close too, so that she had to swim further and further between meals. Her 'child' followed her everywhere, sometimes wrapping around her as if for comfort and warmth, sometimes feeding from her, its tentacles sucking at her nipples and slipping into her ass to tickle deep inside her. She enjoyed its attentions. It was part friend, part child, part lover. And it certainly seemed to enjoy making her come while its teasing, torturing tentacles sucked her sensitive outsides and nutritious insides.
But it was getting bigger every day, and she was thinning out, becoming lean and muscular. She had seen it feeding directly from the plants, which made them curl up as if sulking. Her own relationship with the plants was one of mutual pleasure. They seemed to love penetrating her as much as she had grown to love their fierce penetration. And now they were all closing up. Perhaps part of their annual cycle, a winter death and rebirth.
Soon she was forced to return to the cold, deep heart of the valley where the old flowers lived. She felt a deep attraction to them. The desire to return to them was like a constant in her life, tugging at her heart strings, but she had resisted until now.
Her one previous visit had been astonishing for both the pain and pleasure of their powerful, thick, thrusting tentacles, feeding her, fucking her, filling her flesh with their fluids before making her the receptacle of their egg, and the mother of their child. She longed to go through all that again, but the reality of it terrified her.
But there was no choice. She had to brave them, or die of hunger in the valley above. She offered a prayer to the gods and swam down.
One thing she had learned during the wonderful summer was that the plants could be approached safely from the side. It was even possible to touch the delicate tendrils of the main body and disturb the little fish that swam there, without triggering a reaction from the great tentacles that thrust out from the body like slender trees.
She tried that now, hugging the floor of the valley as she descended. She passed close to the one that had snared her before -- she recognised its scent, familiar and enticing, but another scent attracted her, a darker, richer tone, unlike anything she had yet sensed, and she followed this down. She kept her distance from the plants. They were larger and felt older, the deeper she went.