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Personal Information Pt 03

Personal Information Pt 03

by danni_iridescent
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CW; transformation; mind alteration; body modification; pheromones

9

Kaz's requests were simple enough - smarter, clear skin and sensitivity.

But she'd also said I could make changes I thought she might like, and to be honest I wasn't sure where to start with that. Or, I

hadn't

been sure, to begin with. However, diving into all of this stuff, deeper in that the simple 'preset' that had been used on me,

Lover

. Now, hovering around a 3D rendering of Kaz on the screen, there were all of these attribute trees and behaviour trees that I could go into, with different ways of shifting how they manifested. It seemed like the attributes all reacted to whatever they were referring to, so something like

mental processing

was a sliding scale, which I had brought up to 150%. However, I discovered that I could drill into that, and opened up a tree that sat behind it,

all

of which I had pulled up to 150% - things like

recollection

,

language comprehension

,

pattern recognition

to name a few.

I figured that she would appreciate the mental boost, and decided to start looking into what

else

there was for me to help her with her requests.

Which is where I had begun to discover the possibilities of this system.

Kaz asked for clear skin so I went into the very broad

Skin

section, which was a bubble next to her abdomen. Unlike

Mental Processing

, this didn't have a slider at the top level, which made sense, but when I opened it up I saw that there were plenty of subsections that showed areas that, if this wasn't Kaz and was instead some fictional Sim-like character creation screen in a video game, I might have been tempted to play with. The first one that caught my eye was

Melanin Level

- which also had its own drop-down subsection. That broke down into

Heritage Influence on Endoform

,

Hue

, things like that. I quickly closed it, seeing as it wasn't something I wanted to get into, but it was interesting to see just how detailed and specific Ardy had gotten with his work.

Back in the

Skin

section, I found what I was looking for. There were some subsections such as

Acne Likelihood

,

Birthmarks

,

Whiteheads

,

Blackheads

,

Skin Tags

. I opened

Birthmarks

, and found that instead of the sliding scale that was in

Mental Processing

, this instead zoomed in on the 3D model of Kaz, naked on screen, and changed her from a sort of translucent blue version of herself into a photo-realistic rendering; at the side was a 'painting' section, similar to what I might see on like photoshop or something, and I realised that it was so I could

paint

birthmarks onto her.

'Goddamn,' I muttered to myself as I sat back in the chair, running a hand through my hair. 'This is...

insane

.'

I couldn't believe that Kaz had done this to herself willingly. Sure, she'd hit me with a preset, but it was an accident, and wasn't really her choice - though, from all of the orgasms we'd shared this weekend, I was hesitant to say she hadn't enjoyed herself since. It was still an

incredible

show of trust, though.

I noticed, right at the top left of the screen, there was a 'Revert' button. I hovered over it, and a small text box appeared.

Return the subject to information collected at-scan.

It was reassuring that, if I thought I'd gone too far, or if I changed my mind, I could just switch her back. There was also an 'Undo' button, so I could just go back one change. All in all, it was a pretty well put-together user interface, and I found myself appreciating the fact that Ardy had done all of this down here, away from prying eyes and based off of technology he and Hallie had put together

decades

ago.

However, I had a job to do, and I wanted to get to it.

I spent some time getting Kaz's skin clear and blemish-free, while also taking note of other areas and attributes I could change.

For starters, her breasts. Because of course they caught my attention. They were, for the record,

amazing

breasts, but Kaz had off-handedly mentioned the fact that she felt they were a little on the smaller side. I wasn't going to make her jump up a few cup sizes or anything, but instead I just spent some time making them a little... fuller. A

small

amount larger, with a perkiness she already had - but I made the perkiness

permanent

. I knew it was a thing with women as they aged that breasts could sag, or lose some of that youthful exuberance - call it porn-brain if you want - so I just... removed the problem.

Looking at the 3D model, they barely looked any different, she was still

Kaz

, but she was Kaz who didn't need to wear a bra anymore, and who I hoped would appreciate the slight enhancement I'd given her.

While I was there, I also noted Kaz' other request - to be made more 'sensitive'. So, I made her nipples more receptive to sexual stimuli, which was an actual sliding scale that seemed to be

everywhere

.

Ardy, you hory bastard, you

.

