Where is the line between fantasy and reality?
Thanks to my editor kenjisato. Also, to LanguageTool. Combined, they put me right. Any problems left all belong to me.
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Note: Films don't normally shoot in chronological order. However, the shooting order makes for a poor story, so I took the liberty of having this film shoot chronologically. I also tried to show the film action separate from the rest, using "Cut!" and "Action!" Hopefully, it won't break the immersion too much.
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My agent set up a meeting with Jack Coulson, the producer of the latest Mortal Kombat flick. Jack said, "With the success of other series doing R-Rated films for some of their characters, I want to go for that market with this flick. This lets us show a lot more skin, and you are well known for that. We can also go further with the action and show more gore."
"While I am all for adding sex, I would be careful when adding blood and gore. Too much, and you break the implied contract with the audience, especially if the good guys are the ones responsible. Having gore for a final blow, can be excused, as that is a core part of the series legacy."
"Quite right. Bad guys, however, don't play nice, so they may do a bit more. I already have a team on determining what level of gore will make the most profit. I already know there is never too much sex, so there will be as much sex as the story will support. You will also get to show more skin, and have several wardrobe malfunctions. You also get to have sex with several others, male and female."
"Sounds fun. Will Pulse and Blight be in this?"
"Yes, and by the same actresses." He saw me frown. "Is there a problem with that?"
"Maybe. Jewel just got married, and is now pregnant. That could complicate shooting schedules, with her being either very pregnant or needing a lot of time with her baby close by."
"I did not know that. I'll look into that." He wrote something on his phone, or maybe texted someone. "Assuming we work that out, do you see any other potential problems?"
"Nothing that can't happen to any project."
"Good. Then, I'd like you to go through the draft script. I want you to critique it, and also make suggestions. You are an expert at sexy warriors, and have enough experience to know what works."
"I'd be happy to do that."
"I'll send the script to your agent, then."
Later that night, I read the script to get a sense of the story. I had a hard time going to sleep as I was thinking about the latest prosthetics I planned to use for the extra arms. The new control system would blow everyone away. In the morning, I would go over it again, making comments, corrections, and suggestions. Eventually, I fell asleep.
I was so excited that I skipped my dawn swim, and dived instead into the script. My first pass was to critique the script and make comments about everything I thought was wrong for the character or the plot, or that would make filming difficult. My next pass was to make suggestions that would tighten the story or make it more intense. The third pass was to make suggestions to add sex and violence that fit the story. I may have gone a tad overboard on the sex side, but I figured no one would mind that.
Filipe saw to it that I had breakfast, and he made sure Cindy and Tammy would feed me later. I ate when I smelled food next to me, but I barely registered it, I was so focused on the story. When I finished, I sat back and stretched... for a second. I realized I needed the bathroom immediately, and I teleported rather than walk just to save a few seconds. I took care of business then showered before going back to my desk. Just in case, I went over all my comments to ensure they made sense.
I fired off an email off to the producer with all my comments. Then I looked about to see what was going on. That's when I found I had gone through the whole day, and it was dark out. I checked the time and saw that it was near the time we would head to bed. So I went downstairs, and joined Filipe on the couch and put my arm around him.
"So, you came up for air."
"Yeah. I got real focused, and I think I got a lot done with that script."
"What script?"
"A new Mortal Kombat script. I am the lead, and it will be R-Rated, and the producer asked me to critique it."
"R-Rated. Oh, my. Well. They got the right actress to do it."
"Yeah. But I think I helped make it better."
"Good. How about you? Are you okay? You've been stuck at that desk all day."
"I'll manage. While I have been inactive all day, physically, I don't think I'll have any difficulty getting to sleep tonight. But you can help with an intense sex session with me."
"I'll be happy to help. Should I invite Cindy?"
"If you want. She can help wear me down."
"In that case, I'll let her know." He texted her, and she arrived a few minutes later.
"Cindy, we're going to bed shortly. Care to join us for a bit?"
"I would be happy to. How soon will you be heading up?"
I shrugged, so Filipe replied, "Half an hour. Good?"
"Yes, sir. Will there be anything else?"
We both shook our heads, so she nodded and left. As I was still naked, Filipe leaned into me and sucked on a nipple while fingering me. I just held him close and relaxed. Twenty minutes later, I came, and we headed to our bedroom. Filipe had just finished undressing when Cindy arrived, already nude.
"Cindy, since Becky Sue hasn't had much exercise today, we want to give her a workout."
"Going to make up for all that desk work, huh? In that case, she goes in the middle. On your back, woman!"
I meekly laid down in the center, trying to hide my smile. Cindy and I occasionally like to play dominant, and today, she decided to be dominant, and I would be her sub. I didn't yet know if Filipe was going to be Cindy's toy to use on me, or if he would be the second dominant. I didn't think he knew yet, either. Cindy just climbed onto and sat on my face, and leaned forward to play with my upper breasts. I felt her signal to Filipe, who spread my legs and impaled me, playing with my lower breasts. I returned the favor and played with Cindy's breasts while sticking my tongue deep into her vagina. The two of them began kissing and tonguing each other.
After we all came that first time, we started with another position, but it needed much more action on my part. For the next three hours, they did their best to wear me out. They didn't stand a chance, and knew it, but we had fun, and it did help me get to sleep later, between the two of them.
In the morning, they were both still there, so I carefully extricated myself before heading out to the pool. Filipe joined me later, saying Cindy went back to her home after they woke up. Since she lived on the property, it didn't take her long to get there. After breakfast, Filipe left to be on set for his part. Sometimes I envy him, so little makeup required, and so easy to fit in any plot, he routinely got roles in a lot more films than I did. The main downside was, he didn't get as many leading or big roles as I did. Still, he was happy with it, so I was happy with it.
A few days later, Jack asked me to meet with the scriptwriter over the weekend. When I got there, it was just the two of us. "Hi there, I'm Eddie."
"Hello, I'm Becky Sue. Jack said you wanted to see me?"
"Yes. He passed along your critique. I don't agree with everything, but wow, you got some great ideas."
"I take it you want to talk about the script?"
"Yes. For the ones I don't agree with, I want to hear why you don't like it. For some of the others, I want to discuss how to expand it a bit with some ideas I chose not to include. I figure you can tweak things to make the ideas work seamlessly if they have any merit."
"Sounds like you're ready to get to work. I'm happy to help."
We spent several hours going over the script, discussing our disagreements, and refining his additional ideas to make them work. In the end, the script was a lot longer. I told him that the director or producer may not want to make it as long as he has made it. We spent another twenty minutes mapping out a number of scenes that were less important to the story, and making a list for the director, of the recommended order of cutting. He wasn't sure if it was a good idea, but I told him that while the script is his, someone else must realize it, and they would likely want to trim it. By supplying a list, there was a better chance that the cuts made would have less effect on the story.
In the end, Eddie sent off the revised and fatter script. I didn't hear anything more for a month. Then I got a call to meet with the producer, director, and some others for a planning meeting. The main concern was the length of the script. While making an extended-length film was acceptable, the effects budget would be increased a lot. So I told Jack that the latest version of my second pair of arms would need far-less effect work, as they had a much better control system. They would move far more realistically, and would not need a second take to complete.
The director was pushing to use the entire script, and the producer wanted to, but was concerned with the cost. I suggested using Eddie's list to determine the shoot order, and that if and when the money would start to run out, we just wouldn't shoot the further scenes. In the end, they decided to go with my idea.