I laughed to myself, and dragged her sensitivity of her breasts up in general, not by a huge amount but enough to be noticeable.

After that, I was off to the races. I started with her thighs and stomach, making them more sensitive to touch and to sexual stimuli, turning some of her erogenous zone - which I'd had the weekend to learn - up a few notches. Her neck, her lips, her sternum, her coccyx, her buttcheeks (which I turned up in enjoying spanking as sexual stimuli, to0), even her scalp as I knew she loved it when I gave her scritches and head-massages. All of it I figured would be something of a gift, turning-up her sensitivity so that the thighs she enjoyed, she would enjoy them even

more

.

Eventually, however, I found the inevitable end-zone of this sensitivity-tangent.

I clicked on the area that read

Sex Organs

. I broke down into different options, fanning out like an anatomy textbook -

vulva, vagina, labia majora, clitoris, cervix, uterus

. The 3D model zoomed in, and I could see

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all

of her. She was open to me in a way that was impossible in reality, and I was able to see parts of her no one should see. I could see the lining of her sex, the same ripples and bumps I'd felt each time we fucked; I could see the folds of her sex I'd spent hours licking and kissing and worshipping; I could see her sweet clit, her pubic hair,

all

of her.

I selected her clit, and went to

Sensitivity

, making it more sensitive to sexual stimuli, and dragged it from 100% to 125% - not wanting to

completely

rewrite her. Then, remembering her note, pulled it up to 150%.

Then, I did the same to her internal nerves, pulling up their sensitivity, followed by the same to her labia minora and majora - basically just making all of her sex organs

far

more sensitive than they had been. I even took a moment to do her anus as well - which felt like it might be a

bit

presumptuous, seeing as we hadn't done anything anal, but I figured that there was no harm in doing a

little

enhancement there. I brought it up by only a few percent of

sensitivity to sexual stimuli

, and decided to leave it there.

Once I'd done that, and had officially completed her requests (plus her breast enhancement), I had a bit of an exploration for other things I thought she would appreciate. There were sections that weren't attached to a specific body part, and one of them caught my eye -

Pheromones

. I realised that this must have been what had changed in me, when I'd gotten the

Lover

preset, and for a moment I wondered what would happen if I did something similar to Kaz.

I had a look inside, and there were a bunch of ones that were at very low levels, but none of them seemed to give off signals I thought would be good to change - in particular, the '

Sexual attractiveness to

' slider. Even I knew that changing that on a young woman could be... problematic. Even dangerous for Kaz.

Instead, I scrolled, and spotted one that said '

Willingness to submit to

'.

And, I decided to pull it up - just from 0.3% to 5%. I figured it was enough of a bump that it would be fun for Kaz to get her way, without it becoming full-on mind control. I hoped, though, that this would mean if she was ever in a shitty position, her saying 'No' would have a bit more punch to it - which was a terrible thought anyway, but it seemed like a good pay-off for her trusting me to do this to her.

I spent some time after that doing some

small

touches, such as ensuring her butt would

stay

that plump and perky, like her breasts, regardless of her age, and I even moved a slider so that her metabolism would work quicker, and she would be able to burn off calories faster than most.

As I was finishing up, however, I realised that there really wasn't much I would change about her. She'd brought up the skin thing, but I hadn't noticed at all. The changes to her chest and butt were more an act of

reservation

than improvement, and her metabolism was just a gift given to her that I wish I had for myself. The brains and sensitivity wouldn't have crossed my mind if she hadn't asked for them - she was plenty smart and

plenty

sensitive.

But who was I to deny a woman her wishes?

I hovered the mouse over the 'Complete' button, and turned to look at the strange flickering mass of data that was in the room where Kaz had once been, and wondered if it looked any different.

I wondered if

she

would be any different.

I reviewed my choices, the alterations I'd made to Kaz, and wondered if this was something I shouldn't do. She had

asked

for stuff, obviously, and explicitly tested me to make some judgement calls, but still... what had happened to me had been an accident, and had been so recent that, aside from

completely

turning my sex life upside down and making me irresistible to my dream girl, we didn't really know

how

it was going to affect my life. What if it had negative health impacts, or something? Should I let Kaz go through with it without knowing?

Or, was it my right to stop her? She'd come down here and done this to herself on purpose, with all of the information that I had about this person-editor. She'd acted of her own avail, and wanted to get something out of it. We knew this was single-use - what if I cancelled it now, and because she'd gone into the system, it was single-use and wouldn't let it happen again, despite no changes being made? What if there were negative health impacts, and she got

those

as well? What if we were past the point of being able to stop the negative?

In which case, the only sensible thing to do was to make sure that she got to experience the positives.

A brainwave hit me, and I made one final alteration before going back to the main page. I sucked in a breath, and clicked 'Complete'.

10

'H-holy shit,' Kaz said as the constant humming sound of static cut out suddenly.

I spun away from the screen, and stared at Kaz in front of me. She looked... normal.

Like herself.

She looked at me, and then down at herself. Her hands went to her tits, and I saw a reaction flicker across her face. Then she felt her face, her thick, red hair, looking down at herself. She was still dressed for work, like it was any other day.

'Kaz?' I asked. 'How do you feel?'

She looked at me again, and I saw the grin appear on her face. 'You did it, didn't you.'

I gave a tentative nod, and she raced towards me, grabbing me and kissing me with a passion that made me melt a little into her.

'

Mmmmm

,' she hummed against my lips. She pulled back a little. 'Did you make that feel better?'

I smiled, our foreheads together. 'I may have given your lips a little more...

sensitivity

. Amongst some other places.'

She kissed me again and a shiver went through her. 'I'm really happy I called in sick,' she smiled. 'I

need

you to show me some of these... changes.'

'Alright.'

'

Now

.' Her hands slid to my head as she kissed me again, intensely. My hand slid under her shirt, stroking her stomach and side, and I heard her whimper. 'Is that you, or just because I am

really

fucking turned on?'

I shrugged. 'Who knows.'

'Oh - you're not gonna tell me? Not gonna tell me how much you've shaped me into your perfect girl?'

'You were already perfect,' I smiled, sliding my hand into her trousers, under her underwear, gripping her pert,

perfect

arse. 'I just made you able to feel it a little more intensely.'

'Fuck,' she whimpered. 'Take me - here.'

I looked at her, and a moment of hesitation passed before we started kissing again with a renewed intensity, stripping each other and ourselves as we went.

I pulled her shirt off, kissing her neck and throat - which made her gasp in surprise. 'Oh, that's

nice

. I love it - whatever you've done to me, I

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fucking

love it.'

'Just you wait,' I told her, spinning her round so she was facing the workbench and pushing her over. She bent at the waist as I crouched behind her, pulling down her very smart trousers to reveal her all-too-sexy underwear underneath. She moaned as I pulled the trousers down, and Kaz stepped out of them as I kissed my way up her leg, licking her thigh and then her buttocks before kissing her perfect rump.

'Holy shit,' she moaned, gripping the workbench in a white-knuckle grip. 'You're gonna make me cum from

just

that...

fuck

, you really did change me, didn't you?'

I pulled my lips off her buttcheek and saw how

wet

she was, her juices already soaking her lovely panties. 'Are you okay with it?'

'I love it,' she panted. 'I love knowing that I'm yours - that being near you makes me wet, and that when you had all this power over me, all you did was make me able to feel pleasure stronger...

fuck

, I love it, Will. Kiss me more, taste me - I need it!'

'Spread your cheeks,' I told her, and I watched as Kaz, bent over the worktop, reached back and pulled apart her pert buttcheeks, inviting me in. 'Good girl,' I said, which pulled a whimper from Kaz before I kissed my way into her depths. The moment my lips made contact with her wetness, she moaned into bench.

'

Fuck,

that is intense...'

'I barely touched you,' I said, grinning.

'I genuinely can't think straight,' she moaned. 'I need to cum, baby - I need you to let me cum like this. Just... get me there?'

I could feel my urge to obey her, to shut up and do as she said. It was... interesting. But it wasn't like I was going to argue anyway.

So, I leaned in, opened my mouth, and licked her.

From swollen clit to twitching puckered arsehole.

'

FFUUUUUCK!

' Kaz screamed, her hands letting go of herself so she could grab the bench with one hand, the other grabbing the back of my head as I ate her from behind, quickly following up my lick with another, and another, worshipping her sweet holes in indulgent, lavish loves. Her orgasm left her shuddering and swearing, but she didn't let me go - she held me there until my tongue was aching and I was struggling to breathe. Once she was tired enough to relent, I pulled back, gasping, face sodden and staring at her slick holes, twitching and clenching as she whimpered.

'So... the sensitivity thing worked, then?' I asked.

'

Uuuuurghhhhh...

' Kaz moaned, knees buckling under her as she clung to the worktop. I kissed her coccyx, and she whimpered. I kissed my way up her back, listening to the noises she made until I was at the base of her neck. 'That...' she said eventually, getting her voice back. 'That was

so good

...'

Kaz turned to look at me over her shoulder as I kissed her neck, my hands sliding up and down her back and hips. She mewled and wriggled under me, pressing her backside into my hardness and groaning.

'Well, I think you're done - no more for you today,' I smiled, kissing her neck.

'

Ahh

- don't you dare, Will-

unhh

...' I felt her hand reach around, and she opened herself to me again as she ground her hips into me, that perfect butt pressing into my pelvis as she lay under me. 'I need you -

now

.'

I shifted my hips and let my length press into her, and Kaz's hand reached round to my head, pulling me into a kiss. She moaned into that, too, as I sawed my length against her

really

wet sex. Hips moved against hips, rocking and bucking, until eventually I angled myself in just the right way; Kaz's sex was wet enough,

ready

enough, that the moment my head found the divet of her hole, it took only small twitches from both of us for me to slide inside.

In one motion, I pushed my entire cock into her, bottoming out inside her perfect body, as Kaz arrived at orgasm at the same time.

'

Just from that

,' she panted

.

'

Fuck, you've ruined me

...'

I wrapped one arm around her chest, threading my wrist between her perfect tits as she pulled up, and gripping her throat lightly in one hand. With the other, I held her hip as I began to draw back, before pushing back into her.

'

Fuck

, Kaz,' I moaned. 'You're so wet-'

'Fuck me,' she panted. 'I... I can feel how smart you made me, and yet I still can't

think

, Will - I need you, I need to cum again and again, please? Please fuck me? Please baby will you-?!'

I shut her up by spanking that perfect arse of hers, before locking in behind her and holding her in place as I began to thrust. Fucking her from behind was a dream come true - I'd fantasized about that apple-butt of hers for

so

long, and even though we'd had sex through the entire weekend, I knew that it was never going to stop being perfect.

Especially so now.

Each impact filled the workshop with a wet slap as my body hit hers, followed by a moan or a wail or a swear from Kaz's lips, and a grunt form mine.

Spl-spl-spl-spl-spl-

Together we got faster, more desperate, more animalistic. I felt her cum on me more than once, her body clenching around mine as her voice went tight and high, and her legs shook under me. I didn't stop, didn't

pause

for a second, pounding into her over and over and

over

. Together we grunted and clawed at each other, moaning each other's names as our bodies, hot and sweaty, found the edge of climax again and again. For her, it was easy to fall into orgasm at my hand - hell, it was hard for her not to. For me, I was a little more hesitant to crash over the edge, but after some time it was impossible to deny.

'Kaz, I'm close,' I panted into her ear.

'

In me

,' she moaned.

Fucking fill me, Will

-'

'Fuck, gonna cum-'

'

Fill me up - fuck, I'm close too - breed me, Will - fucking bREED ME!

'

She screamed those two words as we both crashed over the edge; I hammered myself into her, deep inside her poor, pummelled sex, and held her chest and throat and hips as I came. It flowed from me, thick and hot and heavy, filling her hungry insides as Kaz came on me, body shuddering, hands gripping my arm as her eyes rolled back, mouth open.

We stayed there for a while, my cock refusing to go soft as I stayed there, impaling her channel as she dripped with my cum. We panted in place, bodies throbbing and slick with sweat.

'W... what time is it?' she asked, her voice a little scratchy.

I looked at the screen, which was back to its typical blank desktop visage. 'Just past eleven.'

'

Fuck

,' she said.

'What?'

'You definitely made me smarter - my brain just did a whole thing, working out how long that had taken, and then working out how many more times we could do that in a day.'

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